Clothing— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Be more concise and coherent. Start with a clear topic sentence, then give 1–2 specific supporting details using linking words. Avoid repetition and unclear phrases.

예시: I usually wear casual clothes, such as jeans and sneakers, because they are comfortable and easy to put on. For example, when I meet friends I prefer a simple T-shirt and jeans so I can move around and feel relaxed.

제안: Organize the answer with a clear opening sentence stating your preference, then add a specific reason and an example. Use linking words (“because”, “for example”) to connect ideas and correct minor grammar errors.

예시: I prefer comfortable, casual clothes because they make me feel relaxed and confident. For example, when I go to class I wear loose trousers and a sweater because they allow me to move freely and focus on my work.

제안: Answer directly then explain reasons with clear vocabulary. Clarify cultural or workplace specifics politely and correct phrasing (e.g., 'a T-shirt under my abaya'). Keep it to 2–3 sentences.

예시: Not really; I prefer loose shirts because they look more comfortable and suit my style. However, at work I sometimes wear a T-shirt under my abaya for modesty and convenience.

제안: Be careful with verb tense and avoid confusing or irrelevant phrases. Start with a general statement about your usual habit, then give a specific example of when you spend more time and who helps you. Remove unrelated remarks.

예시: I usually spend a moderate amount of time choosing clothes because I like to look presentable. For special events I spend more time planning my outfit and often ask my sister for advice.

제안: Clarify whether you change styles or not; avoid contradictory sentences. Use a clear topic sentence and give reasons or an exception (e.g., work clothes). Correct unclear words and keep it brief.

예시: No, I usually wear similar casual clothes on weekdays and weekends because they are comfortable. The only exception is at work, where I wear more formal or specific attire.

제안: Avoid repetition and use one linking sentence to add exception. State your preference and give a brief reason, then mention when you choose different colours.

예시: I prefer light colours such as sky blue, yellow and green because they make me feel cheerful and energetic. However, for parties or festivals I choose brighter, more striking colours to celebrate.

× I usually wear casual clothes like shoes and trousers some I think they make me feel comfortable and they're easier and easy to wear every day I feel.

✓ I usually wear casual clothes like shoes and trousers because I think they make me feel comfortable and are easy to wear every day.

The original sentence uses 'some' incorrectly as a connector and repeats 'easier and easy'. Use 'because' to show reason and keep adjective form consistent: 'are easy' agrees with plural subject 'clothes'. Remove redundant phrases for clarity.

× And it's simple and good.

✓ It is simple and good.

Beginning a sentence with 'And' is informal and unnecessary here. Use 'It is' for a complete sentence; the rest is grammatical.

× It's simple and good for hanging out with friends.

✓ It is simple and good for hanging out with friends.

Same as above: replace contraction with full form if formality desired; sentence otherwise correct.

× Clothes I prefer to wear comfortable and get your clothes.

✓ I prefer to wear comfortable, casual clothes.

Original word order is incorrect and contains 'get your clothes' which is meaningless here. Reorder subject and verb and use appropriate adjectives 'comfortable, casual' to convey intended meaning.

× Most of the time I feel more relaxed and confident in them, especially when I go to class or hang out with friends.

✓ Most of the time I feel more relaxed and confident in them, especially when I go to class or hang out with friends.

This sentence is correct in tense and structure; no change needed.

× It's just easier to move around and do things when I am comfortable.

✓ It's just easier to move around and do things when I'm comfortable.

Contraction 'I'm' is acceptable; original is fine. Change is optional. No grammar error.

× No, I don't really like wearing T-shirts.

✓ No, I don't really like wearing T-shirts.

Sentence is grammatically correct; no change needed.

× I prefer shirts like long or short or baggy because they look more comfortable and suit me better.

✓ I prefer shirts that are long, short-sleeved, or baggy because they look more comfortable and suit me better.

Original lists 'long or short' without noun; specify 'short-sleeved' or 'short' plus context. Use 'that are' to link noun and descriptions for clarity.

× However, it depends. When I am at my workplace I put AT shirt under an abaya.

✓ However, it depends. When I am at my workplace I wear a shirt under an abaya.

'Put AT shirt' is incorrect. Use 'wear a shirt' for habitual clothing. Use article 'an' with 'abaya' already present; 'a shirt' is required.

× Yesterday you usually spend quite a lot of time picking out my clothes.

✓ I usually spend quite a lot of time picking out my clothes.

Mixes 'Yesterday' with 'usually'. Remove 'Yesterday' to match habitual present 'usually'. Also 'you' should be 'I' to refer to the speaker.

× I want to look good, so I try to make my outfits and sometimes ask my sister for advice.

✓ I want to look good, so I try to put outfits together and sometimes ask my sister for advice.

'Make my outfits' is unidiomatic; use 'put outfits together' to describe selecting and coordinating clothes.

× I can make me a wife, specially if I have a special event to go out to.

✓ I can ask my wife for help, especially if I have a special event to go to.

Original is unclear: 'make me a wife' is incorrect. If speaker means 'ask my sister' or 'ask my wife', choose correct pronoun and verb. 'Especially' spelling fixed and 'to go to' word order corrected.

× No I don't, I really change my style.

✓ No, I don't really change my style.

Original splits phrase and punctuation awkwardly. Combine for correct negation and meaning.

× I wear similar clothes every day because it's easy and comfortable for me.

✓ I wear similar clothes every day because it's easy and comfortable for me.

Sentence is correct; no change needed.

× Maybe just because it's a cursor dress so that's why.

✓ Maybe it's just because it's a casual dress.

'Cursor' is a misspelling of 'casual', and 'so that's why' is redundant. Simplify to clear cause.

× But I wear a buyer at my workplace.

✓ But I wear a blazer at my workplace.

'Buyer' is incorrect word choice. If speaker meant a professional garment, 'blazer' or 'uniform' fits; choose appropriate noun. Change to 'blazer' as likely intended.

× I like wearing light colours like sky blue, yellow and green.

✓ I like wearing light colours such as sky blue, yellow, and green.

Change 'like' to 'such as' for examples; add commas for list clarity. Otherwise correct.

× They make me feel happy and full of energy. They make me feel happy and full of energy.

✓ They make me feel happy and full of energy.

Sentence is repeated; remove duplicate. No grammatical error otherwise.

× But however I prefer to be a bright colours at parties or festival.

✓ However, I prefer bright colours at parties or festivals.

Remove redundant 'but'. Use 'However' alone. 'Prefer to be a bright colours' is ungrammatical—use 'prefer bright colours'. Make 'festival' plural or use 'a festival' and adjust articles.