Clothing— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Be more concise, correct grammar and avoid repetition. Start with a clear topic sentence, then give one or two specific reasons with linking words. Avoid self-deprecating phrasing; use neutral descriptions.

예시: I prefer casual clothes, especially long flared skirts, because they make me feel comfortable and confident. For example, flared skirts hide problem areas and allow me to move freely, so I often choose them for everyday wear.

제안: Give a clear topic sentence, then add a brief specific reason and a linking word to improve coherence. Remove filler words like 'yeah' and avoid repeating the same idea.

예시: I prefer comfortable, casual clothes because I dislike feeling restricted. For instance, soft fabrics and relaxed cuts let me work and relax without adjusting my outfit constantly.

제안: Combine short sentences and use linking words for flow. Be specific about situations when you choose T-shirts and add one supporting detail to enrich the answer.

예시: Yes, I like wearing T-shirts, particularly long-sleeved ones, because they make me feel covered and protected. For example, when I run errands I usually wear a long-sleeved T-shirt with jeans because it's practical and comfortable.

제안: Avoid repetition and be more precise. Start with a direct answer, then give a concise reason and one supporting detail. Correct small errors in phrasing.

예시: No, I don't spend much time choosing clothes because my wardrobe mainly consists of T-shirts and jeans. As a result, I can get dressed quickly each morning.

제안: Structure the answer with a clear contrast using linking words (e.g., 'on weekdays' vs 'on weekends') and be specific about activities to justify changes in style. Fix minor grammar and vocabulary errors.

예시: Yes. On weekdays I wear casual, warm T-shirts and jeans because I need comfort for work and commuting. On weekends I dress differently: on Saturdays I wear shorts for golf, while on Sundays I choose dresses or long skirts for church.

제안: Answer directly, then give a specific reason and one example. Use linking words like 'because' and avoid vague statements like 'it just changes my mood'—explain how the colour affects you.

예시: I prefer white clothes because they make me feel clean and comfortable. For example, wearing white shirts brightens my mood, whereas dark colours tend to make me feel more subdued.

× I like to wear casual clothes because they make me feel comfortable and especially long skirts, they make me feel comfortable about myself because they may.

✓ I like to wear casual clothes because they make me feel comfortable, especially long skirts, which make me feel good about myself.

The original sentence has a run-on structure and an unclear clause 'because they may.' Use a single coherent clause: combine ideas with commas and a relative pronoun 'which' to link the description of long skirts. Remove the incomplete 'because they may' and replace with a clear result 'which make me feel good about myself.'

× I'm a thick girl so wearing long clothes which are flared and casual, it makes me feel comfortable.

✓ I'm a thick girl, so wearing long, flared, casual clothes makes me feel comfortable.

The original has a redundant subject 'it' creating a subject-verb agreement/structure issue. Use a single subject 'wearing long, flared, casual clothes' which takes the singular verb 'makes.' Also reorder and remove the extra comma and article for clarity.

× I prefer to wear casual and comfortable clothes. Yeah, because I don't like to feel uncomfortable. I like to be comfortable when wearing something.

✓ I prefer to wear casual and comfortable clothes because I don't like to feel uncomfortable. I like to feel comfortable in what I wear.

Fragment 'Yeah, because...' creates a sentence fragment (sentence structure) and weak cohesion. Combine clauses: use present simple consistently and replace 'when wearing something' with the natural phrase 'in what I wear.' This keeps tense and meaning consistent.

× Yes, I like wearing T-shirts especially when they are long sleeved T-shirts because they make me feel covered.

✓ Yes, I like wearing T-shirts, especially long-sleeved ones, because they make me feel covered.

Redundant repetition 'T-shirts' twice is awkward. Use the -ing noun form 'long-sleeved ones' to avoid repetition. Hyphenate 'long-sleeved' as a compound adjective.

× Especially when going out and moving around doing my errands.

✓ I especially like them when I go out and run errands.

Original is a fragment lacking a clear subject and verb. Convert to a full sentence with subject 'I' and verb 'like' or integrate into previous sentence; use 'run errands' as the idiomatic expression.

× I do not spend a lot of time choosing clothes because my closet is full of T-shirts and jeans. Those are the exact thing things that I wear each and every day.

✓ I do not spend a lot of time choosing clothes because my closet is full of T-shirts and jeans. Those are the exact things that I wear every day.

Redundant word 'thing things' is a typo; 'things' must be plural to match 'Those.' 'Each and every day' is repetitive; use 'every day.' Fixes plural agreement and redundancy.

× Yes, I wear different kind of clothes.

✓ Yes, I wear different kinds of clothes.

'Different' should be followed by plural 'kinds' when referring to multiple types. Also use plural 'clothes' remains correct; adjust noun agreement.

× During the weekdays I wear casual warm T-shirts and Jean, just a calm outfit.

✓ During the weekdays I wear casual, warm T-shirts and jeans — just a simple outfit.

'Jean' is incorrect singular; use plural 'jeans.' Add comma between adjectives 'casual, warm.' 'Calm outfit' is unnatural; 'simple outfit' fits better. Also maintain plural agreement.

× And then during the weekend on Saturday I wear shorts because I go for golf and on Sunday I wear dresses or long skirts for church.

✓ On weekends, on Saturday I wear shorts because I play golf, and on Sunday I wear dresses or long skirts for church.

'During the weekend' can be 'on weekends' or 'on the weekend'; adjust for natural phrasing. 'Go for golf' is incorrect collocation; use 'play golf.' Maintain parallel structure and plural/singular consistency.

× I like white clothes because they make me feel clean and comfortable as well. Wearing a dark color makes me feel dull or sad. It just changes my mood.

✓ I like white clothes because they make me feel clean and comfortable. Wearing dark colors makes me feel dull or sad; it changes my mood.

'A dark color' is less natural than 'dark colors' when speaking generally. Remove redundant 'as well.' Combine sentences with a semicolon for flow and keep plural agreement when generalizing.