Clothing— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Be more concise and use a clear topic sentence. Avoid filler words (uh, umm) and correct grammar (e.g., "especially", "it looks good on me"). Add one specific reason or example to support your preference. Keep answers to under five sentences.

예시: I like wearing aesthetic clothes, especially the 'old money' style, because they look polished and timeless. For example, I often choose tailored blazers and neutral trousers for events because they make me feel confident and well-dressed.

제안: Use a clear topic sentence stating your preference, then give one concise reason with linking words. Avoid repeating phrases and correct grammar ("you will feel"). Provide a short specific example of a comfortable outfit.

예시: I prefer comfortable clothes because they let me move easily and feel confident. For instance, I usually wear a soft T-shirt and joggers when I go out or to the gym because they keep me relaxed and practical.

제안: Start with a direct statement and reduce fillers. Clarify unclear phrases (e.g., "most comfortable choice for me") and give one specific example of a T-shirt style you like. Keep it within three sentences.

예시: Yes, I really like wearing T-shirts because they are the most comfortable option for me. For example, I often choose plain oversized or aesthetic graphic T-shirts for dinners or casual dates because they look stylish yet relaxed.

제안: Provide a clear topic sentence about whether you spend time choosing clothes and give a specific reason and example. Remove fillers and correct phrasing ("one or two hours", "choose clothes").

예시: Yes, I usually spend a long time choosing clothes because I look for unique items. For instance, when I go shopping with my mother I often take one or two hours to pick a shirt with the right fabric and design.

제안: Answer directly and correct grammar ("I don't prefer to wear different clothes on weekdays and weekends"). Use linking words to contrast routine and exceptions, and give one clear example of when you dress differently.

예시: I usually wear the same casual style on weekdays and weekends, mainly T-shirts for everyday activities. However, for special events or dates on weekends, I sometimes wear a shirt and smart trousers to look more formal.

제안: Give a clear topic sentence stating your favourite colour and explain briefly why with specific reasons. Avoid vague or confusing comparisons and remove repetition. Use correct grammar ("It looks good on me", "black is a universal colour").

예시: My favourite colour is black because it is versatile and easy to match with other clothes. For example, I often wear a black shirt with beige or black trousers because it looks neat and suits many occasions.

× I like to wear lots of clothing, Uh, but I'm specially, uh, like to wear some aesthetic clothes like old money style or something because it's very trendy to have it a wear it and then, uh, it's usually, it should usually looks good on me because I'm so fed.

✓ I like to wear lots of clothing, but I'm especially fond of aesthetic clothes, like the old money style, because it's trendy to wear them and they usually look good on me.

Errors: misuse of 'specially' instead of 'especially'; incorrect phrasing 'like to wear' repeated; 'have it a wear it' is ungrammatical; 'it should usually looks' has subject-verb agreement and modal issues; 'I'm so fed' is incorrect word choice. Suggestion: use 'especially' to introduce a preference, avoid repeating phrases, replace unclear fragments with 'it is trendy to wear them', and match subject and verb ('they usually look'). Use 'fond of' instead of 'fed'.

× So it's usually I look good on me and then, umm.

✓ So usually I look good in them.

Errors: 'I look good on me' incorrectly uses pronouns and reflexive structure; 'in them' refers to clothes. Suggestion: use 'look good in' + clothing reference and avoid redundant pronouns.

× I prefer to wear some comfortable clothes in in any situation because when you're going out or when you're spending a time in your gym or somewhere, you just want to be very comfortable and you'll you'll be feel very confident when you're everything is comfortable.

✓ I prefer to wear comfortable clothes in any situation because when you go out or spend time at the gym, you want to be comfortable and you will feel more confident when everything is comfortable.

Errors: unnecessary 'some' and duplicate 'in in'; 'spending a time' incorrect quantifier and article; inconsistent tense 'you're going' vs 'you go'; 'you'll you'll be feel' doubled auxiliary and wrong verb form; 'when you're everything' is ungrammatical. Suggestion: remove extra words, use 'spend time', maintain simple present for general statements, and use 'you will feel' + adjective.

× It looks very free on you don't look like a stiff man or something really very free and you will be more good.

✓ You don't look stiff; you look relaxed, which is better.

Errors: 'very free' is unnatural adjective use; run-on sentence lacking conjunctions or punctuation; 'you will be more good' incorrect comparative. Suggestion: use natural adjectives like 'relaxed', restructure sentence for clarity, and use 'better' or 'more confident' instead of 'more good'.

× I like wearing T-shirts very much because it's, uh, it, it is most comfortable crowd on me.

✓ I like wearing T-shirts very much because they are the most comfortable for me.

Errors: 'it's...it is' unnecessary repetition; 'most comfortable crowd on me' is nonsensical and incorrect use of 'crowd'. Suggestion: refer to T-shirts with plural pronoun 'they' and use 'comfortable for me'.

× and then I usually wear, uh, T-shirts for everywhere, for dinner, for date, for, uh, going out everywhere.

✓ I usually wear T-shirts everywhere: for dinner, on dates, and when going out.

Errors: repeated 'for' with wrong preposition 'for date' should be 'on dates'; redundant 'everywhere'. Suggestion: use 'everywhere' once and correct prepositions for activities.

× I'm a big T-shirt fan, especially, uh, when you, when it's come to, when it's come to like, uh, the fashion stage aesthetic, uh, T-shirts.

✓ I'm a big T-shirt fan, especially when it comes to fashion and aesthetic T-shirts.

Errors: 'when you, when it's come to' incorrect pronoun and verb form; 'fashion stage aesthetic' incorrect word order. Suggestion: use 'when it comes to' and simplify noun phrases to 'fashion and aesthetic T-shirts'.

× Umm, especially, yeah, it's very, it's very, uh, a long process for me.

✓ Especially, yes, it is usually a long process for me.

Errors: redundant fillers and awkward word order; 'it's very, it's very, uh, a long process' repetitive. Suggestion: streamline to convey frequency or habitual aspect with 'usually'.

× When my mom, umm, took me for a shopping, it usually takes long time, one or two hours for me to select A1 cloth thing.

✓ When my mom takes me shopping, it usually takes a long time, one or two hours, for me to choose a good piece of clothing.

Errors: inconsistent tense ('took' past vs 'usually takes' present); incorrect phrase 'for a shopping'; 'A1 cloth thing' unclear slang. Suggestion: use present simple for habitual events ('takes me shopping') and 'choose a good piece of clothing' for clarity.

× It's very, uh, I'm very specific because, uh, I always need some unique, uh, unique clothes or something on me because it's very helpful.

✓ I'm very specific because I like unique clothes, which is helpful.

Errors: repetition 'unique, uh, unique'; awkward 'on me' and 'it's very helpful' vague. Suggestion: concise phrasing 'I like unique clothes' and explain why if necessary.

× I don't prefer to wear a different clothes on a weekdays and weekends.

✓ I don't prefer to wear different clothes on weekdays and weekends.

Errors: 'a different clothes' mixes singular article with plural noun; unnecessary 'a' before weekdays. Suggestion: remove article and pluralize correctly.

× I usually prefer T-shirts on every every casual meeting on weekdays and weekends.

✓ I usually prefer T-shirts for every casual meeting on weekdays and weekends.

Errors: 'on every casual meeting' wrong preposition; duplicated 'every'. Suggestion: use 'for' with 'meeting' and remove duplicate.

× Sometimes if I'm going for a date or going for any special event, especially on weekends, I used to waste different kind of clothes.

✓ Sometimes if I'm going on a date or to a special event, especially on weekends, I wear different kinds of clothes.

Errors: 'going for a date' should be 'going on a date'; 'used to waste' wrong verb phrase; 'different kind of clothes' number agreement. Suggestion: use 'wear different kinds of clothes' to express varying outfits.

× It's black because every boy loves wearing black on him or especially if you are, if you are in a if you are in a dark zone or a white guy does not matter.

✓ I like black because many boys prefer wearing black; it suits people regardless of skin tone or background.

Errors: 'wearing black on him' incorrect pronoun use; fragmented conditional 'if you are in a dark zone or a white guy' unclear and possibly inappropriate. Suggestion: rephrase to neutral, clear statement about preference and suitability.

× Black is a universal color. You can match it with any any pant, black pant or beige pant.

✓ Black is a universal color. You can match it with any pants, black or beige.

Errors: duplicated 'any any'; singular 'pant' should be plural 'pants'; awkward repetition. Suggestion: use plural 'pants' and list colors succinctly.

× It's will be looking so good on you. So it's I of course it's black.

✓ It will look great on you. So of course I prefer black.

Errors: 'It's will be looking' wrong auxiliary and progressive form; 'So it's I of course it's black' ungrammatical. Suggestion: use future simple 'will look', and concise conclusion 'of course I prefer black'.