Clothing— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Be more fluent and clear: remove fillers, correct vocabulary (e.g., 'investment clothes' unclear; say 'western clothes'), and give a concise reason with one or two specific details. Use one topic sentence and one supporting sentence, linked logically.

예시: I prefer Western clothes to traditional clothes. For example, T-shirts and jeans come in many styles and are much cooler and more comfortable in hot weather, so I wear them most days.

제안: Improve variety and fluency: avoid repeating 'comfortable', add a linking phrase and a brief reason or exception to show range. Keep it within 3–4 sentences.

예시: I usually choose comfortable, casual clothes such as T-shirts and trousers because they let me move freely. However, I do wear smart clothes for interviews or special events when I need to look more professional.

제안: Reduce repetition and combine short sentences into a coherent response using linking words. Give one specific example of when you wear T-shirts to make it more concrete.

예시: Yes, I like wearing T-shirts because they are comfortable and allow me to move freely. For example, I often wear a T-shirt when I study or go out with friends since comfort is my priority.

제안: Clarify your idea and complete the sentence: explain why you take time (e.g., unique style, matching colors). Use linking words and avoid broken sentences. Provide a clear topic sentence and one supporting reason.

예시: Yes, I spend quite a lot of time choosing clothes because I prefer a unique style and I want my outfits to match well. For instance, I often try several combinations to make sure the colors and accessories look right.

제안: Finish sentences and add a linking phrase to contrast weekdays and weekends. Give a brief example of a weekday and weekend outfit to be specific.

예시: Yes, I wear different styles: on weekdays I usually wear comfortable, loose clothes like a T-shirt and chinos for work or classes. On weekends I dress up more stylishly, for example wearing a smart shirt and jeans when I go out with friends.

제안: Use parallel structure and clearer phrasing: list colours smoothly and explain why they suit you. Avoid filler words and minor grammar errors.

예시: I like black and white because they are versatile, and I also wear baby pink sometimes since it suits my skin tone and brightens my outfits.

× I, I like Western clothes instead of traditional clothes because, uh, investment clothes, we have many varieties and uh, we can easily wear in summers and traditional clothes like soot saree which is not comfortable in summer.

✓ I like Western clothes instead of traditional clothes because Western clothing comes in many styles and is easier to wear in summer; traditional garments like sarees are not comfortable in hot weather.

The original sentence uses the word 'investment' incorrectly and has unclear phrasing and redundancy. Replace 'investment clothes' with 'Western clothing' and reorganize the sentence for clarity. Use plural/singular consistently and add a clear reason phrase. Ensure parallel structure ('Western clothing comes in many styles and is easier to wear in summer'). Use a semicolon or separate clauses to avoid run-on sentences.

× I prefer to wear comfortable clothes like T-shirt and trousers which make me comfortable in every phase.

✓ I prefer to wear comfortable clothes like T-shirts and trousers that make me comfortable at all times.

Use plural 'T-shirts' to match general reference (Grammar problem type 1: singular and plural). Use 'that' for defining relative clause. 'In every phase' is awkward; replace with 'at all times' or 'throughout the day' to fit present habitual meaning.

× Yes, I like wearing T-shirts because T-shirts are very comfortable. And they let me move freely and feel relaxed during the day. And it is everyday activity. Comfort is my priority.

✓ Yes, I like wearing T-shirts because they are very comfortable and allow me to move freely and feel relaxed during the day. Wearing comfortable clothes is part of my daily routine; comfort is my priority.

Avoid repeating 'T-shirts' unnecessarily; use pronoun 'they'. 'It is everyday activity' is ungrammatical; replace with 'Wearing comfortable clothes is part of my daily routine' to express habitual action. Combine short sentences to improve flow and coherence.

× Yes, I spend a lot of time. Choosing clothes because my choice was very My choice is very different and I want that I.

✓ Yes, I spend a lot of time choosing clothes because my tastes are different and I want to find the right outfit.

Original contains fragments and repetition. Combine 'I spend a lot of time choosing clothes' into one sentence. Replace 'my choice was very My choice is very different and I want that I' with clear phrase 'my tastes are different and I want to find the right outfit.' This fixes sentence fragments and unclear pronoun use.

× Yes, when we go on weekends, I wear stylish clothes. On weekdays I wear comfortable and loose clothes, which makes me comfortable and.

✓ Yes, on weekends I wear stylish clothes. On weekdays I wear comfortable, loose clothes that make me feel at ease.

Avoid mixing 'we' and 'I'; keep subject consistent. Remove trailing 'and' and use 'that make me feel at ease' for a complete clause. Use comma between 'comfortable' and 'loose' for coordinate adjectives (Grammar problem type 18: order of adjectives is acceptable here). Ensure sentences are complete.

× Oh I like black, white and do some baby pink color which suits on me very well.

✓ Oh, I like black, white, and baby pink; these colours suit me very well.

Original has incorrect verb phrase 'do some baby pink color' and wrong preposition 'suits on me'. Use list with commas and 'and' before last item, then a clause 'these colours suit me very well.' Use 'suit me' rather than 'suit on me' and use 'colours' plural for multiple items.