Clothing— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Be concise, avoid filler words, correct incorrect words, and give a clear topic sentence followed by one or two specific details. Use linking words to connect ideas and limit to 3–4 sentences.

예시: I prefer comfortable clothes, such as shirts, jeans, and sometimes shorts. I choose these because they allow me to move freely when I’m at home or out running errands. For example, I like breathable cotton shirts because they keep me cool and comfortable all day.

제안: Start with a direct answer, remove hesitations and repetition, give a clear reason and one brief example. Use a linking word like 'because' to connect your reason.

예시: I usually prefer casual clothes because they are more practical for daily activities. For instance, when I work from home I wear jeans and a shirt so I can move comfortably and feel relaxed.

제안: Answer directly (yes/no) then explain briefly with clear vocabulary. Avoid contradictory statements (T-shirts for professional settings is odd). Keep it to 2–3 sentences and correct grammar (e.g., 'comfortable' not 'comforts').

예시: Not really; I prefer shirts because they look neater and feel more practical for work. I find shirts more comfortable for meetings, while I wear T‑shirts only at home or for casual outings.

제안: Give a concise direct answer, avoid excessive hesitations and long winding explanations. Describe your routine clearly with one linking phrase like 'usually' or 'generally' and one brief detail about why.

예시: Not really. I usually pick the clothes that are easiest to reach in my wardrobe because I get dressed quickly in the morning. Generally I choose my most comfortable items so I don’t have to think much about outfits.

제안: Answer directly and give a clear comparison. Remove fillers and clarify any exceptions (e.g., special occasions). Use linking words like 'however' or 'only' to explain differences.

예시: Not really; I wear similar casual clothes on both weekdays and weekends because my routine is flexible. However, I wear smarter clothes occasionally for meetings or events on weekends.

제안: Answer clearly and confidently, avoid fillers, and explain why you prefer those colours with a specific effect or example. Use one linking word such as 'because' or 'so'.

예시: I prefer bright colours such as pink, purple and yellow because they make me feel cheerful. For example, wearing a yellow shirt lifts my mood on dull days and helps me feel more energetic.

× I'm more into clothes that are most comfortable when wearing, so I often go with uh, shirts and T-shirts and uh, jeans or sometimes shorts, uh pants, trousers.

✓ I'm more into clothes that are most comfortable to wear, so I often go with shirts, T-shirts, jeans, sometimes shorts or trousers.

The phrase 'comfortable when wearing' incorrectly uses the present participle 'wearing' without an object; the correct collocation is 'comfortable to wear.' Also unnecessary filler words and list punctuation were cleaned up for clarity. Suggestion: Use 'comfortable to wear' for describing clothing comfort and list items with commas.

× As long as they are comfortable for me, I wear a goat for them.

✓ As long as they are comfortable for me, I choose to wear them.

The sentence uses 'wear a goat for them,' which is nonsensical and likely a mispronunciation or wrong word choice. 'Them' should refer back to 'clothes' and the verb should be 'wear' or 'choose to wear.' Suggestion: Use 'wear them' or 'choose to wear them' to refer to clothes.

× Well, most of the time I'm more into casual clothes because it is easy for me to do any activities that I really want and also I don't really have to go out to to work.

✓ Well, most of the time I'm more into casual clothes because they make it easy for me to do the activities I want, and I don't usually have to go out to work.

Subject reference and verb forms were inconsistent: 'it is easy' should refer to 'casual clothes' (plural) so 'they make it easy' is appropriate. 'any activities that I really want' is awkward; 'the activities I want' is clearer. Duplicate 'to' removed and 'don't really have to' improved to 'don't usually have to' for naturalness. Suggestion: Ensure subject and verb agree in number and use concise phrasing.

× I often stay at home more but sometimes in a professional settings I do go with.

✓ I often stay at home, but sometimes in professional settings I dress more formally.

The original ends abruptly with 'I do go with,' which is incomplete. 'Settings' is plural so 'a professional settings' is incorrect. The idea likely intended is that in professional settings the student wears different clothes; 'dress more formally' conveys this. Suggestion: Complete the clause by specifying the action (dress more formally) and match singular/plural for 'settings.'

× Well, not really, I'm more into shirts because they are more physical and practical.

✓ Well, not really. I'm more into shirts because they are more practical and comfortable.

'More physical' is not a typical description for shirts—likely intended 'comfortable' or 'practical.' Also original had comma splice; separating into sentences improves clarity. Suggestion: Use appropriate adjectives for clothing qualities ('practical', 'comfortable').

× T-shirts are sometimes not really that convenient for me and it's not uh, it doesn't offers as much comforts as the shirts do.

✓ T-shirts are sometimes not that convenient for me and they don't offer as much comfort as shirts do.

There are multiple issues: 'it's not uh, it doesn't offers' mixes subjects and uses wrong verb form 'offers' instead of 'offer.' 'Comforts' should be uncountable 'comfort.' Also redundant 'the shirts' changed to 'shirts.' Suggestion: Ensure subject matches verb (they don't offer) and use uncountable noun 'comfort'.

× So I only wear T-shirts when I go to professional settings. Where?

✓ So I only wear T-shirts when I go to informal settings, not professional ones.

The content is contradictory: earlier he said he prefers shirts for professional settings but here says he wears T-shirts when he goes to professional settings. Likely intended to say 'informal.' Also 'Where?' is a fragment and unclear. Suggestion: Make sentences consistent and avoid fragments; clarify which settings suit T-shirts.

× I often go with the ones that I'm most comfortable with and they are, uh, the things that I often put right, uh, umm, in front of my eyes whenever I open my wardrobe and just, uh, take the one that I, I found, I find firstly and I take them to wear on a daily basis.

✓ I often choose the ones I'm most comfortable with; they are usually the items I put at eye level in my wardrobe, so when I open it I take the first thing I see to wear.

Original contains many fillers and awkward 'found, I find firstly' and incorrect pronoun use ('the one... I take them'). Present participle 'wearing' issues earlier; here needed concise present simple phrasing. 'Put right in front of my eyes' replaced with 'put at eye level.' Suggestion: Remove fillers, use clear sequence words, and match singular/plural pronouns.

× Well, my working schedule is in, uh, separated from weekdays and weekends, so there aren't many, too many differences between what I choose to wear during weekdays and weekends.

✓ Well, my work schedule is separated between weekdays and weekends, so there aren't many differences between what I choose to wear on weekdays and weekends.

'Is in, separated from' is awkward; use 'is separated between' or 'differs between.' 'During weekdays and weekends' is acceptable but 'on weekdays and weekends' is more natural. Suggestion: Use 'on weekdays' and 'on weekends' and a clearer verb for separation.

× Uh, I often go with the same style both, uh, Monday, whether it's Mondays or whether it's, uh, Sundays only when I, uh.

✓ I often wear the same style both on weekdays and weekends, except on special occasions.

Original is fragmented, repeats 'Monday/Mondays/Sundays' confusingly and ends incomplete. Clarified intent: same style generally, with exceptions. Suggestion: Avoid repetition and complete the thought by specifying exceptions.

× Well, umm, generally I'm, uh, more into clothes with brighter colors like pink, uh, purple, uh, yellow.

✓ Well, generally I'm more into clothes with brighter colors like pink, purple, and yellow.

Main issue is filler words and punctuation; 'brighter colors' is fine but list needs commas and 'and' before last item. Suggestion: Remove fillers and use proper list punctuation.

× Things like that would uh, help really positive energy and umm, making me happy when wearing them.

✓ Things like that help create positive energy and make me happy when I wear them.

'Help really positive energy' is ungrammatical; use 'help create positive energy.' 'Making me happy when wearing them' needs subject: 'make me happy when I wear them.' Suggestion: Use appropriate verb phrases ('create positive energy') and include subjects for participial clauses.