Clothing— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Improve clarity, grammar and vocabulary. Start with a clear topic sentence, correct noun errors (course → clothes), and avoid filler words. Give one or two specific supporting details using linking words. Keep it within 2–4 sentences.

예시: I prefer wearing T-shirts because they are comfortable and versatile. For example, I often choose cotton T-shirts for daily wear since they are soft and breathable, so I can wear them all day without feeling hot.

제안: Correct grammar and word choice, and finish thoughts fully. Use linking words (for example, because, so) and specific examples. Avoid invented words (AT) and unfinished sentences. Limit to 3–4 concise sentences.

예시: I prefer comfortable, casual clothes because they allow me to move freely and feel relaxed. For example, I usually wear jeans and cotton T-shirts when I meet friends or walk around the city because they are practical and suit my everyday activities.

제안: Focus on accurate vocabulary and pronunciation words in writing: replace incorrect words (cashews, shoot, five big bits) with correct ones (comfortable, choose, fabrics, breathable). Use one supporting reason with a clear linking word. Keep it concise.

예시: Yes, I do. I often choose T-shirts because they are comfortable and fit well. I wear lightweight cotton T-shirts on hot days because they are breathable and dry quickly, which helps me stay cool.

제안: Correct sentence structure and word order. Start with a clear topic sentence: say you usually don't spend much time, but you prepare for special events. Use specific examples and correct vocabulary (occasion, choose, accessories). Keep to 2–3 sentences.

예시: I don't spend much time choosing clothes for everyday occasions, because I prefer simple outfits. However, for special events like weddings I take more time to choose a suit or dress and matching accessories so I feel appropriate and confident.

제안: Use clear contrasting structure (On weekdays... On weekends...). Correct verbs and nouns (read → wear; wait → wear; calls → clothes). Provide concise specific examples and linking words (while, whereas).

예시: Yes, I wear different styles. On weekdays I wear smart-casual clothes for work, such as chinos and shirts, whereas at the weekend I prefer relaxed outfits like jeans and T-shirts when I meet friends.

제안: State your preference directly and use correct color words. Avoid repetition and unclear phrases (Black Horse?). Give a reason why you choose these colors and a brief example of pairing items. Keep it within 2–3 sentences.

예시: I prefer black and white because they are easy to match with other items. For example, I often wear a black T-shirt with jeans and a white jacket, which makes it quick to put together an outfit for work or going out.

× My favorite course I like to wear is T-shirt.

✓ My favorite clothing to wear is a T-shirt.

The original sentence has incorrect word choice ('course' instead of 'clothes') and awkward structure. This is a sentence structure error: the noun should be 'clothes' or 'clothing' and the phrase 'I like to wear' is redundant when saying 'My favorite clothing to wear'. Use 'a T-shirt' with the article 'a'. Suggestion: replace incorrect words and reorder to 'My favorite clothing to wear is a T-shirt.'

× Is easy to use and uh, texture is good.

✓ It is easy to wear and the texture is good.

Missing subject and wrong verb choice ('use' instead of 'wear') create a sentence structure error. Add the subject 'It' and use 'wear'. Also include 'the' before 'texture' to refer to a specific property. Suggestion: say 'It is easy to wear and the texture is good.'

× You can wear every day.

✓ You can wear it every day.

The verb phrase lacks an object; 'wear' needs something to be worn. Add the pronoun 'it' to agree with 'T-shirt'. This fixes subject-verb-object structure. Suggestion: 'You can wear it every day.'

× I definitely prefer comfortable casual clothes because they let me move really and make me feel relaxed.

✓ I definitely prefer comfortable, casual clothes because they let me move easily and make me feel relaxed.

The adverb 'really' is incorrectly used to modify 'move'; 'easily' is the correct adverb. Also a comma is needed between coordinate adjectives 'comfortable' and 'casual'. Suggestion: use 'easily' and add a comma: 'comfortable, casual clothes'.

× For example, I usually wear jeans and AT shirts when I made friends or walk around the city since they are pretty cool and suit my everyday activities.

✓ For example, I usually wear jeans and T-shirts when I meet friends or walk around the city, since they are pretty cool and suit my everyday activities.

Multiple errors: 'AT shirts' is likely 'T-shirts'; tense 'made friends' is wrong — use present 'meet friends'; missing comma before 'since'. This is sentence structure and tense issues; corrected to maintain present habitual meaning. Suggestion: 'jeans and T-shirts when I meet friends or walk around the city, since...'.

× Although I use my clothes for.

✓ (Remove the fragment)

This is a sentence fragment lacking a main clause and object; it should be removed or completed. It does not convey a complete idea. Suggestion: delete the fragment or complete it, e.g. 'Although I care about my clothes.'

× I often wear T-shirts because they are comfortable cashews and they fit me well.

✓ I often wear T-shirts because they are comfortable and they fit me well.

'Cashews' is an incorrect word likely resulting from mispronunciation; it should be the adverb/adjective 'comfortable'. This is incorrect word choice (adjective use). Suggestion: replace with 'comfortable'.

× I usually shoot custom ones on hot days because the five big bits and dry quickly which creeps my cool, keep me cool.

✓ I usually choose cotton ones on hot days because they are lightweight and dry quickly, which keeps me cool.

Many errors: 'shoot' should be 'choose'; 'custom' likely 'cotton'; 'the five big bits' is unclear and replaced with 'lightweight'; 'creeps my cool' incorrect; use 'keeps me cool'. This corrects word choice, verb form, and sentence flow. Suggestion: 'choose cotton ones... because they are lightweight and dry quickly, which keeps me cool.'

× Is Japan OCC occasion for everyday where I usually don't spend much time choosing course, but for special events I take more care deciding what to wear so I took appropriate and feel confident.

✓ For everyday occasions I usually don't spend much time choosing clothes, but for special events I take more care deciding what to wear so I feel appropriate and confident.

This sentence has many structure and word choice errors: missing subject ('Is'), garbled words ('Japan OCC', 'course'), wrong tense 'took', and awkward final phrase. Rephrase to present habitual meaning and correct nouns/verbs. Suggestion: 'For everyday occasions I usually don't spend much time choosing clothes, but for special events I take more care deciding what to wear so I feel appropriate and confident.'

× For example, when I think a wedding, I often spend time using a suit or dress and machine accessory to make sure.

✓ For example, when I attend a wedding, I often spend time choosing a suit or dress and matching accessories to make sure I look appropriate.

Errors: 'think a wedding' should be 'attend a wedding'; 'using' should be 'choosing'; 'machine accessory' should be 'matching accessories'; sentence incomplete at end. This corrects verb choice and completes the thought. Suggestion: 'attend a wedding... choosing a suit or dress and matching accessories to make sure I look appropriate.'

× Yes, I read different style.

✓ Yes, I wear different styles.

'read' is incorrect verb; should be 'wear'; 'style' should be plural 'styles'. This is a sentence structure/word choice issue. Suggestion: 'Yes, I wear different styles.'

× On weekday I usually wait for more or so much casual calls for work.

✓ On weekdays I usually wear more casual clothes for work.

Multiple problems: 'weekday' should be plural 'weekdays'; 'wait' is wrong verb—should be 'wear'; 'calls' should be 'clothes'. This includes singular/plural and word choice errors. Suggestion: 'On weekdays I usually wear more casual clothes for work.'

× Why at the weekend I feel comfortable casual outfits write jeans and T-shirts because I'm relaxed or meeting friends.

✓ At the weekend I wear comfortable casual outfits like jeans and T-shirts because I'm relaxed or meeting friends.

'Why' is misplaced; 'write' should be 'like'; tense and structure awkward. Reorder to 'At the weekend I wear...'. Suggestion: 'At the weekend I wear comfortable casual outfits like jeans and T-shirts because I'm relaxed or meeting friends.'

× You like I prefer back black, black, Black Horse black T-shirt, Jeans and bags are easy to match with other item right whites so I can put together outfit quickly for work or going out.

✓ I prefer black T-shirts, jeans, and bags because they are easy to match with other items, so I can put together an outfit quickly for work or going out.

Many word choice and structure errors: 'You like I prefer back black' garbled; repeated 'black'; 'Black Horse' unclear; missing articles and pluralization. Rephrase for clarity and correct noun forms. Suggestion: 'I prefer black T-shirts, jeans, and bags because they are easy to match with other items, so I can put together an outfit quickly for work or going out.'