Clothing— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Start with a clear topic sentence and add one or two specific details. Avoid filler phrases and keep it natural and concise. Use a linking word if you add more information.

예시: I prefer casual clothes, such as jeans and plain T-shirts. For example, I usually wear slim-fit jeans and cotton T-shirts because they are comfortable and easy to move in.

제안: Complete your sentence with a clear reason and one supporting detail. Use a linking word like “because” followed by a specific explanation to make the answer coherent.

예시: I prefer comfortable clothes because I spend a lot of time commuting and sitting at my desk, so soft fabrics and loose cuts help me stay comfortable throughout the day.

제안: Open with a concise topic sentence, then give a specific reason and example. Avoid repetition and correct simple grammar errors (e.g., verb forms and word order).

예시: Yes, I like wearing T-shirts because they are comfortable and low-maintenance. For instance, I often wear a T-shirt with a jacket when I go out or dress it up with chinos for casual workdays.

제안: Give a short direct answer, then explain briefly with a clear reason and one supporting detail. Use proper verb forms and a linking word like “because” or “so.”

예시: No, I don't spend much time choosing clothes because I prefer simple outfits. I usually pick the same few combinations to avoid decision-making in the morning.

제안: Answer directly, then provide a specific reason and one contrasting detail if relevant. Use linking words like “because” and “so” to improve coherence and correct small grammar issues.

예시: No, I don't wear different styles because I wear a uniform at work during the week, and on weekends I usually stay at home and relax in casual clothes.

제안: Give a clear topic sentence and a specific reason. Avoid repetition and check small grammar points (subject-verb agreement and extra words). You can add an example of favourite colours.

예시: I usually prefer dark colours, such as navy and charcoal, because they suit my skin tone and hide stains. For example, I often choose a navy T-shirt and dark jeans when I go out.

× I like to wear casual wear like jeans, T-shirt like that.

✓ I like to wear casual clothes like jeans and T-shirts.

The noun phrase 'T-shirt' needs plural form 'T-shirts' when speaking generally; use 'casual clothes' instead of 'casual wear' for natural wording and include the conjunction 'and' to list items. Also use the plural for general habits. Suggestion: use plural forms for countable items when referring to them in general and connect list items with 'and'.

× I prefer to wear comfortable clothes because.

✓ I prefer to wear comfortable clothes because they are practical and feel good.

The sentence is incomplete because the subordinating clause 'because' must be followed by a reason. Provide a complete clause explaining why. Suggestion: always follow 'because' with a full clause (subject + verb).

× As I like, I like to wear T-shirt because they are very comfortable.

✓ As I said, I like to wear T-shirts because they are very comfortable.

'As I like' is incorrect; the speaker likely means 'As I said' or simply omit it. Also 'T-shirt' should be plural 'T-shirts' when speaking generally. Suggestion: use 'As I said' to refer back, or omit the phrase for clarity, and use plural for general statements.

× Whenever go out or when I go to work, I will work that.

✓ Whenever I go out or when I go to work, I wear them.

The clause is missing the subject 'I' after 'Whenever'; 'will work that' is ungrammatical—use present simple 'wear' for habitual actions and refer to 'them' (T-shirts) with a plural pronoun. Suggestion: include subject and use present simple for routines, and use correct pronoun to refer to clothing.

× No I don't because choosing make me feel sick.

✓ No, I don't, because choosing clothes makes me feel sick.

Missing commas for clarity; 'choosing' as a gerund must be followed by the object 'clothes' to be clear; subject-verb agreement: 'choosing ... makes' (singular) not 'make'. Suggestion: include the object and use 'makes' with singular gerund.

× No, I don't because I go to work where they have certain uniforms and at a weekend I stay at home.

✓ No, I don't, because I go to work where they have a uniform, and at the weekend I stay at home.

Use 'a uniform' or 'uniforms' consistently; 'at a weekend' is unnatural—use 'at the weekend' or 'on weekends'. Add commas for clarity. Suggestion: choose 'a uniform' if all wear the same uniform, and use 'at the weekend' for British English or 'on weekends' for American English.

× I usually like dark colours, dark colour clothes because it it matches my skin tone.

✓ I usually like dark colours because they match my skin tone.

Redundant phrase 'dark colour clothes' removed; 'it it' is a typo and incorrect pronoun: 'dark colours' is plural so use 'they match' not 'it matches'. Suggestion: keep the noun phrase concise and ensure the pronoun agrees in number with its antecedent.