Clothing— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Make the answer more concise and correct grammar. Start with a clear topic sentence, then add a specific reason and a brief example. Avoid minor grammar mistakes (e.g., "put too many clothes on it" → "wear too many clothes").

예시: I prefer comfortable clothes. Because the weather in my country is very humid, lightweight and breathable fabrics like cotton keep me cool. For example, I often wear loose linen shirts and shorts when I go out during the day.

제안: Give a direct clear statement then explain with a specific context. Remove fillers like "umm," and use natural phrasing for percentages. Add a short example of occasions for smart clothes.

예시: I prefer casual clothes about 70% of the time and smart clothes 30% of the time. I dress casually for everyday activities like running errands, but I wear smart clothes for special occasions, such as a dinner date or a job interview.

제안: Make the reason clearer and correct grammar and word choice ("T-shirt" plural and verb agreement). Explain what you wear instead and give a brief example. Keep it within 2–3 sentences.

예시: I used to wear T-shirts a lot, but now I avoid them because they look too plain and are hard to layer. Instead, I prefer lightweight shirts or casual blouses that I can pair with a jacket when needed.

제안: Start with a concise answer and give a specific reason and routine. Reduce repetition and correct grammar ("spend" instead of "spent" structure). Mention an example of what you check when choosing clothes.

예시: Yes, I spend quite a bit of time choosing clothes because I want to look presentable. For example, I check how items match in color and fit, and I try outfits on before leaving to make sure everything looks right.

제안: Give a clearer contrast between weekdays and weekends with specific details and correct phrasing. Replace vague phrases like "look normal" and "show myself to others." Provide concrete examples of workplace attire versus weekend outfits.

예시: Yes, I dress differently. On weekdays I wear practical work clothes like smart-casual shirts and trousers, while on weekends I choose more stylish and relaxed outfits, such as jeans with a nice jacket, for meeting friends.

제안: Give a direct answer and explain why you prefer those colours with a short detail. Correct grammar ("colours" plural, "colours like" and "to suit me" phrasing).

예시: I don't have a single favourite colour, but I usually choose neutral colours like white, black and navy because they are easy to match and look neat for most occasions.

× I prefer to wear more comfortable clothes because in my country the weather is so humid that I can't put too many clothes on it.

✓ I prefer to wear more comfortable clothes because in my country the weather is so humid that I can't wear too many clothes.

The preposition 'on' after 'put too many clothes' is incorrect; we say 'wear clothes' not 'put clothes on it' in this context. Remove 'on it' and use 'wear'. Also 'too many clothes' with 'wear' is natural here.

× I would say it's more like 70% versus 30% on each option.

✓ I would say it's more like 70% for casual clothes and 30% for smart clothes.

The original sentence uses an awkward structure '70% versus 30% on each option'. Rephrase to specify what percentages refer to: '70% for casual clothes and 30% for smart clothes.' This makes the sentence clear and grammatically correct.

× I would wear umm casual clothes on my normal day and the 30% of smart clothes on specific days.

✓ I would wear casual clothes on normal days and smart clothes on specific days.

Use plural 'days' for habitual actions and remove 'the' before '30% of smart clothes' because the percentage phrasing is unnecessary. Also delete filler 'umm'. The preposition 'on' is fine but match plurality: 'on normal days'.

× Like umm a dating with friends.

✓ For example, going on a date or meeting friends.

The phrase 'a dating with friends' is ungrammatical. Use 'going on a date' for romantic outings or 'meeting friends' for casual gatherings. Remove 'umm' and choose the appropriate noun phrase.

× I used to wear T-shirts a lot, but nowadays I choose to avoid T-shirt because it just give a simple look and I cannot actually layering it.

✓ I used to wear T-shirts a lot, but nowadays I choose to avoid T-shirts because they just give a simple look and I cannot really layer them.

Several issues: 'T-shirt' should be plural 'T-shirts' for general reference (singular/plural issue), 'give' must agree with plural subject so 'they give' (subject-verb agreement), 'cannot actually layering' is incorrect: use 'cannot really layer them' — use base verb 'layer' after 'cannot' and correct pronoun 'them' for T-shirts.

× Yes, I do spend a lot of time choosing clothes because I don't want to look terrible in front of other people.

✓ Yes, I do spend a lot of time choosing clothes because I don't want to look terrible in front of other people.

This sentence is grammatically acceptable; no correction needed. It correctly uses present simple emphatic form 'do spend' and negative 'don't want'. Included for completeness but unchanged.

× So these days I try to focus on what I'm wearing out and then that just spend a lot of time.

✓ These days I try to focus on what I'm wearing and that takes a lot of time.

'Wearing out' is wrong in this context (means exhausted). Use 'wearing'. 'That just spend a lot of time' is ungrammatical: use 'that takes a lot of time.' Match subject 'that' with verb 'takes.' Remove 'just' or keep for emphasis.

× I look normal on my weekdays because that's just for work, I don't want to show myself to others and on weekends I would just hang out around and then choose something good to look and try to match all the possible.

✓ I dress normally on weekdays because that's just for work; I don't want to stand out. On weekends I just hang out and choose something nice to wear and try to match as much as possible.

Multiple problems: 'look normal' is better as 'dress normally' (word choice). 'Show myself to others' is unnatural; use 'stand out.' 'Hang out around' is redundant; 'hang out' suffices. 'Choose something good to look' is ungrammatical — use 'choose something nice to wear.' 'Try to match all the possible' is unclear; use 'try to match as much as possible.' Sentence split into two for clarity.

× I would say I don't have a specific preference but I choose more casual color like white, black or blue to match myself.

✓ I would say I don't have a specific preference, but I choose more casual colors like white, black, or blue to suit me.

'Color' should be plural 'colors' when listing examples. 'To match myself' is awkward; use 'to suit me' or 'to match my style.' Add commas and pluralize items for correct listing.