Clothing— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Make the answer grammatically correct, more concise and add a brief specific example. Start with a clear topic sentence, then give one or two supporting details using a linking word. Avoid redundancy.

예시: I prefer sporty clothes such as trainer sets because I enjoy outdoor activities. For example, I often go hiking or cycling, so I choose breathable, quick-dry fabrics that are comfortable and easy to move in.

제안: Answer directly and fix grammar; explain reasons with a coherent linking phrase and a specific situation. Avoid leaving sentences unfinished.

예시: I prefer comfortable, casual clothes rather than smart clothes because I often go jogging or meet friends. For instance, I usually wear a hoodie and running shoes when I go to the park or to a casual cafe.

제안: Make the reply a complete, fluent sentence and give a clear reason using linking words. Mention a specific feature of T-shirts to support your point.

예시: Yes, I like wearing T-shirts because they are comfortable and allow easy movement. Especially in summer I choose cotton T-shirts because they are breathable and keep me cool.

제안: Clarify meaning (likely about fashion trends and fit), correct tense and vocabulary, and give a specific detail about what you consider (style, fit, color). Use linking words to connect ideas.

예시: Yes, I spend a lot of time choosing clothes because I follow fashion trends and care about fit. For example, I check how a shirt looks on me and whether the colour matches my wardrobe before buying it.

제안: Provide a clear topic sentence and a specific contrast with linking words. Mention concrete examples of weekday and weekend outfits to be more specific.

예시: Yes, I wear different styles: on weekdays I dress formally for work, such as a shirt and trousers, but on weekends I prefer casual clothes like jeans and a T-shirt for comfort.

제안: Clarify and correct vocabulary (avoid confusing words like 'soap' or 'cartoon'), state clear reasons and give specific examples of items you pair with white. Use linking words to make it coherent.

예시: My favourite colour is white because it looks clean and is easy to match with other clothes. For example, I often pair a white shirt with navy jeans or black shorts, and in summer white shirts help me feel cooler.

× I prefer to wearing sporty wear like trainer sets because I love outdoor activities, so it is important, comfortable for me. That's the reason why.

✓ I prefer wearing sporty clothes like trainer sets because I love outdoor activities, so they are important and comfortable for me.

The verb 'prefer' should be followed by the gerund form without 'to' (prefer doing, not prefer to doing). Also plural and article issues corrected: 'sporty wear' is unnatural; use 'sporty clothes'. 'It is important, comfortable for me' has subject mismatch and punctuation: use 'they are important and comfortable for me.' Keep sentence coherent.

× I prefer to wear comfortable and casual clothes rather than smart clothes because I often go to jogging or meet my friends, so when?

✓ I prefer to wear comfortable, casual clothes rather than smart clothes because I often go jogging or meet my friends.

Remove unnecessary 'to' before gerund 'jogging' and fix verb form: 'go jogging' not 'go to jogging'. The trailing 'so when?' is incomplete and irrelevant, so it is deleted. Also use comma between adjectives 'comfortable, casual'.

× Yes, I like wearing T-shirts, it helps me more activity and. Comfortable, so especially in summer it is good.

✓ Yes, I like wearing T-shirts; they help me be more active and are comfortable, so they are especially good in summer.

Run-on sentence and wrong forms: 'helps me more activity' should be 'help me be more active.' 'Comfortable' needs a verb and subject: 'are comfortable.' Use plural 'they' for T-shirts. Reorganize clauses for clarity.

× Yes, I spent a lot of time choosing clothes because I'm sensitive to patient trends so I always considering. It's a fit table for me so.

✓ Yes, I spend a lot of time choosing clothes because I'm sensitive to current trends, so I am always considering what fits me.

Tense inconsistency: use present 'spend' because habitual action. 'Patient trends' is incorrect; correct to 'current trends.' 'I always considering' needs auxiliary: 'I am always considering' or better 'I always consider.' 'It's a fit table for me' is unclear; changed to 'what fits me.'

× Yes, on weekdays I have to go to my work, so it's necessary to be formal on dress code, but on weekend it's not necessary so.

✓ Yes, on weekdays I have to go to work, so it is necessary to be formal because of the dress code, but on weekends it is not necessary.

Remove unnecessary article 'my' before 'work' in general context. Use plural 'weekends' and add 'because of the dress code' for clarity. Move 'so' and fix sentence flow.

× My favorite color is white because it's just a simple soap, so easy matching with other items most cartoon or shots on. And in summer the white shirts make me more cool.

✓ My favorite color is white because it is simple and easy to match with other items, like most outfits. In summer, white shirts make me feel cooler.

Many incorrect word choices and phrases: 'simple soap' is wrong; use 'simple.' 'Easy matching' should be 'easy to match.' 'Most cartoon or shots on' is unintelligible; replace with 'like most outfits.' 'Make me more cool' should be 'make me feel cooler.' Improved word choice and sentence structure for clarity.