Clothing— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Be direct and clear. Start with a concise topic sentence answering the question, then add one or two specific supporting details. Use correct vocabulary (casual, not casualties) and fix basic grammar (I feel relaxed and comfortable when I wear them). Keep it within 3–4 sentences.

예시: I usually wear casual clothes, such as T-shirts and jeans. I prefer them because they are comfortable and easy to move in when I’m at work or meeting friends. For example, a plain T-shirt and slim jeans are my typical weekend outfit.

제안: Answer directly and relevantly. Say which you prefer and give clear reasons with appropriate vocabulary (comfortable/casual vs smart/formal). Avoid irrelevant or confusing phrases. Use one linking word to show reason (because/so).

예시: I prefer comfortable, casual clothes rather than smart outfits because they let me move freely and reduce stress. For example, when I wear loose trousers and a soft T-shirt I feel more relaxed during long days.

제안: Remove repetition and correct pronunciation/spelling. Start with a clear topic sentence and add a specific example of types or designs you like. If you mention that T-shirts reflect personality, explain briefly how.

예시: Yes, I really like wearing T-shirts and I own many different styles. For instance, I have plain cotton T-shirts for everyday wear and graphic tees that show my interests, which helps express my personality.

제안: Keep your answer coherent and relevant. Give a simple direct response (Yes/No) and explain briefly with two clear reasons. Avoid unrelated or garbled phrases. Use linking words (because/so) to connect ideas.

예시: No, I don't spend much time choosing clothes on weekdays because I usually wake up late. So I quickly pick a comfortable outfit, like jeans and a T-shirt, and save time.

제안: Be precise and avoid contradictory or unclear phrases. State the difference clearly: what you wear on weekdays vs weekends, and give a short reason or example. Use a linking word (whereas/however) correctly.

예시: Yes, I dress differently: on weekdays I usually wear casual, comfortable clothes like T-shirts and jeans for work or classes, whereas on weekends I tend to dress a bit smarter when I go out with friends, for example wearing a shirt and nicer shoes.

제안: Give a clear preference and explain specifically why you like that colour. Use correct grammar and simpler expressions (makes me look brighter/healthier). Avoid repetitive or confusing sentences.

예시: I prefer white clothes because they make me look brighter and fresher. For example, a white shirt highlights my face and works well in hot weather because it reflects sunlight.

× I feel like relaxed and comfortable when I wear it.

✓ I feel relaxed and comfortable when I wear them.

'Feel like' is unnecessary here; use adjective 'feel relaxed'. 'It' refers to plural 'T-shirts or jeans' so use plural pronoun 'them'. Also adjust word order to 'feel relaxed and comfortable'. Suggestion: say 'I feel relaxed and comfortable when I wear them.'

× I prefer to wear comfortable and cultural outfits because it is directly connected to our health.

✓ I prefer to wear comfortable and casual outfits because they are directly connected to our health.

'Cultural' is likely intended to be 'casual'. Also 'outfits' is plural so use plural pronoun 'they' not 'it', and verb agreement 'are'. Suggestion: replace 'cultural' with 'casual' and match pronoun and verb to plural noun.

× So, uh, well, 'cause we're gathering my tree.

✓ So, uh, well, because we are gathering for a family get-together.

The original is ungrammatical and unclear. 'Cause' should be 'because' in formal speech; 'we're gathering my tree' is nonsensical. Provide a clear clause that fits context, e.g., 'we are gathering for a family get-together.' Suggestion: use complete conjunction and a clear noun phrase.

× Do you like wearing T-shirts? Do you like wearing T-shirts? Yes, I like Velly T-shirts.

✓ Do you like wearing T-shirts? Yes, I like very comfortable T-shirts.

Transcript repeats the examiner's question and student answer blends with it. 'Velly' is misspelling of 'very' and adjective 'comfortable' clarifies meaning. Suggestion: remove duplicate question and correct 'velly' to 'very' and include adjective.

× The blondes produce some type of dishes, so it reflects our personality very well.

✓ The designs on them produce a certain style, so they reflect our personality very well.

Original sentence is confusing: 'blondes' and 'dishes' are incorrect word choices. Likely intended 'logos' or 'designs' produce a certain style. Also refer to plural 'them' and plural verb 'reflect'. Suggestion: choose the correct noun ('designs' or 'logos') and match number.

× Definitely not Oh oh I wait on weekdays I woke up very late and I have no time to choose crisis.

✓ Definitely not. On weekdays I wake up very late and I have no time to choose clothes.

Tense inconsistency: 'woke up' (past) should be present 'wake up' to describe habitual action. 'Wait' is incorrect here and should be removed. 'Crisis' is wrong word; use 'clothes'. Suggestion: use simple present for habitual actions and correct noun.

× So I grabbed my baby. I grabbed some words. I can well eat cream and it works neat so.

✓ So I grab my basics. I grab a few items. I can quickly get dressed and it looks neat.

Original contains many incorrect words: 'grabbed my baby' and 'some words' are wrong; use 'grab my basics' or 'a few items'. Use present tense 'grab' for habitual action. 'I can well eat cream' is unintelligible; replace with 'I can quickly get dressed' and 'it looks neat.' Suggestion: use clear verbs and correct nouns to convey meaning.

× On weekdays I wear casual clothes such as T-shirts or jeans, however high, when I usually go out with friends.

✓ On weekdays I wear casual clothes such as T-shirts or jeans, but I dress up when I go out with friends.

Sentence mixes conjunctions awkwardly: 'however high' is wrong. Use 'but' to contrast weekday routine with going out. Simplify clause to 'I dress up when I go out with friends.' Suggestion: use appropriate contrasting conjunction and concise phrasing.

× Hmm, I like white ones because it looks brightly and my face looks like white.

✓ Hmm, I like white ones because they look bright and they make my face look fairer.

'It looks brightly' is ungrammatical: 'bright' is adjective, not adverb; use 'look bright'. 'My face looks like white' is incorrect; say 'makes my face look fairer' or 'brighter'. Also plural 'ones' takes plural verb 'they'. Suggestion: use correct adjective forms and appropriate comparative adjective.

× When I was white color tops, the light tended to choose white one.

✓ When I wear white tops, the light tends to make them stand out.

'When I was white color tops' is ungrammatical — use 'wear white tops'. 'The light tended to choose white one' is odd; likely intended 'the light tends to make white stand out' or 'make them stand out.' Use present tense for general truth and correct verb-object structure. Suggestion: use correct verb 'wear' and clarify the effect of light.