Clothing— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Be clearer and more concise. Start with a direct topic sentence, correct vocabulary (salwar kameez), avoid repetition and errors, and add one specific supporting detail using a linking word. Keep to no more than 4–5 sentences.

예시: I prefer wearing salwar kameez because it is comfortable and easy to wear. Moreover, it suits the hot weather in my region, so I can stay cool throughout the day. It is also our traditional dress, which I like to wear on casual occasions.

제안: Give a clear direct answer and explain with a logical reason. Fix unclear phrases (e.g., 'stare legs' is incorrect). Use a linking word like 'because' or 'so' and one concrete example of when comfortable clothes help you work better.

예시: I prefer comfortable, casual clothes because they allow me to move freely and focus on my tasks. For example, when I study at home in loose clothes I can sit for longer and concentrate better, so I am more productive.

제안: Keep the answer natural and avoid repetition. Correct confusing phrases ('stay composed', 'according to a patient'). Provide one clear reason and a specific detail (e.g., affordability, breathability) with a linking word.

예시: Yes, I enjoy wearing T-shirts because they are breathable and comfortable while I work. Also, they are affordable here, so I can buy several in different colors to wear on different days.

제안: Answer directly and give a clear reason with a short example. Improve grammar ('which colour suits me') and use a linking word such as 'because' and 'so'. Limit to two or three sentences.

예시: Yes, I spend quite a bit of time choosing clothes because I am unsure which colors suit me best. So I often take my sister shopping to help me decide quickly.

제안: Start with a concise direct answer, then give a brief reason and one specific contrast (if any). Avoid repeating the same idea ('composed and organized').

예시: No, I usually wear the same casual style both on weekdays and weekends because comfort is my priority. For example, I typically wear jeans and a T-shirt whether I am working or relaxing.

제안: Make your reason clear and grammatically correct. Use 'darker' or 'brown' appropriately and avoid unclear comparisons. Provide one specific color and why it suits you, using a linking word like 'because'.

예시: I prefer dark colors such as navy or black because they hide stains and I feel they flatter my complexion more than very light colors.

× Yeah, I like to wear salwar kameez over pants shirt because salwar kameez is easy to wear and is comfortable as compared to pant shirt.

✓ Yeah, I like to wear the salwar kameez over pants and shirts because the salwar kameez is easy to wear and more comfortable compared to pants and shirts.

Use definite article 'the' when referring to a specific traditional garment in contrast with other clothing; also plural forms for general categories: 'pants and shirts'. Use 'more comfortable' for comparative clarity.

× Slovak means is also a traditional or you can say national dress of Pakistan.

✓ Salwar kameez is also a traditional, or you could say the national, dress of Pakistan.

Correct the garment name to 'Salwar kameez'. Use adjectives properly: 'traditional dress' and include the definite article 'the' before 'national dress'. Use 'could' for polite suggestion and commas for clarity.

× Yes, I prefer to wear comfortable and casual clothes over smart clothes because in comfortable or casual clothes I stare legs as compared to smart clothes and I work more efficiently while wearing comfortable clothes.

✓ Yes, I prefer to wear comfortable, casual clothes rather than smart clothes because I feel more relaxed and I work more efficiently in comfortable clothes.

Original has unclear phrase 'I stare legs' which is ungrammatical; replace with 'I feel more relaxed'. Use 'rather than' for preference and simplify repetition. Maintain present simple tense for general habits.

× Yes, I love to wear T-shirts because it because it helps me to stay composed and relax while doing work and T-shirts are very cheap in my country so I can purchase a variety of T-shirts and wear it according to my preference or you can say according to a patient.

✓ Yes, I love to wear T-shirts because they help me stay composed and relaxed while working, and T-shirts are very cheap in my country so I can buy a variety and wear them according to my preference.

Use correct pronoun agreement: 'T-shirts' is plural so use 'they' and 'them'. Use 'help me stay composed and relaxed' (adjectival form). Replace 'doing work' with 'working'. Remove 'according to a patient' which is unclear.

× Yes, I spend a lot of time while choosing clothes because I get confused that which colour is suiting me while wearing.

✓ Yes, I spend a lot of time choosing clothes because I get confused about which colour suits me.

Simplify 'while choosing' to 'choosing'. Use 'confused about' not 'confused that'. Use simple present 'suits' for habitual truth, not 'is suiting'.

× So sometimes I take my brother or sister with me in order to get fast decision.

✓ So sometimes I take my brother or sister with me to make a faster decision.

Use 'to make' rather than 'in order to get'; use 'faster decision' instead of 'fast decision'.

× No, I don't like to wear different styles of clothes on weekdays or weekends.

✓ No, I don't like to wear different styles of clothes on weekdays and weekends.

Use 'on weekdays and weekends' to indicate both periods; original 'or' is not strictly incorrect but 'and' is more natural for contrasting times. Subject-verb is fine; adjusted for natural expression.

× I prefer to choose comfortable clothes so I can work efficiently and stay composed and organized.

✓ I prefer comfortable clothes so I can work efficiently and stay composed and organised.

Remove unnecessary 'to choose' for conciseness. Spelling 'organized/organised' acceptable variants; keep consistent. Pronouns corrected by simplifying sentence.

× I like to wear dark colour clothes as compared to light colour because my skin don't looks brown or darker and dark colour clothes.

✓ I like to wear dark-coloured clothes rather than light-coloured ones because my skin doesn't look brown or darker in light colours.

Use plural and hyphenated adjectives 'dark-coloured clothes' and 'light-coloured ones'. Subject-verb agreement: 'skin doesn't look' not 'don't looks'. Clarify meaning: dark clothes suit the speaker better; rephrase second clause for clarity.