Clothing— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Be more concise, correct grammar, and follow a clear structure: topic sentence + 1–2 supporting details. Avoid repetition and filler words. Use appropriate vocabulary (e.g., "traditional," "western," "Indo-western," "casual").

예시: I like a mix of clothing styles. Most of my everyday clothes are casual, such as T-shirts and shorts, but I also own traditional and Indo-western outfits that I wear for special occasions.

제안: Answer directly and avoid repetition. Use linking words to connect reasons (e.g., "because," "so"). Fix tense and word choice errors (use "I usually prefer" not "I used to").

예시: I usually prefer comfortable, casual clothes for everyday wear because they make me feel relaxed and allow me to move easily, so I can be more productive throughout the day.

제안: Be clear about your preference and give a concise reason. Correct word forms ("wardrobe," "T-shirts") and avoid unclear phrases. Provide a short comparison if you prefer other garments.

예시: I own many T-shirts, but I don't wear them often because they don't always match my outfits. I usually prefer blouses or tops for a neater look.

제안: Structure your answer: give a direct statement then explain with specific examples. Remove fillers and fix tense errors. Use linking words like "because," "so," and "however."

예시: Yes, I often spend time choosing clothes because I like to match my outfit to the occasion. For example, I usually pick clothes the day before a party, but if I'm short on time I choose something quick in the morning.

제안: Give a clear direct answer then support with specific contrasts between weekdays and weekends. Fix vocabulary errors ("flock" -> "flock"? likely "flock" wrong; use "floral" or "loose"), and grammar. Use linking words to make it coherent.

예시: Yes. On weekdays I usually wear simple, comfortable clothes like T-shirts and shorts at home, but on weekends I choose outfits based on activities—for a movie I wear casual clothes, and for a beach trip I wear swimwear or light, loose clothing.

제안: Be more concise and precise. State preferences directly and give a clear reason without overgeneralizing. Use correct phrasing ("complexion" and "make me look fairer").

예시: I usually prefer dark and pastel colors because dark shades feel practical and pastel tones suit my skin and make me feel more confident.

× There are many clothes in my wardrobe and I like to build all of them somewhere ethnic.

✓ There are many clothes in my wardrobe and I like to hang some of them in an ethnic style.

'Build' is incorrect collocation with clothes; use 'hang' or 'keep'. Also 'somewhere ethnic' needs article and clearer phrasing 'in an ethnic style'. Use of 'all' conflicted with 'some'; adjusted to 'some'.

× Some of traditionals, some are western and some are Indo westerns.

✓ Some are traditional, some are western, and some are Indo-western.

Adjective forms are required: 'traditional' not 'traditionals'; 'Indo-western' is a compound adjective and should be hyphenated or treated as a noun phrase. Ensure parallel structure and commas between items.

× You.

✓ (Delete or replace with a continuation like 'And you?')

Single word 'You.' is unclear and not grammatically correct in this context. It should be a complete question or omitted. Use 'And you?' to ask the examiner the same question.

× On daily purposes I used to wear simple clothes like casuals or shorts, but on occasions I used to wear traditional or ethnic wear.

✓ On a daily basis I wear simple clothes like casuals or shorts, but on special occasions I wear traditional or ethnic clothes.

'Used to' indicates a past habit; the student describes current habitual behaviour so present simple 'wear' is correct. 'On daily purposes' is incorrect collocation; use 'on a daily basis' or 'daily'. 'Ethnic wear' can be 'ethnic clothes'.

× I used to wear a lot of clothes, but the clothes I usually prefer to wear on my daily purposes on my daily wares are casual clothes because it fills me very comfortable and helps throughout the day.

✓ I wear many clothes, but on a daily basis I usually prefer casual clothes because they make me feel very comfortable and help me throughout the day.

Again 'used to' wrongly suggests past habit; present simple is needed. 'It fills me very comfortable' is incorrect; use 'they make me feel comfortable'. Agreement between plural 'clothes' and verb/pronoun must be maintained.

× It makes me more, umm, energetic as I don't feel clumsy.

✓ They make me more energetic because I don't feel clumsy.

Pronoun should agree with plural 'clothes' ('they'). 'As' is acceptable but 'because' is clearer. Remove filler 'umm' in formal responses.

× I used to things to very carefully so used to wear casual clothes.

✓ I pay attention to things very carefully, so I usually wear casual clothes.

Original is ungrammatical. Replace 'used to things to very carefully' with 'I pay attention to things very carefully' and use present simple 'usually wear' for habitual action.

× I have many T-shirts with my wardrobe but I prefer not to wear it more because I feel that it doesn't go with the outfit and my daily but somehow I wear some of them.

✓ I have many T-shirts in my wardrobe, but I prefer not to wear them often because I feel they don't go with my outfits; however, I sometimes wear a few of them.

Use 'in my wardrobe', not 'with'. Pronouns must agree in number: 'T-shirts' -> 'them'. 'Often' fits better than 'more', and sentence needs clearer clause structure.

× But usually I prefer tops instead of the E shirts.

✓ But usually I prefer tops instead of T-shirts.

'E shirts' is likely a typo for 'T-shirts'. Maintain consistent term and correct spelling.

× Yes, I usually spend a lot of time on clothes because, uh, when I have to go for some movie, I have to select clothes accordingly.

✓ Yes, I usually spend a lot of time choosing clothes because when I go to the movies I have to select my outfit accordingly.

'Spend time on clothes' is awkward; use 'spend time choosing clothes'. 'Go for some movie' -> 'go to the movies'. Use 'outfit' or 'clothes' consistently.

× When I have go on a event, I have to select the clothes accordingly.

✓ When I have to go to an event, I have to select my clothes accordingly.

Missing 'to' after 'have'. Use 'go to an event' and 'my clothes' for natural phrasing.

× But somehow I'll I usually done it a day before, but when I don't get time, I used to select them in the morning and over on the time always.

✓ But usually I do it a day before; when I don't have time, I choose them in the morning.

Original mixes tenses and has extraneous words. Use present simple 'do' and 'choose' for habitual actions. Remove 'I'll', 'done', and 'over on the time always' which are ungrammatical.

× I love to wear many styles like western, indo western, traditional but on my weekdays I usually prefer to wear T-shirt and shorts which make me more comfortable if I'm at home.

✓ I love to wear many styles like western, Indo-western, and traditional, but on weekdays I usually prefer to wear T-shirts and shorts, which make me more comfortable at home.

Capitalize 'Indo-western' and hyphenate if needed. Use plural 'T-shirts' and simpler phrase 'at home'. Add commas for clarity.

× If I had to go outside, I select my clothes accordingly.

✓ If I have to go out, I select my clothes accordingly.

'If I had to' suggests hypothetical past; for general present condition use 'If I have to'. 'Go outside' is fine but 'go out' is more natural.

× So if I'm going on a movie I'll wear some casual.

✓ So if I'm going to the movies I'll wear something casual.

Use 'going to the movies' and 'something casual' or 'casual clothes'. 'Some casual' is ungrammatical.

× If I'm going on a beach then I'll wear a flock.

✓ If I'm going to the beach then I'll wear a frock.

'Going on a beach' should be 'going to the beach'. 'Flock' is a misspelling; likely 'frock' (a dress) is intended.

× So it depends upon the weekdays. If I'm going then I will wear that clothes.

✓ So it depends on the day of the week. If I'm going, then I will wear those clothes.

'Depends on' is the correct preposition. 'That clothes' is incorrect: plural 'clothes' takes 'those'. Also 'weekdays' better specified as 'day of the week' in this context.

× There is no perfect choice of mind of choosing the colors, but I usually wear dark or some pastel colors because I think it makes my complexion fair and helps me to be confident.

✓ There is no perfect choice in my mind when choosing colors, but I usually wear dark or pastel colors because I think they make my complexion look better and help me feel more confident.

'Choice of mind' is incorrect; use 'in my mind'. 'Some pastel colors' is redundant; 'pastel colors' suffices. 'It makes my complexion fair' should agree with plural subject 'they' and 'fair' may be culturally sensitive—'look better' or 'suit my complexion' is clearer. Use 'help me feel more confident'.