Clothing— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Be more concise and avoid filler words. Start with a clear topic sentence, then add one or two specific supporting details (materials, occasions). Use linking words like “because” or “so” to make it coherent.

예시: I usually wear oversized sweaters or T-shirts because they are comfortable. For bottoms I prefer jeans or relaxed trousers, especially when I know I will be walking a lot or studying at school.

제안: Give a direct answer first (e.g., “It depends, but generally…”), then explain with specific situations. Reduce repetition and use linking words like “however” or “instead” to connect ideas.

예시: It depends on the occasion, but generally I choose comfort. For example, I wear practical clothes for school, such as jeans and a jumper, but I dress smartly when attending formal events or interviews.

제안: Avoid repetition and strengthen vocabulary. Begin with a clear opinion, then give a specific reason and a brief example. Replace vague phrases with precise language.

예시: Yes, I like wearing T-shirts because they are comfortable and versatile. For instance, I often pair a plain T-shirt with jeans or a skirt for a simple everyday outfit.

제안: Avoid hesitation and correct grammar (e.g., “too much time”, “addicted to shopping”). Give a concise structure: direct answer + reason + brief example. Remove colloquial fillers like “like”.

예시: Yes, I spend a lot of time choosing clothes, mainly because I shop online often and compare many items. For example, I can spend hours reading reviews before buying a T-shirt.

제안: State the answer clearly and avoid repetition. Use linking words (“whereas”, “while”) to contrast weekday and weekend styles, and give one specific example for each.

예시: Yes. During the week I usually wear classic, smart outfits such as a blazer and tailored trousers for school, whereas at the weekend I prefer casual clothes like jeans and a sweatshirt.

제안: Be precise and avoid contradictory phrasing (pale vs bold). Start with a clear statement about favourite colours, then give specific examples and explain why you like them. Reduce fillers and correct collocations (e.g., “pull off” is fine but phrase clearly).

예시: I like a range of colours and I'm not afraid to experiment. Mostly I wear neutral colours like black and white for everyday outfits, but I also enjoy adding bright pieces, such as a pink jacket, to add personality.

× Usually I'm wearing an oversized sweater or T-shirt rather than really short tops.

✓ Usually I wear an oversized sweater or T-shirt rather than really short tops.

Using 'I'm wearing' (present continuous) suggests an action happening right now; for habitual preferences the simple present 'I wear' is correct. Replace present participle form with simple present to express regular habits. Suggestion: Use simple present for routines and preferences ('I wear', 'I like').

× Uh, for now, it's one of the clothes type of clothes that makes me more comfortable and also some jeans or part of, uh, trousers would be uh, the best option for me.

✓ At the moment, it's one of the types of clothes that makes me most comfortable, and jeans or trousers are the best option for me.

Phrases like 'one of the clothes type of clothes' are ungrammatical; use 'one of the types of clothes'. Also use 'jeans or trousers are' (plural subject 'jeans/trousers' requires 'are'). 'For now' better as 'at the moment'. Suggestion: Simplify and use correct plural forms: 'one of the types of clothes' and subject-verb agreement with 'are'.

× Well it's really hard to say because it's always depends on my mood and what celebration or where I'm heading to.

✓ Well, it's really hard to say because it always depends on my mood and where I'm heading.

'It's always depends' is incorrect: modal/auxiliary 'does' is not needed with 'it' as subject; use 'it always depends'. Also 'what celebration' is awkward; remove or rephrase to 'where I'm heading'. Avoid redundant preposition 'to' after 'heading'. Suggestion: Use 'it always depends on' and simplify the clause to 'where I'm heading'.

× Because if I'm going to school I would probably wear something more like practical and if you're just a walk I would just wear casual clothes.

✓ If I'm going to school I will probably wear something more practical, and if I'm just going for a walk I would wear casual clothes.

Mixes conditionals and pronouns incorrectly. Use 'will probably' or 'would' consistently; 'more like practical' is incorrect—use 'more practical'. 'You're just a walk' should be 'I'm just going for a walk' (wrong subject and phrase). Suggestion: Use consistent subjects and correct collocations: 'going for a walk'. Use 'will' for likely future actions or 'would' in hypothetical contexts.

× I think it's one of the most comfortable and common thing in my clothes to wear on a daily basis.

✓ I think it's one of the most comfortable and common things in my wardrobe to wear on a daily basis.

'One of the... thing' is wrong because 'one of the' requires plural noun 'things'. 'In my clothes' is awkward; 'in my wardrobe' or 'in my clothes' could work but 'wardrobe' is clearer. Suggestion: Use plural after 'one of the' and a more natural noun like 'wardrobe'.

× I find it one of the one of the type of clothing that suits every single bottom, so I really like wearing it.

✓ I find it one of the types of clothing that suits every bottom, so I really like wearing it.

Remove duplicate phrase 'one of the one of the' and change 'type' to plural 'types' after 'one of the'. 'Every single bottom' is odd but acceptable as 'every bottom' meaning every lower garment; prefer 'every outfit' or 'every bottom'. Suggestion: Avoid repetition and use 'one of the types of clothing'.

× Frankly speaking, yeah, I do actually spend too many time shopping online.

✓ Frankly speaking, yeah, I actually spend too much time shopping online.

'Too many time' is incorrect because 'time' is uncountable and requires 'too much' not 'too many'. Also word order: 'actually' fits better before 'spend'. Suggestion: Use 'too much time' for uncountable nouns and place adverbs correctly.

× I'm not really the type of person who will go window shopping.

✓ I'm not really the type of person who goes window shopping.

Use simple present 'goes' to describe habitual behavior; 'will go' can indicate willingness but is less natural here. Suggestion: Use simple present for habits: 'who goes window shopping'.

× But if we talking about shopping in general, I'm like, I'm addicting to shopping, which is actually my issue.

✓ But if we're talking about shopping in general, I'm, like, addicted to shopping, which is actually my problem.

Missing auxiliary 'are' in 'we're talking'. 'I'm addicting' uses incorrect adjective/participle; correct is 'I'm addicted'. 'Issue' is acceptable but 'problem' is more natural. Suggestion: Use 'we're talking' and 'addicted to'.

× Definitely because during during the work week I usually would go with the suit and with more like classic outfits for my school and any other occasions but if it's the weekend I will just do something more casual and comfortable.

✓ Definitely, because during the work week I usually wear a suit or more classic outfits for school and other occasions, but on weekends I just wear something more casual and comfortable.

Remove duplicated 'during'. Use 'wear' not 'go with' for clothing choices. 'I usually would go with' is awkward; simple present 'I usually wear' suits habitual action. Use 'on weekends' for general weekends. Maintain parallel structure. Suggestion: Use simple present for regular habits and cleaner phrase 'wear a suit' and 'on weekends'.

× I would say I'm that type of person who can pull off in a really like rainbow colored outfit.

✓ I would say I'm the type of person who can pull off a really rainbow-colored outfit.

'Pull off in' is incorrect; use 'pull off' followed by the clothes. 'That type of person' should be 'the type of person'. Add hyphenated 'rainbow-colored' (or 'rainbow colored') and remove filler 'like'. Suggestion: Use 'the type of person who can pull off' and avoid filler words.

× I'm not afraid of colors in my clothes and my style.

✓ I'm not afraid of colors in my clothes or my style.

Use 'or' to link two related but distinct things; 'and' is not wrong but 'or' sounds more natural here. This is minor. Suggestion: Use 'or' to show alternative aspects: 'in my clothes or my style'.

× So mostly I do wear some more like pale bold colors like black and white, but I also have bright pink.

✓ So mostly I wear more neutral colors like black and white, but I also wear bright pink.

'Pale bold colors' is contradictory; likely meant 'neutral' or 'pale' or 'bold'. Use 'wear' not 'do wear' unless for emphasis. 'Some more like' is filler; remove it. Use parallel structure 'I wear X, but I also wear Y'. Suggestion: Choose appropriate adjective ('neutral' or 'bold') and simplify the sentence by removing filler words.