Clothing— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Be more natural and clear: start with a direct topic sentence naming the clothes, then add one or two specific reasons using linking words. Avoid repetition and sentence fragments. Also use correct vocabulary (say “one-piece dress” or “a dress”) and keep answers within 3–4 sentences.

예시: I like wearing one-piece dresses. They are quick and easy to put on when I’m in a hurry, and they look neat without much planning. For these reasons I often choose them when I need to get ready fast.

제안: Give a clear topic sentence stating your preference, then explain with a specific reason using linking words. Correct word choice (e.g. “clothes” not “crows”) and grammatical structure will improve clarity.

예시: I prefer comfortable, casual clothes rather than smart outfits. Because comfort affects how well I can move and sleep, I usually choose breathable fabrics and loose cuts for everyday wear.

제안: Be concise and accurate: start with a direct ‘Yes’ or ‘No’ then give a clear, specific reason. Use correct verbs and phrases (e.g. ‘I like wearing T-shirts’ and ‘I can move easily’). Avoid unrelated or unclear words.

예시: Yes, I like wearing T-shirts because they are very comfortable. For example, when I walk or run I can move easily, so I wear T-shirts for sports and casual outings.

제안: Answer directly and give a short explanation with a linking phrase (e.g. ‘because’). Avoid vague phrases and repetition. Use natural expressions like ‘I don’t spend much time choosing clothes because I’m usually in a hurry in the morning.’

예시: No, I don’t spend much time choosing clothes because I’m usually in a hurry in the morning. I pick simple items I know look good to save time.

제안: Structure the answer: state whether you wear different styles, then contrast weekdays and weekends with linking words (‘on weekdays… whereas on weekends…’). Be consistent and avoid contradictions.

예시: Yes, I wear different styles. On weekdays I usually wear T-shirts or sweatpants because I want comfort for work or classes, whereas on weekends I wear dresses or cute outfits when I go out with friends.

제안: Give a clear answer naming one or two colours, then explain why with specific details. Use correct tense and vocabulary (e.g. ‘sky blue’, ‘people tend to choose black as they get older’). Avoid unrelated or unclear phrases.

예시: I like sky blue and other bright colours. When I was younger I always chose sky blue because it felt cheerful, but now I also wear colourful T-shirts to add variety to my wardrobe.

× I like One Piece.

✓ I like one-piece dresses.

The student used 'One Piece' inconsistently and capitalized it like a title. The intended meaning is 'one-piece dress' (singular countable noun). Use a common noun and correct capitalization. Suggestion: say 'one-piece dress' or 'one-piece dresses' depending on general preference.

× One piece is fairly easy to choose even if I forgot late, but One piece can select only one close, so I love One piece.

✓ One-piece dresses are fairly easy to choose even if I'm late, but a one-piece dress allows you to wear only one item, so I love them.

Several errors: tense and phrasing ('forgot late' should be 'I'm late'), pluralization and articles ('One piece' -> 'one-piece dresses', 'one close' -> 'one item' or 'one dress'). Use 'a one-piece dress' when singular and 'they/them' or plural when general. Also ensure subject-verb agreement and natural phrasing.

× I prefer comfortable clothes because I think. Is the crows is directly connected to our health so we should wear comfortable one.

✓ I prefer comfortable clothes because I think clothing is directly connected to our health, so we should wear comfortable ones.

Fragments and incorrect words: 'I think.' is a fragment and 'Is the crows' is meaningless—likely 'clothes'. Use present simple: 'clothing is directly connected'. Use plural pronoun 'ones' to refer to 'clothes'. Combine into a full sentence.

× Yes, I like building T-shirts very much.

✓ Yes, I like wearing T-shirts very much.

'Building T-shirts' is incorrect; the verb for clothes is 'wear'. Use 'wearing T-shirts' to express preference.

× It is very comfortable and when I was walking or running I can move Christmas so I can really teach it.

✓ They are very comfortable, and when I walk or run I can move freely, so I really like them.

Multiple errors: tense inconsistency ('was walking' vs present habit), wrong words ('Christmas' and 'teach' are incorrect likely intended 'freely' and 'like them'). Use present simple for habits: 'when I walk or run'. Maintain pronoun consistency and logical word choice.

× We know relativity, I don't spend a lot of time for selecting clothes.

✓ I don't spend a lot of time selecting clothes.

'We know relativity' is irrelevant and confusing. Preposition 'for' unnecessary after 'time'. Use the gerund 'selecting' without 'for'.

× I choose gross in a short time because most because in the morning I usually hurry in a hurry so.

✓ I choose clothes quickly because in the morning I am usually in a hurry.

Many errors: 'gross' wrong word ('clothes'), redundancy ('hurry in a hurry'), and word order. Use 'choose clothes quickly' and 'am usually in a hurry'.

× Yes in weekdays I also am wearing T-shirts or sweats but on weekdays I wear like a one piece and cute clothes because I take pictures with friends so I like.

✓ On weekdays I usually wear T-shirts or sweatshirts, but on weekends I wear one-piece dresses and cute clothes because I take pictures with friends, so I like them.

Confused weekday/weekend contrast and tense. Use 'on weekdays' and 'on weekends'. 'Sweats' -> 'sweatshirts' or 'sweatpants'. Use consistent subjects and plural pronouns 'them'.

× MMM, I like Sky 2.

✓ I like sky blue.

'Sky 2' is unclear; likely 'sky blue' color. Use standard color adjective.

× When I was a young I like sky blue very much.

✓ When I was young, I liked sky blue very much.

Use 'when I was young' (no 'a') and past tense 'liked' for past preference.

× Friends after growing they tend to eat black qualified pump.

✓ After growing up, my friends tended to choose black more often.

Original is incoherent: 'eat black qualified pump' is wrong. Intended meaning likely that friends prefer black clothing as they grow up. Use 'tended to choose black more often'.

× That's when I was spelling colourful T-shirts I like.

✓ I still like colorful T-shirts from that time.

'Spelling colourful T-shirts' is incorrect; likely 'wearing' or 'liking'. Use clear structure: 'I still like colorful T-shirts' and relate to time if needed.