Clothing— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Make the answer more concise, correct minor grammar errors (e.g., remove duplicate words), and add one specific example or short reason. Use one linking phrase to connect ideas and keep to 2–3 sentences.

예시: I prefer wearing T-shirts and pants because they are comfortable and allow me to move easily. For example, when I travel or walk for long periods, this outfit keeps me relaxed and prevents overheating.

제안: Reduce hesitation sounds and repeat words. Begin with a clear topic sentence, then give a short specific reason using a linking word like "because" or "so". Limit to 2 sentences.

예시: I prefer comfortable, casual clothes because they give me freedom of movement. For instance, loose shorts and a breathable T-shirt make exercising and commuting much easier.

제안: Avoid filler words and correct grammar (singular/plural, verb forms). Start with a direct answer, then support with a concise, specific example. Use a linking word like "because" or "so".

예시: Yes, definitely. I often wear T-shirts to school and for exercise because they are lightweight and allow me to move freely, for example during PE classes or long bike rides.

제안: Be more concise and avoid repetition. Give one specific detail about how you choose clothes (e.g., matching colors or checking the weather) and use a linking word to make it coherent.

예시: Yes, I spend quite a bit of time choosing clothes because I care about the impression I give. For example, I usually check the weather and pick outfits that are neat and color-coordinated for work or classes.

제안: Remove hesitations and repetitions. Give a clear contrast: describe your weekday style, then use a linking word like "however" to introduce weekend or special-event style, finishing the thought in one sentence each.

예시: On weekdays I usually wear casual clothes like a T-shirt and trousers because I want to be comfortable. However, for special events or weekends I choose smarter outfits, for example a collared shirt and chinos to look more presentable.

제안: Clarify and correct the meaning (avoid contradictory statements). State a clear preference and give a specific, logical reason without self-deprecating language. Keep to 2–3 sentences and use linking words like "but" or "so" correctly.

예시: My favorite colour is white because it looks clean and pairs well with other clothes. However, I avoid wearing bright red often because it can overpower my complexion, so I usually choose neutral tones like white, gray, or navy.

× I prefer to wear a T-shirt and pants because I think this kind of clothes are very convenient to to run or to move your body and it makes me feel comfortable.

✓ I prefer to wear a T-shirt and pants because I think this kind of clothing is very convenient for running or moving your body and it makes me feel comfortable.

Use 'clothing' (uncountable) or 'clothes' with plural agreement. 'This kind of' requires a singular noun like 'clothing' or plural phrasing 'these kinds of clothes'. Also 'convenient for running' is the correct preposition and use of gerund; remove duplicate 'to'. Grammar problem type ID: 1

× I prefer to wear comfortable and casual clothes because, uh, when I do some exercise, uh, the comfortable and casual clothes, uh, will make me, uh, give me freedom of movement.

✓ I prefer to wear comfortable and casual clothes because when I do some exercise, comfortable and casual clothes give me freedom of movement.

Use gerund 'doing exercise' or 'when I exercise'; here 'do some exercise' is acceptable but redundant 'will make me, give me' is incorrect. Use present simple 'give' to express general truth. Remove filler words and unnecessary modal 'will'. Grammar problem type ID: 8

× Yes, definitely. Uh, I like wearing T-shirts, uh, when I go to school or do exercise because I think in the daily life, uh, T-shirt is the most convenient clothes to wear.

✓ Yes, definitely. I like wearing T-shirts when I go to school or exercise because in daily life a T-shirt is the most convenient item of clothing to wear.

Mismatch between singular 'T-shirt' and plural 'clothes'. Use 'a T-shirt' with singular or 'T-shirts are the most convenient clothes' with plural. 'Item of clothing' clarifies countability. Grammar problem type ID: 1

× Uh, which can makes, uh, which can make, make you uh, MO move freely.

✓ which can make you move freely.

After modal-like 'can' the base verb is used: 'can make' not 'can makes'. Also remove repetitions and fillers to make the sentence grammatical and fluent. Grammar problem type ID: 2

× Yes, because I really focus on my outfit every day. I care about what kind of impression I give to others. So, umm, outfit is really important for me. Uh, I will spend lots of, lots of time choosing clothes.

✓ Yes, because I really focus on my outfit every day. I care about what kind of impression I give others. So my outfit is really important to me. I spend a lot of time choosing clothes.

Use present simple 'I spend' to describe habitual action rather than 'will spend', which implies future. 'Give to others' should be 'give others' or 'give to other people'. 'A lot of' is preferred over repeated 'lots of, lots of'. Grammar problem type ID: 6

× Uh, sometimes, uh, I would say on, on weekdays, I usually wear casual, casual clothes just AT shirt and trousers.

✓ Sometimes I would say on weekdays I usually wear casual clothes, just a T-shirt and trousers.

Incorrect preposition/capitalization: 'AT' should be 'a' and 'T-shirt' capitalized appropriately. Use 'a T-shirt' (indefinite article) before a singular count noun. Also remove repetition. Grammar problem type ID: 11

× But if I have some special event, uh, event, uh, I, I would, uh, pick up carefully my outfit and.

✓ But if I have some special event, I would choose my outfit carefully.

Original ends abruptly and has poor word order 'pick up carefully my outfit'. Use 'choose my outfit carefully' for correct verb-object order and complete the sentence. Remove fillers and repetitions. Grammar problem type ID: 26

× Actually my favorite color is white, but it's really weird when I, when I'm wearing white clothes, I look like very ugly and my skin became dark darker.

✓ Actually my favorite color is white, but it's strange: when I wear white clothes I look very ugly and my skin looks darker.

Use 'strange' instead of 'weird' for tone, but primary errors: 'when I'm wearing' can be 'when I wear' (present simple for habitual), 'I look like very ugly' is ungrammatical—use 'I look very ugly' or better 'I look bad'. 'Became' is past tense; use 'looks darker' or 'appears darker' to match present habitual context. Grammar problem type ID: 13

× So I'm not usually, uh, wear red clothes, uh, instead of it I. There.

✓ So I don't usually wear red clothes; instead, I choose other colors.

Mix of negative construction and verb form: use 'I don't usually wear' (negative with auxiliary) not 'I'm not usually wear'. 'Instead of it I. There.' is fragmented and unclear—complete the thought with a clear alternative. Correct pronoun/auxiliary structure. Grammar problem type ID: 12