Clothing— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Be more concise and correct grammar. Start with a clear topic sentence, then give one or two specific supporting details using linking words. Reduce fillers (umm, uh) and correct common errors (everyday → every day; easy to matching → easy to match).

예시: I usually wear simple, basic clothes. For example, I mostly choose black and white outfits because they are easy to match and make it quick to decide what to wear for the day.

제안: Answer directly then give a clear reason and one example. Avoid unclear words (coastal?/refer) and fix tense/word choice. Use linking words like "because" or "but" to connect ideas.

예시: It depends on the day, but I generally prefer comfortable, casual clothes because I often have many activities. For instance, on busy days I wear sneakers and a T-shirt so I can move easily.

제안: Be precise and correct vocabulary (T-shirt, casual clothes). Give one or two specific reasons and an example. Avoid repetition and filler words.

예시: Yes, I like wearing T-shirts because they are casual and comfortable. For example, I often wear a T-shirt and jeans when I go to school or hang out with friends because it’s simple and easy to move in.

제안: Give a direct topic sentence then a contrasting detail using linking words (but, however). Correct grammar (I don’t usually spend much time; important people). Provide a specific example of an event when you plan more carefully.

예시: I don’t usually spend much time choosing clothes, but I do plan when I have an important event. For example, before a job interview I pick a smart outfit carefully, while on normal days I quickly choose something casual for school.

제안: Answer directly and give a concise reason with one example. Use correct comparisons (weekdays vs weekends) and avoid fillers. Use linking words like "because" and "for example."

예시: Not really, because my style is quite simple most of the time. For example, I usually wear basic jeans and a T-shirt both on weekdays and weekends.

제안: Start with a clear statement of your preference, then give a reason and a short example. Fix vocabulary and grammar (busy, every day, both colors are easy to match). Avoid unnecessary repetition.

예시: I prefer black and white clothing because they are easy to match and look neat. For instance, when I’m busy for work or school I choose a black shirt or white top so I don’t have to spend time deciding what to wear.

× Well, umm, actually I'm like kind of basic person.

✓ Well, umm, actually I'm kind of a basic person.

Missing the indefinite article 'a' before 'basic person' and unnecessary filler 'like'. Add 'a' and remove 'like' for correct adjective use and natural phrasing.

× So the main color I wear everyday is umm, the black and white because, uh, I think both colors are easy to matching with each other.

✓ So the main colors I wear every day are black and white because I think both colors are easy to match with each other.

Plural 'colors' and 'are' needed for subject-verb agreement; 'everyday' (adjective) should be 'every day' (adverb phrase). Use base verb 'match' after 'easy to' rather than 'matching'. Removed filler words for clarity.

× And then and it is to choose the outfit for a day.

✓ And then it's easy to choose an outfit for the day.

Sentence was ungrammatical and unclear. Use contraction 'it's' and change to 'easy to choose an outfit for the day' for correct structure and natural expression.

× However, it depends on the day because someday I refer comfortable clothes because I need to do many activities.

✓ However, it depends on the day because sometimes I prefer comfortable clothes when I need to do many activities.

Use 'sometimes' instead of 'someday'; 'prefer' not 'refer'; replace second 'because' with 'when' to avoid repetition and create correct clause linking.

× So hope you feel comfortable or someday I just like wear coastal clothes and yeah, that's it.

✓ So I hope I feel comfortable, or sometimes I just like to wear casual clothes, and that's it.

Pronoun and subject missing ('I hope'); 'coastal' is incorrect, should be 'casual'; add 'to' with 'like to wear'. Clarified meaning and corrected pronoun use.

× Yes, of course, because this is like the coastal clothes for everyone.

✓ Yes, of course, because these are casual clothes for everyone.

Use plural 'these are' for 'clothes'; 'coastal' incorrect adjective, use 'casual'. Removed filler 'like' for clarity.

× So I wear teasers every day in every morning, forward to school or hang out with my friends.

✓ So I wear T-shirts every morning when I go to school or hang out with my friends.

Correct noun is 'T-shirts' and 'every morning' is the proper adverbial phrase; 'in every morning' and 'forward to school' are incorrect. Use 'when I go to school' for clarity.

× So it's comfortable and it's really like easy to wear.

✓ So it's comfortable and really easy to wear.

Remove redundant 'it's' and filler 'like' to make the sentence concise and grammatically correct.

× So I love Teaser.

✓ So I love T-shirts.

Correct noun 'T-shirts' instead of 'Teaser'. Capitalization fixed and plural used for general preference.

× I'm not really I can spend a lot of time to choose the best of it when I go for event or I have, uh, something need to meet, uh, the important people.

✓ Not really; I can spend a lot of time choosing the best outfit when I go to an event or when I need to meet important people.

Original had fragmented structure and wrong infinitive. Use gerund 'choosing' after 'spend time', add articles 'an' and 'to' and restructure clauses for clarity.

× So and basically daily life, I just quickly choose random outfit for to school or somewhere.

✓ Basically in daily life, I just quickly choose a random outfit for school or elsewhere.

Add preposition 'in' before 'daily life'; use 'a random outfit' with article; 'for to school' is incorrect—use 'for school' or 'to go to school'; 'somewhere' changed to 'elsewhere' for idiomatic use.

× Uh, I think no, because my style kind of same and I usually, uh, like choose the basic after even is it on weekend?

✓ Uh, I don't think so, because my style is kind of the same and I usually choose basic clothes even on weekends.

Use negative 'I don't think so'; add verb 'is' for 'my style is kind of the same'; reorder to 'choose basic clothes even on weekends' for correct tense and word order.

× So I think this time, uh, on weekday in weekend kind of same.

✓ So I think weekdays and weekends are kind of the same for me.

Use plural 'weekdays and weekends' and verb 'are' for subject-verb agreement; reorder for natural expression.

× The alliances before I really, umm, am a bus.

✓ Before I continue, I am really a busy person.

Original is unclear and contains wrong words. Replace with 'I am really a busy person' to convey intended meaning; 'Before I continue' clarifies discourse.

× So the main color I wear everyday and for my office it's just black and white.

✓ So the main colors I wear every day, and for my office, are just black and white.

Use plural 'colors' and verb 'are' for agreement; 'every day' as two words; add commas for clarity.

× Uh, because I think, uh, both 2 color are easily to to affect or is like the basic 1.

✓ Because I think both colors are easy to match and are like the basic ones.

'Both colors' plural and 'are'; 'easy to match' is correct phrase instead of 'easily to affect'; 'basic ones' is correct plural noun phrase. Removed fillers and numeric '2'.