Clothing— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Give a direct, clear topic sentence stating what you like, then add 1–2 specific supporting details. Avoid asking the examiner a question and correct grammar (e.g., tense and word choice). Keep it under 5 sentences and use linking words for clarity.

예시: I usually wear comfortable clothes like T-shirts and shorts. In my area the weather changes a lot, so I prefer breathable fabrics that keep me cool in the heat and are easy to layer when it gets chilly.

제안: Start with a clear statement of preference, then give concise reasons with linking words (because/so). Correct grammar (especially articles and relative clauses) and avoid unnecessary negative comparisons.

예시: I prefer comfortable, casual clothes because they suit my lifestyle and I find them easier to maintain. Also, I don’t own many clothes, so I focus on practical pieces rather than following fashion trends.

제안: Answer directly and expand with one specific reason or example. Use precise vocabulary (e.g., ‘practical’ or ‘comfortable’ rather than unclear words like ‘printable’). Avoid filler sounds and keep it to 1–2 sentences.

예시: Yes, I like wearing T-shirts because they are comfortable and practical for everyday activities. For example, I wear them when I go out with friends or do sports.

제안: Give a direct answer and then provide specific contexts when you spend more time choosing clothes, using correct grammar and linking words (for example/especially when). Avoid unclear phrases like ‘having a living with your family outside.’

예시: Yes, I spend more time choosing clothes for special occasions. For example, I carefully pick outfits for weddings or family celebrations to look neat and appropriate.

제안: State your habit clearly and add a brief reason or example to enrich the answer. Use a linking word for coherence (because/so) and correct noun forms (T-shirts).

예시: No, I usually wear T-shirts and shorts every day because they are comfortable and suit my casual routine. Even on weekends I prefer the same relaxed style.

제안: Provide a clear topic sentence naming the colours you prefer, then give 1–2 specific reasons (e.g., match skin tone, easy to combine). Avoid vague or invented phrases and make sure word choices are accurate and simple.

예시: I prefer light colours like beige and pale blue because they match my skin tone and are easy to mix with other items. Sometimes I also choose deep red for special occasions because it looks smart and eye-catching.

× Are you sure you wear some comfortable clothes such as T-shirts and shorts for to make it freshable outside? Especially in our season it is very hot and cold.

✓ Do you usually wear comfortable clothes such as T-shirts and shorts to feel comfortable outside? Especially in our season it can be very hot and cold.

The original uses 'Are you sure you wear' which is an odd use of 'are you sure' with habitual action; 'Do you usually wear' correctly asks about habits (present simple). 'Some comfortable clothes' is acceptable but 'to make it freshable' is incorrect: 'freshable' is not a word and 'for to' is nonstandard; use 'to feel comfortable' or 'to stay cool/warm'. 'It is very hot and cold' is contradictory and unclear; 'it can be very hot and cold' expresses variable weather. Replace pronoun/phrasing to match the question context and present simple habit usage.

× I prefer comfortable and casual clothes specially I don't have much clothes in my closet so I'm not like other people that believe fashionable when it comes to clothing.

✓ I prefer comfortable, casual clothes, especially because I don't have many clothes in my closet, so I'm not like other people who follow fashion when it comes to clothing.

Errors: 'specially' should be 'especially' (word choice); 'much clothes' is incorrect with countable plural 'clothes' — use 'many clothes' or 'many items of clothing'; run-on sentence needs commas and restructuring. 'That believe fashionable' is incorrect: use 'who follow fashion' or 'who believe in being fashionable.' Use 'who' for people (pronoun correction). Also include articles/commas to clarify meaning.

× Yes, I do like wearing T-shirts. It's more, uh, printable and a bit comfortable.

✓ Yes, I like wearing T-shirts. They're more practical and a bit comfortable.

'Do like' is grammatically acceptable but 'I like' is more natural. 'Printable' is wrong choice — likely meant 'practical' or 'durable'; replace with 'practical.' Also T-shirts (plural) take 'they're' not 'it's'. Adjust agreement and adjective choice.

× Yes, I do spend a lot of time choosing clothes, especially when you're having a fancy event or having a living with your family outside.

✓ Yes, I do spend a lot of time choosing clothes, especially when I'm attending a fancy event or going out with my family.

Mixing second person 'you're' with first person context is incorrect; use 'I'm' to match the speaker. 'Having a living with your family outside' is ungrammatical — likely meant 'going out with my family' or 'having a family outing.' Use verbs that fit: 'attending' a fancy event, 'going out' with family. Ensure consistent pronouns.

× No, I prefer T-shirt and shorts every day.

✓ No, I prefer T-shirts and shorts every day.

Compound clothing items should be plural when speaking generally: 'T-shirt' singular is odd when saying 'every day' — use 'T-shirts and shorts.' Also could use 'I prefer to wear T-shirts and shorts every day.' This fixes number agreement.

× For me the colour clothes are light as having shade red wine rather burgeoning, especially their online palette or suitable on my skin tone.

✓ I prefer light colors such as wine red and other muted shades, especially palettes I see online that suit my skin tone.

Original sentence has multiple issues: word order and choice ('colour clothes' should be 'colors' or 'the colors I like'); 'light as having shade red wine rather burgeoning' is ungrammatical and unclear—likely meant 'colors such as wine red or muted shades.' 'Their online palette or suitable on my skin tone' mixes pronouns and phrases; use 'palettes I see online that suit my skin tone.' This corrects adjective use, word order, and pronoun reference to convey intended meaning.