Clothing— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Be direct and concise. Start with a clear topic sentence stating your preference, then give one or two specific reasons with linking words. Correct basic grammar (singular/plural, articles) and avoid repetition.

예시: I prefer comfortable clothes rather than fashionable ones. For example, I like soft cotton shirts and loose trousers because they let me move freely and keep me relaxed during work or when I meet people.

제안: Answer directly and use simple clear sentences. State your preference, give one reason and a short example. Avoid unclear phrases and double negatives.

예시: I prefer comfortable, casual clothes rather than smart outfits. For instance, I often choose a neat polo shirt and chinos because they look good but still allow me to feel relaxed all day.

제안: Give a clear contrast between past and present habits with linking words like 'but' or 'however'. Use precise vocabulary (button-up shirt, long-sleeve shirt) and keep to two or three supporting details.

예시: I used to wear a lot of T-shirts when I was a child, but now I prefer long-sleeve button-up shirts. They protect my skin from the sun and give me a smarter, more put-together appearance.

제안: Keep the answer simple and fluent. Say directly whether you spend time choosing clothes and give one specific condition when you would take longer. Avoid confusing idioms and maintain correct pronouns and verb forms.

예시: No, I usually don't spend much time choosing clothes; I pick whatever looks comfortable. However, if I have an important event, I will spend more time selecting an appropriate outfit.

제안: Answer clearly about the two situations and use linking words like 'during weekdays' and 'on weekends'. Provide one example of weekday and one of weekend clothing. Fix repeated words and unclear phrases.

예시: During weekdays I usually wear simple, comfortable clothes like a shirt and jeans for work. On weekends I dress more casually or fashionably, for example I might wear a nicer jacket and sneakers when I go out with friends.

제안: Give a clear, grammatical response and avoid vague, mixed ideas. State that you have no strong favorite, then give two specific seasonal preferences with reasons. Use simple vocabulary for clarity.

예시: I don't have a single favourite colour, but I tend to wear black in winter because it feels warm and stylish. In summer I prefer lighter colours like white or beige because they feel cooler and reflect sunlight.

× Well, I prefer more comfortable dress rather than the fashionable and more attractive place because the dress which gives you comfortable make you feel so confident in front of people, while talking, while working and while doing more activities around your home or your office that makes you.

✓ Well, I prefer more comfortable dresses rather than fashionable or attractive ones because a dress that gives you comfort makes you feel confident in front of people when talking, working, or doing activities at home or in the office.

The sentence has incorrect adjective/adverb forms and word choice: 'comfortable dress' should be plural 'comfortable dresses' to match general preference; 'the fashionable and more attractive place' is incorrect noun and phrasing — use 'fashionable or attractive ones.' 'Which gives you comfortable' should be 'that gives you comfort' or 'that makes you comfortable.' Verb agreement: 'make you feel' should be 'makes you feel' to agree with singular 'a dress.' Also simplify repeated 'while' phrases into 'when' and use parallel verbs. Suggestion: use clear noun phrases, correct comparative/connective words, and ensure subject-verb agreement.

× I prefer to wear comfortable dress because it is my cup of dress, the dress which makes me attractive but don't do not give me the comfortness that I would not. I prefer to wear because that makes me so sigh.

✓ I prefer to wear comfortable dresses because they suit me; a dress that makes me attractive but does not give me comfort is not for me. I choose comfort because it makes me feel relaxed.

Errors include adjective/adverb misuse and double negatives: 'comfortable dress' should be plural 'comfortable dresses' for general statements; 'it is my cup of dress' is incorrect idiom — use 'they suit me' or 'they are my preference.' 'Don't do not give me the comfortness' contains a double negative and wrong noun form 'comfortness' — use 'does not give me comfort.' 'That I would not' is unclear; simplify to 'is not for me.' Final sentence 'makes me so sigh' is ungrammatical — use 'makes me feel relaxed.' Suggestion: replace incorrect idioms, avoid double negatives, and use correct noun forms.

× Well to be honest, I used to wear a lot of T-shirt in my childhood but these days the T-shirt is not being my cup of tea.

✓ Well, to be honest, I used to wear a lot of T-shirts in my childhood, but these days T-shirts are not my cup of tea.

Plural and verb form issues: 'T-shirt' should be plural 'T-shirts' when speaking generally; 'the T-shirt is not being my cup of tea' uses a progressive passive 'is not being' incorrectly — use simple present 'are not my cup of tea.' 'Used to' is correct for past habitual action. Suggestion: use plural nouns for general items and simple present for general preferences.

× I prefer to wear more full shirt which helps to protect your skin and also make you feel more comfortable and look enhanced look.

✓ I prefer to wear fuller shirts that help protect your skin, make you feel more comfortable, and improve your appearance.

Problems: 'more full shirt' is incorrect — use 'fuller shirts' or 'long-sleeved shirts'; 'which helps to protect your skin' should be 'that help protect your skin' to match plural 'shirts.' 'Also make you feel' must agree in number: 'make' for plural subject. 'Look enhanced look' is redundant and ungrammatical — use 'improve your appearance.' Suggestion: ensure noun plurality and parallel verb forms, and remove redundant words.

× Ha, from my bottom of her head I would like to say that I am not a choosy person.

✓ Well, from the bottom of my heart, I would like to say that I am not a choosy person.

Phrase 'from my bottom of her head' is nonsensical and mixes pronouns. Correct idiom is 'from the bottom of my heart.' Also choose consistent pronouns 'my' not 'her.' Suggestion: use correct idiomatic expressions and consistent pronouns.

× I just pick up clothes which I feel I it will give me comfort while waiting.

✓ I just pick up clothes that I feel will give me comfort while wearing them.

Pronoun errors: 'which I feel I it will' has extra pronouns 'I it' and wrong relative pronoun; 'while waiting' should be 'while wearing them.' Use 'that' or 'which' appropriately, remove extraneous pronouns, and ensure the gerund matches the intended action. Suggestion: simplify clause to 'clothes that I feel will give me comfort while wearing them.'

× But in the knee if I have to choose the trace, I would not take a long time while choosing the phrase.

✓ But in the end, if I have to make a careful choice, I would not take a long time choosing.

Many wrong words: 'in the knee' should be 'in the end'; 'choose the trace' and 'choosing the phrase' are incorrect substitutes. The intended meaning is 'if I have to choose carefully' and 'I would not take a long time choosing.' Suggestion: use correct idioms and avoid literal word substitutions.

× In my weekdays I normally go for the work so I do not wear high style level clothes.

✓ On weekdays I normally go to work, so I do not wear very stylish clothes.

Use correct preposition 'on weekdays' and verb 'go to work.' 'High style level clothes' is incorrect — use 'very stylish clothes' or 'high-fashion clothes.' Suggestion: use natural collocations like 'go to work' and 'stylish clothes.'

× I only prefer the comfortable clothes which which makes my work life easier and comfortable.

✓ I prefer comfortable clothes that make my work life easier and more comfortable.

Duplicate 'which which' and agreement: 'clothes which which makes' should be 'clothes that make' because 'clothes' is plural and takes plural verb 'make.' Also avoid repeating 'comfortable.' Suggestion: ensure relative clauses match plurality and avoid redundancy.

× But in weekend I would like to wear some our little face and every dress which looks me.

✓ But on weekends I like to wear a bit more fashionable clothes and outfits that suit me.

Preposition 'in weekend' should be 'on weekends.' 'Some our little face and every dress which looks me' is unintelligible; likely meant 'more fashionable clothes and outfits that suit me.' Suggestion: use clear nouns ('outfits', 'clothes') and correct verbs ('suit me').

× I do not have any specific color as a favorite design, but if I have to choose the color, I prefer to wear black clothes in in the winter which helps to attract hip to make your colon in white coat in summer which makes you more.

✓ I do not have any specific favorite color, but if I have to choose, I prefer to wear black clothes in winter because they feel warmer, and lighter colors such as white in summer because they keep you cooler.

Many structural and word-choice errors: 'favorite design' should be 'favorite color.' Remove duplicated 'in in' and incorrect phrases 'helps to attract hip to make your colon.' Intended contrast is black in winter (warmer) and white in summer (cooler). Suggestion: express contrasts clearly using because and simple clauses, and choose appropriate adjectives like 'warmer' and 'cooler.'