Clothing— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Be concise and directly answer with a clear topic sentence, then add one or two specific supporting details using linking words. Correct grammar and avoid repetition (e.g., use 'they' for plural 'clothes').

예시: I prefer comfortable, casual clothes because they allow me to move freely. For example, I often choose loose trousers and a breathable shirt, which make it easier to walk and do outdoor activities.

제안: Start with a direct topic sentence, use correct tense and subject-verb agreement, and add a specific reason with linking words. Keep it to two or three sentences and avoid vague phrases.

예시: I prefer comfortable, casual clothes rather than smart clothes because they let me move freely. For example, I usually wear a T-shirt and jeans when I go out because they are practical and comfortable.

제안: Give a short direct answer and one specific reason, avoid repeating the same idea. Use correct pronouns and simple linking words like 'because' and 'so'.

예시: Yes, I like wearing T-shirts because they are lightweight and let me move easily. For example, I often pair a T-shirt with jeans when I travel or exercise because it is comfortable.

제안: Make your answer coherent: give one clear reason and a specific example. Fix grammar and phrasing (e.g., 'I worry about looking appropriate' not 'I'm representing what difficulty'). Use linking words like 'because' and 'for example'.

예시: Yes, I often spend a long time choosing clothes because I worry about being comfortable and appropriate for the weather. For example, if the forecast is uncertain I check the temperature and choose layers so I can adapt during the day.

제안: Answer directly and clearly. Explain one clear pattern and give a specific example with linking words. Correct contradictions (you said 'No' then describe differences) and finish sentences fully.

예시: Yes, I wear different styles on weekdays and weekends. On weekdays I dress more formally for classes, such as a shirt and trousers, but on weekends I prefer casual clothes like a T-shirt and jeans because they are more comfortable.

제안: Give a clear topic sentence stating favorite colours, then add a specific example of how you wear them using linking words. Use correct collocations (e.g., 'black trousers' not 'black trouser').

예시: I like pink, white and black clothes. For example, I often wear a white shirt with black trousers for school, and I choose pink accessories at the weekend to add a splash of colour.

× I prefer to wear protective clothes due to the fact that protective clothes help me to move freely.

✓ I prefer to wear protective clothes because they help me move freely.

Redundant phrasing 'due to the fact that' is wordy; replace with 'because'. Also combine repeated noun 'protective clothes' using the pronoun 'they' for natural flow. 'Help me to move' -> 'help me move' is more idiomatic.

× In addition, it help me also to do many activities and one where I protective clothes I feel like relax.

✓ In addition, they also help me do many activities, and when I wear protective clothes I feel relaxed.

Subject-pronoun disagreement: 'it help' is incorrect; use 'they help' because 'protective clothes' is plural (third person plural). 'One where I protective clothes' is ungrammatical—replace with 'when I wear protective clothes'. 'Feel like relax' should be 'feel relaxed' (adjective after linking verb).

× I'm very relaxed, relaxing.

✓ I feel very relaxed.

Using both 'relaxed' and 'relaxing' is redundant and incorrect here. 'Relaxed' (adjective) describes the speaker's state; 'relaxing' would describe something that causes relaxation. Use 'I feel very relaxed.'

× I prefer to wear comfortable casual clothes because it helped me to move freely and to do many activities.

✓ I prefer to wear comfortable, casual clothes because they help me move freely and do many activities.

Tense mismatch: 'prefer' is present, so 'helped' (past) is inconsistent. Use present 'help'. Also use plural pronoun 'they' for 'clothes'. Remove unnecessary 'to' before verbs for idiomatic structure.

× Also I prefer to wear casual coat like T-shirt and jeans.

✓ Also, I prefer to wear casual clothes like T-shirts and jeans.

'Casual coat' is wrong word choice; use 'casual clothes'. Count nouns need correct plural and article: 'T-shirt' should be plural 'T-shirts' when speaking generally. Add comma after 'Also' for clarity.

× Of course, I like wearing T-shirt because T-shirt help me to move freely.

✓ Of course, I like wearing T-shirts because they help me move freely.

When speaking generally, use plural 'T-shirts' and plural pronoun 'they'. 'Help me to move' -> 'help me move' is more natural.

× In addition, it permit me to make many activities.

✓ In addition, they allow me to do many activities.

'Permit' is formal and requires correct subject agreement: 'it permit' is wrong for plural 'T-shirts'. Use 'they allow me to do' which is more natural. Also 'make many activities' is incorrect collocation; use 'do many activities'.

× Also, I like to wear I like wearing T-shirt with jeans because I feel like very comfortable.

✓ Also, I like wearing T-shirts with jeans because I feel very comfortable.

Remove duplicate phrase 'I like to wear I like wearing'. Use plural 'T-shirts'. 'Feel like very comfortable' is incorrect: use 'feel very comfortable' (no 'like').

× Yes, I spend a lot of time choosing clothes because I'm representing what difficulty to when making choice.

✓ Yes, I spend a lot of time choosing clothes because I find it difficult to make a choice.

'I'm representing what difficulty to when making choice' is ungrammatical. Use 'I find it difficult to make a choice' to express the difficulty. Keep present tense consistent.

× Sometime it depends also on climate.

✓ Sometimes it also depends on the climate.

Use plural adverb 'Sometimes'. Place adverb 'also' in natural position: 'sometimes it also depends on the climate'. Include definite article 'the' before 'climate' when referring to weather conditions.

× I can spend a lot of time when choosing clothes because I'm scared out when going out.

✓ I can spend a lot of time choosing clothes because I'm afraid when going out.

'Scared out' is incorrect collocation; use 'afraid' or 'scared'. Remove redundant 'when' after 'time'. 'When going out' is acceptable.

× The climate can change to dry season to.

✓ The climate can change to the dry season too.

Missing article 'the' before 'dry season'. 'To' at the end is wrong; use 'too' to mean 'also'.

× No, I usually wear different style. On weekend days.

✓ No, I usually wear different styles on weekends.

Sentence fragments: combine into one sentence. Use plural 'styles' and 'on weekends' for clarity.

× I wear casual clothes for school, mostly AT shirt and jeans because they are comfortable.

✓ I wear casual clothes for school, mostly a T-shirt and jeans because they are comfortable.

'AT shirt' appears to be a typo; use 'a T-shirt'. Include indefinite article 'a' before 'T-shirt'.

× For classes at the weekend I prefer to dress smarter, for example wearing a shirt and when.

✓ For weekend classes I prefer to dress smarter; for example, wearing a shirt and trousers.

Incomplete sentence 'and when' is unclear. Replace with a complete example 'shirt and trousers'. Reorder to 'For weekend classes' for natural phrasing.

× The type of colour clothes that I like are pink colour, white and black.

✓ The colours I like are pink, white, and black.

Redundant 'colour clothes' and 'pink colour' are awkward. Use 'colours' and list them simply. Subject-verb agreement: 'The colours ... are'.

× Especially weekend days when going to school.

✓ Especially on weekend days when I go to school.

Missing preposition 'on' before 'weekend days' and missing subject 'I'. Make clause complete: 'when I go to school.'

× I really like to pair my dress code with black colour and white, especially white shirt and black trouser.

✓ I really like to pair my outfit with black and white, especially a white shirt and black trousers.

Use 'outfit' or 'clothes' instead of 'dress code' if referring to personal clothing. Use 'black and white' rather than 'black colour and white'. Use articles: 'a white shirt' and plural 'trousers'.