Clothing— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Be more concise and correct grammar. Start with a clear topic sentence, avoid repetition, and use linking words for coherence. Add one specific detail (e.g., fabric, brand or reason) and keep to 2–4 sentences.

예시: I prefer casual clothes because they’re comfortable and easy to mix and match. For daily wear I usually choose jeans, polo shirts and white sneakers, which are practical for walking and going to classes.

제안: Use a clear topic sentence and a linking word to contrast the two situations. Correct minor grammar and avoid redundancy like “place or any kind of function.” Give one concrete example of an event requiring smart clothes.

예시: I usually prefer comfortable casual clothes for everyday wear, but I dress smartly for special occasions. For example, I wear a shirt and chinos to weddings or formal presentations.

제안: Clarify the reason—T-shirts normally make a look more casual, not formal—so correct the idea and avoid repetition ('I I', 'always'). Use one linking phrase to add detail and one or two brief specifics about styles you experiment with.

예시: Yes, I like wearing T-shirts because they’re comfortable and versatile. I often experiment with graphic prints or plain monochrome tees to change my look depending on the day.

제안: Make the answer clearer and correct confusing phrases ('vegetable time' is incorrect). Use one topic sentence and one supporting detail explaining your routine. Mention who helps if relevant and avoid convoluted clauses.

예시: No, I don’t spend much time choosing clothes. Usually I pick my outfit the night before, sometimes with my brother’s advice, so I’m ready quickly the next day.

제안: Use a clear contrast structure and correct verb tenses. Remove hesitations and vague phrases. State one specific example of weekday vs weekend clothing and use linking words like 'whereas' or 'but'.

예시: Yes. On weekdays I wear more smart-casual clothes for the academy, such as button-down shirts and jeans, whereas on weekends I prefer relaxed outfits like hoodies and sweatpants.

제안: Improve accuracy and phrasing: say 'light-coloured clothes' and explain briefly why (reflect heat). Use a topic sentence and one supporting reason with a specific example of preferred colours.

예시: I prefer light-coloured clothes, especially white and pale blue, because they reflect sunlight and keep me cooler during the long hot summers where I live.

× I usually like to wear casual clothes because casual clothes are practical to wear, we can match them with anything.

✓ I usually like to wear casual clothes because they are practical and can be matched with anything.

Use a pronoun to avoid repeating the noun; 'casual clothes' is plural so use 'they' and 'can be matched' is a passive construction that is more natural. This fixes redundancy and plural reference.

× I mostly prefer to wear jeans and polo shirts and with them I do also like to wear white sneakers.

✓ I mostly prefer to wear jeans and polo shirts, and I also like to wear white sneakers with them.

Reorder words for natural flow and place 'also' before the main verb. The original word order was awkward; fixing word order improves clarity and maintains present simple tense.

× So that is my full attire to always for my daily wear.

✓ So that is my usual outfit for daily wear.

Original sentence had incorrect word order and unnecessary words ('full attire to always'). 'Usual outfit for daily wear' is concise and grammatically correct.

× I prefer to wear comfortable clothes at my home and sometimes when I'm going out with my friends, but when there is an event or I am going to a place or any kind of function so I prefer to wear smart clothes according to the event.

✓ I prefer to wear comfortable clothes at home and sometimes when I go out with friends, but if there is an event or any kind of function, I prefer to wear smart clothes appropriate to the event.

Use simple present 'I go' instead of 'I'm going' for habitual actions. Remove redundant 'so' and 'a place'; use 'appropriate to the event' for clarity.

× Yes, I do like to wear a T-shirt because T-shirts make the look more formal and I love to wear such kind of things because I I always experiment with my clothes.

✓ Yes, I like to wear T-shirts because they can make the look more casual, and I always experiment with my clothes.

Correct pronoun 'they' for plural 'T-shirts'. Also 'T-shirts make the look more formal' contradicts typical meaning; if intended formal keep 'more formal'. Remove duplicated 'I' and simplify 'such kind of things' to 'T-shirts' or 'them'. Use simple present for habits.

× So in most of the time I always wear T-shirts.

✓ So most of the time I wear T-shirts.

'Most of the time' already implies frequency; remove 'in' and 'always' to avoid redundancy. Use simple present for habitual action.

× I do not spend a lot of time in choosing clothes because before a night where I'm when I'm going to visit somewhere, I decide my clothes at night and with the preference of my brother.

✓ I do not spend a lot of time choosing clothes because the night before I go somewhere, I decide what to wear with my brother's preference.

Remove unnecessary 'in' after 'time'. Rephrase 'before a night where I'm when I'm going to visit somewhere' to 'the night before I go somewhere'. Use 'decide what to wear' and possessive 'my brother's preference'.

× So it is not a very vegetable time for me, so I do not waste my time.

✓ So it is not a very long process for me, and I do not waste time.

'Vegetable' is incorrect word choice; likely intended 'lengthy' or 'long'. Replace with 'long process' and avoid repeating 'my time'.

× Actually on weekdays I went to Academy, so there's always something like to des uh, to style for myself.

✓ Actually on weekdays I go to an academy, so I always have to dress or style myself.

Use present tense 'go' for habitual action instead of past 'went'. 'Academy' needs an article 'an academy'. 'Have to dress' is a natural expression; fix filler sounds and word order.

× I always wear different kind of clothes on weekdays, but when I if I talk about weekends, so I do prefer to wear comfortable clothes.

✓ I always wear different kinds of clothes on weekdays, but when I talk about weekends, I prefer to wear comfortable clothes.

Use plural 'kinds' to match 'different'. Remove extraneous 'if' and 'so'. Use simple present 'I prefer' for habitual preference.

× I mostly like to wear a light colour clothes because in my area there is very much summer, so on summer days the bright clothes observe the heat.

✓ I mostly like to wear light-colored clothes because it is very hot in my area, so on summer days bright clothes retain heat.

'A light colour clothes' is incorrect: use 'light-colored clothes' or 'light-coloured clothes'. 'There is very much summer' is ungrammatical; use 'it is very hot'. 'Observe the heat' is wrong verb; 'retain heat' or 'absorb heat' is correct depending on meaning.

× So I prefer to wear light clothes and most of the time I wear white clothes.

✓ So I prefer to wear light clothes, and most of the time I wear white.

'White clothes' is acceptable but repeating 'clothes' is redundant; 'wear white' is natural. Maintain plural consistency and simple present for habitual action.