Clothing— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Make the sentence more concise and correct grammar (remove extra 'it's' and fix 'helps'). Add one brief specific example to enrich content. Keep within 3–4 short sentences and use a linking word to connect ideas.

예시: I usually prefer simple, casual clothes because they’re comfortable and let me move around easily. For example, I often wear a cotton hoodie and jeans when I run errands or meet friends.

제안: Correct minor grammar (change 'it's' to 'they're' or 'they are') and vary vocabulary (use 'versatile' plus a brief reason). Use a linking word to connect the general preference and examples.

예시: I definitely prefer comfortable, casual clothes because they’re more versatile for everyday life. For instance, I can wear sneakers and a T-shirt both when shopping and when walking in the park.

제안: Combine short sentences for fluency and replace vague words like 'a lot' with more precise language. Add a linking word to show reason and a specific example of a favorite style or design.

예시: Absolutely — I enjoy wearing T-shirts, especially printed ones. I own several striped and graphic T-shirts because they’re easy to match with jeans or shorts for a casual look.

제안: Fix grammar and word choice ('whatever' → 'what', remove 'a like'). Shorten and make more natural: give a reason and one linked example. Avoid informal phrasing like 'waste of time' without softening language.

예시: Not really. I usually pick whatever is clean and convenient, especially in the morning, because I prefer to save time for other tasks. For example, I often grab the nearest T-shirt and jeans when I’m in a hurry.

제안: Combine ideas into two clear sentences, remove repetition ('because' used twice). Provide a brief explanation and link between work uniform and weekend choices; give a specific example about the uniform or weekend outfit.

예시: No, I don’t. At work I wear a uniform, and outside work I usually stick to the same casual outfits since I don’t buy new clothes often because they’re expensive. For weekends I typically wear a polo shirt and jeans.

제안: Use correct grammar ('they are' or 'it's' → 'they’re' and 'other clothes' not 'another clothes'). Add a linking word and a specific reason or example to show choice and variety.

예시: I prefer plain colours like black and white because they’re easy to mix and match. For example, a white T-shirt can go with almost any jacket or pair of trousers.

× I usually prefer wearing simple casual clothes because I feel more comfortable and it's helps me move around easily.

✓ I usually prefer wearing simple casual clothes because I feel more comfortable and it helps me move around easily.

The phrase 'it's helps' incorrectly combines the contraction 'it's' (it is) with the verb 'helps'. Use the subject 'it' with the singular verb 'helps' without contraction. Suggestion: remove the contraction and write 'it helps' to maintain correct subject-verb form and clarity.

× I definitely prefer comfortable and casual clothes because it's more versatile for everyday life, for example for going shopping or walking.

✓ I definitely prefer comfortable and casual clothes because they're more versatile for everyday life, for example for going shopping or walking.

The subject refers to 'comfortable and casual clothes' (plural). Using 'it's' (it is) is incorrect for a plural subject. Use 'they're' (they are) or 'they are' to match plural. Suggestion: change 'it's' to 'they're' to ensure subject-verb agreement in number.

× I have a lot of T-shirts with different designs and colors because it is very easy to match, especially with jeans or shorts.

✓ I have a lot of T-shirts with different designs and colors because they are very easy to match, especially with jeans or shorts.

The pronoun 'it' refers back to 'T-shirts', which is plural, so 'it is' is incorrect. Use the plural pronoun 'they' with 'are'. Suggestion: replace 'it is' with 'they are' to agree in number.

× I usually choose the clothes whatever is clean and convenient, especially in the morning because choosing clothes is a like waste of time for me.

✓ I usually choose whatever clothes are clean and convenient, especially in the morning, because choosing clothes is a waste of time for me.

The original has word order and article problems: 'choose the clothes whatever is clean' is awkward; 'whatever clothes are clean' is natural. 'a like waste of time' is ungrammatical—use 'a waste of time' or 'like a waste of time' but here 'a waste of time' is correct. Also 'clothes' is plural so use 'are'. Suggestion: reorder to 'choose whatever clothes are clean' and remove the extra word 'like'.

× No, I don't wear different styles of clothes because at work I wear uniform. Apart from work I wear the same things because I don't buy a lot of clothes because it is very expensive.

✓ No, I don't wear different styles of clothes because at work I wear a uniform. Apart from work, I wear the same things because I don't buy many clothes because they are very expensive.

'Wear uniform' needs an article: use 'a uniform' or 'my uniform' depending on meaning. Also 'a lot of clothes' is acceptable but when negated use 'many clothes'. Finally 'it is very expensive' refers to 'clothes' (plural), so use 'they are'. Suggestions: add the article before 'uniform', use 'many clothes' for negative quantity, and make the pronoun plural: 'they are very expensive'.

× I like plain colors like black or white because it's easier to match with another clothes.

✓ I like plain colors like black or white because they're easier to match with other clothes.

Problems: 'it's' refers to plural 'colors', so use 'they're'. 'Another clothes' is incorrect because 'another' is used with singular nouns; use 'other clothes' for plural. Suggestion: change 'it's' to 'they're' and 'another clothes' to 'other clothes'.