Clothing— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Be more concise and organized: start with a clear topic sentence, avoid hesitations and repetitions, and add one specific detail about the clothing (e.g., features that make them convenient). Use linking word to connect reason.

예시: I usually wear skateboarding clothes. Because I've been skating for 14 years, I prefer loose, durable shorts and a breathable T‑shirt since they allow movement and dry quickly when I sweat.

제안: Answer directly with a clear topic sentence, remove unclear fragments, and give one concise reason with a linking word. Avoid long hesitations and correct grammar (e.g., "I prefer").

예시: I prefer comfortable, casual clothes because I skate almost every day, so I need practical garments rather than formal ones.

제안: Keep the answer short and precise: state your preference, then give a specific reason using a linking word; avoid filler words and minor grammar mistakes ("put on"/"take off").

예시: Yes, I like wearing T‑shirts because they are breathable and easy to put on or take off when I get sweaty while skating.

제안: Be clear and correct: start with a direct response, fix unclear phrasing ("go out scared" is unclear), and add a short reason with a linking word. Reduce fillers.

예시: Not really. Usually I get dressed quickly and go out as soon as I wake up, so I don't spend much time choosing clothes.

제안: Respond directly, avoid repetitions, and give one clear reason. Use linking words to connect to your previous point if needed.

예시: No, I usually wear the same style because I skate every day, even on weekends, so my clothes don't change much.

제안: Be concise and correct vocabulary: say "plain" instead of "blank" and avoid repetition. Give a brief reason with a linking word and correct phrasing about not wanting to think much before going out.

예시: I tend to wear plain black or white T‑shirts because they are simple and I don't want to spend time deciding what to wear before I go out.

× I think I'll be, I'll always wear skateboarding clothes because I've been skating for 14 years and that's like the most, umm, convenient clothes for when I when I skate.

✓ I think I'll always wear skateboarding clothes because I've been skating for 14 years and they are the most convenient clothes for when I skate.

The original mixes contractions and repeats and uses 'be' unnecessarily ('I'll be, I'll always'). Also uses plural reference incorrectly ('clothes ... that's'); change to 'they are' to agree in number. Simplify 'for when I when I skate' to 'for when I skate'. Use present continuous experience 'I've been skating' remains correct.

× I've definitely part MO parse in food, likes to wear comfortable and casual clothes cause most of the time I just do skateboarding every single day so I don't have I don't really have any chance to wear umm smart clothes like more formal.

✓ I definitely prefer to wear comfortable and casual clothes because most of the time I skate every day, so I don't really have a chance to wear smart or more formal clothes.

The original contains unintelligible fragments ('part MO parse in food, likes') and incorrect conjunction use ('cause'). Rearranged sentence to correct subject-verb use ('I prefer'), use 'because' for clarity, correct verb phrase 'I skate every day', and remove redundant 'I don't have I don't really'. Use 'a chance' and parallel adjectives 'smart or more formal'.

× Yes I do because umm when I skate I always get sweaty so the T-shirt is the most umm easiest one to take it on and take it off.

✓ Yes I do because when I skate I always get sweaty, so a T-shirt is the easiest thing to put on and take off.

Use article 'a' before 'T-shirt' and noun 'thing' to be natural. Replace 'take it on' with 'put on' and 'take it off' with 'take off'. Remove unnecessary filler words and superlative 'most easiest' which is incorrect (double comparative).

× Umm, not really in my daily life because I always umm wear clothes and go out scared as soon as I wake up.

✓ Not really. In my daily life I usually just get dressed and go out as soon as I wake up.

'Wear clothes and go out scared' is incorrect wording: likely meant 'get dressed and go out'. 'Scared' is wrong adjective. Rephrase to natural sequence 'get dressed and go out' and split into two sentences for clarity.

× Not at all because like, as I said on like almost every single day, even when I hang out with my friends, just I only go to skateboarding.

✓ Not at all. As I said, almost every day even when I hang out with my friends, I just go skateboarding.

Original has word order and redundant fillers ('like', 'just I only'). Correct subject-verb order 'I just go skateboarding' and remove unnecessary words for clarity.

× I I tend to wear a lot of blank T-shirts in black or white because I don't I don't really like to set up the collar and thinking about it a lot of time before I go out.

✓ I tend to wear a lot of plain black or white T-shirts because I don't really like to adjust collars or spend a lot of time thinking about my outfit before I go out.

'Blank T-shirts in black or white' is awkward; use 'plain black or white T-shirts'. 'Set up the collar' is incorrect; use 'adjust collars'. 'Thinking about it a lot of time' should be 'spend a lot of time thinking'. Correct prepositions and verb forms for natural English.