Clothing— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Be concise and avoid repetition. Start with a clear topic sentence, then give one or two specific reasons with linking words. Use correct adjectives and phrasing (e.g., "relaxed-fit" not "relax fit").

예시: I prefer relaxed-fit clothes because they are comfortable and allow me to move freely. For example, I often wear loose trousers and oversized shirts when I travel or study at home.

제안: Answer directly and avoid repeating the same idea. Give a clear contrast using linking words like "however" or "on the other hand" and provide a specific situation when you might choose smart clothes.

예시: I prefer comfortable, casual clothes because they let me move easily and suit most of my daily activities. However, I wear smart clothes for formal events or job interviews to look more professional.

제안: Keep sentences grammatical and avoid word repetition. Give one clear reason and a short example of occasions when you wear T-shirts, using linking words like "for example" or "such as".

예시: Yes, I enjoy wearing T-shirts, especially oversized ones, because they are comfortable and casual. For example, I usually wear them when I travel, hang out with friends, or relax at home.

제안: Be more precise and correct grammar. Use one main reason with supporting details and linking phrases like "because" and "so". Avoid repeating words like "clothes" unnecessarily.

예시: Yes, I spend quite a bit of time choosing clothes because I want them to fit well and look good. So I usually try items on and check the fabric before buying.

제안: Structure your answer with a topic sentence and a clear contrast using linking words like "on weekdays" and "on weekends." Use correct vocabulary (e.g., "track pants" or "tracksuit") and avoid vague phrases.

예시: Yes. On weekdays I usually wear casual clothes such as jeans and a shirt for work or classes. On weekends I prefer relaxed outfits like track pants and oversized T-shirts when I travel or hang out with friends.

제안: Answer directly and give a brief explanation or preference. Use clearer phrasing like "I don't have a favorite color" and specify why you choose certain colors (e.g., versatility, easy to match).

예시: I don't have a single favorite color, but I mostly wear black, white, and other light, muted colors because they are easy to match and look neat.

× I I like relax fit clothes very much because it is very relaxing and comfortable to wear and.

✓ I like relaxed-fit clothes very much because they are very comfortable to wear.

Repeated 'I' is a typo and inconsistent pronoun/reference: 'relax fit' should be 'relaxed-fit' (adjective form) and 'it' refers to plural 'clothes' so use 'they' and plural verb 'are'. Remove trailing conjunction. Suggestion: say 'I like relaxed-fit clothes very much because they are comfortable.'

× Yes, I prefer to wear comfortable clothes because it is very relaxing and we can freely move in that clothes and casual clothes, it's where we can wear that anywhere, wear a casual function or something going on or smart clothes which makes us smart in looking and.

✓ Yes, I prefer to wear comfortable clothes because they are relaxing and allow us to move freely. Casual clothes can be worn almost anywhere, for casual events, while smart clothes make us look smarter.

Use plural pronoun 'they' for 'clothes' and plural verb agreement. 'Move in that clothes' is incorrect; use 'move freely' or 'move in those clothes'. Simplify run-on sentence into clear clauses. Replace 'it's where we can wear that anywhere' with 'can be worn almost anywhere'.

× Yes, I like wearing T-shirt, like oversized T-shirt is my favorite T-shirt because it is very freely and comfortable to wear and we can wear anywhere we we want to wear it, like to travel or weekends with friends or at home.

✓ Yes, I like wearing T-shirts. Oversized T-shirts are my favorite because they are very comfortable and free to wear; we can wear them anywhere, such as when traveling, on weekends with friends, or at home.

Use plural 'T-shirts' for general preference (article issue). 'Like oversized T-shirt is my favorite T-shirt' is ungrammatical—rewrite. 'It is very freely' incorrect: use adjective 'comfortable' or 'feel free'. Pronouns must match plural noun 'T-shirts' so use 'they'/'them'. Remove repetition 'we we'.

× Yes, I spend lot of time to buying clothes or choosing clothes because clothes is very much important that we can wear everyday so we can we should find a perfect fit for our body relaxing and looking good.

✓ Yes, I spend a lot of time buying or choosing clothes because clothes are very important since we wear them every day, so we should find a perfect fit that is comfortable and looks good.

Missing article 'a' in 'a lot'. Use gerund 'buying' without 'to'. 'Clothes' is plural so use 'are' not 'is'. 'Everyday' as an adjective differs from 'every day' (here use 'every day'). Rearrange 'body relaxing' to 'comfortable'. Remove duplicate 'we'.

× Yes, I wear different kinds of clothes. On weekdays I wear casual fit like jeans, shorts and on weekends I wear relaxed fit like over such track T-shirt. It's my favorite outfit for weekends for go travel or hang out with friends.

✓ Yes, I wear different kinds of clothes. On weekdays I wear casual outfits like jeans and shorts, and on weekends I wear relaxed-fit clothes like oversized T-shirts or tracksuits. Those are my favorite weekend outfits for traveling or hanging out with friends.

'Casual fit' and 'relaxed fit' need hyphens and clearer nouns; 'over such track T-shirt' is ungrammatical—replace with 'oversized T-shirts or tracksuits'. Use plural 'outfits' and correct verb forms 'for traveling' and 'hanging out'. Use 'those' to refer back to plural noun.

× There is no such color that I like, but I mostly wear black, white and some light color which is not that much bright but looking good.

✓ There is no single color that I like, but I mostly wear black, white, and some light colors that are not very bright but look good.

'There is' can be used with singular 'no single color' — clarified. 'Some light color' should be plural 'some light colors' to match context. 'Not that much bright' is colloquial; use 'not very bright'. Use correct verb 'look' to agree with plural 'colors'.