Clothing— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Be more concise and correct small grammar mistakes; start with a clear topic sentence, use linking words for clarity, and give one specific example with brief detail. Avoid vague endings like "and it also depends."

예시: I usually choose clothes based on the activity. For dancing, I prefer black outfits because they look neat on stage and hide sweat; for hiking, I wear bright, flexible sportswear that improves visibility and movement.

제안: Reduce repetition and correct phrasing. Give a concise contrast using a linking word and one clear reason for each choice. Replace awkward phrases like "in which" with simpler structures.

예시: I generally prefer comfortable clothes because they allow me to move freely during work. However, when I attend weddings or formal events, I choose smart outfits to look respectful and polished.

제안: Combine short sentences to avoid choppiness and correct fragment phrases. Add one specific example of a T-shirt you like and why to show vocabulary and detail.

예시: Yes, I love T-shirts because they are comfortable and versatile. For instance, I often wear oversized cotton tees when relaxing at home since they are breathable and very easy to move in.

제안: Good structure—start with a direct answer, then support. Improve fluency by using a linking phrase and one more specific detail about selection process to enrich content.

예시: No, I don't spend much time choosing clothes because I keep outfits for specific activities. For example, for basketball I always pick lightweight shorts and a moisture-wicking T-shirt so I can move quickly and stay dry.

제안: Avoid the final error ("gloves" instead of "clothes"). Keep the answer within 3–4 sentences and use linking words (however, meanwhile) for contrast. Provide one concrete example of a weekday and weekend outfit.

예시: Yes. On weekdays I usually wear smart-casual outfits like chinos and a shirt for the office; meanwhile, on weekends I prefer athletic wear such as leggings and a hoodie for hiking or running.

제안: Be more concise and avoid repetition. Explain briefly why black is practical and give one contrasting example (when you might choose another color) to show range.

예시: I prefer black because it's practical for dancing and easy to match. However, when I'm hiking or going out in daytime, I sometimes choose bright colors for visibility and a more cheerful look.

× For example, when I go dancing, I prefer wearing black clothes.

✓ For example, when I go dancing, I prefer to wear black clothes.

Preference verbs like 'prefer' are usually followed by the infinitive 'to' + base verb or the gerund, but when comparing or stating a general preference 'prefer to do' is more natural here. Use 'prefer to wear' to match register and clarity.

× They give me much more freedom in terms of choices that I make.

✓ They give me much more freedom in terms of the choices I make.

The phrase needs the definite article 'the' before 'choices' to specify the choices being referred to. Also 'in terms of the choices I make' is a more natural collocation.

× When I go hiking for example, I love flexible clothes and usually bright color.

✓ When I go hiking, for example, I like flexible clothes and usually bright colors.

Use 'like' instead of 'love' for habitual preference (either is possible but 'like' fits better). 'Flexible' modifies 'clothes' correctly; 'bright color' should be plural 'bright colors' to agree with 'clothes'. Also commas improve flow.

× I prefer wearing comfortable clothes.

✓ I prefer to wear comfortable clothes.

As above, 'prefer' is more natural with the infinitive 'to wear' when stating a general habit or preference.

× For example, when I go to work, I prefer wearing something in which I feel flexible, comfortable and something in which allows me free movements.

✓ For example, when I go to work, I prefer to wear something in which I feel flexible and comfortable, and that allows me free movement.

Use 'prefer to wear' for general preference. 'Something in which allows me free movements' is ungrammatical — use a relative clause 'that allows me free movement' and 'free movement' is the correct uncountable phrase. Remove the repeated 'something' and join adjectives with 'and'.

× However, I love smart clothes when I'm going to a wedding or formal related.

✓ However, I like smart clothes when I'm going to a wedding or a formal event.

Use 'like' for preference and 'a formal event' completes the noun phrase; 'formal related' is ungrammatical. Also include the article 'a' before 'wedding' if talking about one occasion, or leave it as 'weddings' for general cases.

× T-shirts are one of my favorite clothes to wear.

✓ T-shirts are one of my favorite types of clothing to wear.

'Clothes' is a plural countable noun and awkward after 'one of my favorite'; better to use 'types of clothing' or 'items of clothing'. This makes the comparison grammatically correct.

× Big, comfortable and just easy to wear anytime, any given day.

✓ They are big, comfortable and easy to wear any time, any given day.

The original is a sentence fragment missing a subject and verb. Add 'They are' to form a full sentence. Also 'any time' is two words; 'just' is unnecessary and informal here.

× No I don't and that is because for different types of activities I have clothes to match.

✓ No, I don't, and that is because I have clothes to match different types of activities.

Add commas for clarity and reorder 'to match different types of activities' for natural word order. The original runs phrases together.

× For example, when I go play basketball I tend to wear shorts and T-shirts.

✓ For example, when I play basketball, I tend to wear shorts and T-shirts.

Use the correct verb form 'play' after 'go' is dropped; if keeping 'go' then use 'go to play'. The corrected form removes 'go' and adds commas.

× That makes my movements much more relaxed and comfortable.

✓ That makes my movements much more relaxed and comfortable.

Sentence is acceptable, but ensure 'movements' refers clearly to body movements. No grammatical change required; included for completeness.

× So in summary, I wear different type of gloves.

✓ So in summary, I wear different types of clothes.

The speaker likely meant 'types of clothes', not 'gloves'. Use plural 'types' and the correct noun 'clothes'.

× I think I like black clothes.

✓ I think I like black clothes.

This sentence is grammatically fine; no change needed. Included for clarity.

× That is because I do dancing a lot.

✓ That is because I dance a lot.

Use the base verb 'dance' for habitual action rather than 'do dancing'. 'Dance a lot' is natural and idiomatic.

× The clothes tend to be neutral in terms of colors.

✓ The clothes tend to be neutral in color.

'Neutral in color' is the natural expression; 'neutral in terms of colors' is wordy and awkward.

× For example, when I go to work, I wear tights, black jeans, and a black T-shirt.

✓ For example, when I go to work, I wear tights, black jeans and a black T-shirt.

Comma before 'and' is optional in lists; removed final comma for consistent style. The sentence is otherwise correct.