Clothing— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Clarifiez et simplifiez la réponse : commencez par une phrase principale claire, évitez les répétitions et fournissez un ou deux détails précis. Utilisez des mots de liaison simples pour la cohérence.

예시: I prefer comfortable clothes that allow me to move easily. For example, I usually choose casual but stylish items like soft jeans and a fitted sweater, which are both practical and fashionable.

제안: Énoncez clairement votre préférence, puis donnez une condition et un exemple précis. Évitez les répétitions et les mots vagues comme “modernity” sans contexte.

예시: I generally prefer comfortable, casual clothes, but for special occasions I choose smart outfits. For instance, I wear a tailored dress or blazer to weddings or formal dinners to look polished and respectful.

제안: Répondez directement puis expliquez avec des détails concrets ; évitez les hésitations et corrigez le vocabulaire incorrect (ex. “teachers” → “T‑shirts”).

예시: Yes, I like wearing T‑shirts a lot. I have many for different occasions — plain ones for university and printed sport T‑shirts for exercising, so my collection includes both simple and patterned designs.

제안: Bonne structure ; améliorez la précision et évitez généralisations inutiles. Donnez un exemple concret de votre processus et transition logique.

예시: Yes, I do spend some time choosing clothes because I like outfits to match. For example, I usually spend about 20 minutes selecting a top, bottoms and accessories each morning to make sure everything coordinates.

제안: Commencez par une phrase de contraste claire (weekdays vs weekends) et utilisez des connecteurs comme “whereas” ou “but”. Corrigez la conjugaison et la formulation.

예시: Yes. On weekdays I usually wear comfortable yet smart clothes for university, whereas on weekends I prefer casual outfits like jeans and a loose top when I meet friends or relax with family.

제안: Répondez directement et listez 2–3 couleurs avec raisons courtes. Évitez hésitations et phrases inachevées ; faites une conclusion simple.

예시: I mostly wear blue and beige because I find them easy to match — I have many blue jeans and beige tops. I also own several black items since they are versatile and practical.

× I prefer to wear comfortable with the wearings to stay comfortable or that they can do what I should do.

✓ I prefer to wear comfortable clothes so I can stay comfortable and do what I need to do.

The original sentence misuses nouns and adjectives (wearable forms) and has awkward phrasing. Use 'comfortable clothes' (adjective + noun) and a clear purpose clause 'so I can stay comfortable and do what I need to do'. Avoid repeating 'comfortable' unnecessarily and replace vague 'what I should do' with 'what I need to do' for clarity.

× For example, I love to to to wear comfortable and we can say casual and in the same time it's stylish.

✓ For example, I love to wear comfortable, casual clothes that are stylish at the same time.

The original has repeated 'to' and incorrect structure. Use the infinitive 'to wear' once and combine adjectives correctly: 'comfortable, casual clothes that are stylish at the same time.' This puts adjectives before the noun and uses a relative clause for 'stylish'.

× I said that I like to wear comfortable and casual clothes, but for some some occasions I wear I love to wear smart clothes with modernity and respect and style and look gorgeous.

✓ I like to wear comfortable, casual clothes, but on some occasions I like to wear smart clothes that look modern, respectful, and stylish.

The sentence has repetition and awkward noun choices ('modernity and respect'). Use adjectives ('modern, respectful, and stylish') and correct preposition 'on some occasions'. Maintain parallel structure 'I like to wear'.

× Yes, of course I'd love to wear T-shirts in my closet. Uh, I have, umm, several teachers for sports, for some occasions for go to university, for example.

✓ Yes, of course I like wearing T-shirts. I have several T-shirts for sports and for going to university, for example.

The speaker mistakenly said 'teachers' instead of 'T-shirts' and used incorrect verb forms. Use 'like wearing' or 'like to wear' and the noun 'T-shirts'. Use 'for going to university' or 'to go to university' for purpose.

× So I have a lot of designs and simple.

✓ So I have a lot of designs, including simple ones.

The original is incomplete and lacks a noun for 'simple'. Use 'including simple ones' to indicate simple designs.

× Yes, as a girl it takes me a lot of time to find a suitable outfit and match each piece with the other one.

✓ Yes, as a girl it takes me a lot of time to find a suitable outfit and to match each piece with the others.

Use parallel infinitive 'to find' and 'to match'. Also use 'the others' (plural) instead of 'the other one' when matching multiple pieces.

× So it takes me around 20 minutes a day to find the good outfits.

✓ So it takes me around 20 minutes a day to find good outfits.

Use 'good outfits' without the definite article 'the' here. 'The good outfits' sounds unnatural; 'good outfits' is more natural in this context.

× But for weekends I just want to gather with my family to spend time with my friends so I were comfortable and casual.

✓ But on weekends I want to spend time with my family and friends, so I am comfortable and casual.

Use preposition 'on weekends'. Replace 'gather with my family to spend time with my friends' with 'spend time with my family and friends' for clarity. Use present tense 'I am' not 'I were'.

× Accidentally, I find that I have a lot of blue, uh, clothes, specially I have a lot of jeans and also I love beige, so I find that I have a lot of beige and the blue clothes in my closet in addition to the black, which is known that it's the.

✓ Actually, I find that I have a lot of blue clothes, especially jeans. I also like beige, so I have a lot of beige and blue clothes in my closet, in addition to black, which is classic.

'Accidentally' is the wrong word; use 'actually' or 'indeed'. Use 'especially' not 'specially' for emphasis. Clean up repetition and finish the idea: 'black, which is classic.' Make adjectives and nouns agree and order words clearly.