Clothing— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Be concise and directly answer the question with a clear topic sentence, then add one or two specific supporting details. Correct grammar (e.g. "hoodie" not "world hoodie" or "the hoodie" confusion) and avoid irrelevant statements. Use linking words like "because" or "so" appropriately and keep under five sentences.

예시: I like wearing hoodies because they are cozy and stylish. However, in Taiwan hoodies are less common in summer and autumn because the weather is very hot, so I usually wear them in winter or on cool evenings.

제안: Start with a direct opinion: "I prefer..." then give clear, relevant reasons. Avoid unclear phrases and repetitions. Use linking words like "because" and provide a concise reason related to lifestyle or comfort.

예시: I prefer comfortable, casual clothes because I spend most days at home or school and I value ease of movement. For example, T-shirts and jeans allow me to study and relax without feeling restricted.

제안: Answer directly and clearly, using polite, neutral language. Explain reasons with specific details (comfort, fit, climate) and avoid awkward phrasing about body. Use linking words like "because" and keep to two or three sentences.

예시: Yes, I like wearing T-shirts, especially in summer because they are lightweight and breathable. I prefer XL or loose-fit T-shirts because they are comfortable and provide a relaxed fit.

제안: Give a clear, structured response: state the current situation, then explain reason and any change over time using linking words (e.g., "At first..., but now..."). Use correct verb forms and avoid filler sounds like "umm".

예시: At first I spent a lot of time choosing clothes because I wanted to look nice, but now I usually pick outfits quickly in the morning because I prefer to save time.

제안: Start with a clear topic sentence, then give specific contrasts between weekdays and weekends using linking words like "whereas" or "but". Use correct vocabulary (e.g., "sports clothes" or "casual clothes" not unclear terms) and avoid repetition.

예시: Yes, I wear different styles on weekdays and weekends. From Monday to Friday I usually wear casual clothes like T-shirts and jeans for school, whereas on weekends I often wear dresses or skirts when I go out with friends.

제안: Answer directly with the color preference, then give specific reasons using correct collocations (e.g., "most of my clothes are black"). Avoid unclear or confusing phrases and use linking words like "because" to connect reason and effect.

예시: Most of my clothes are black because black is versatile and hides stains well. Also, I feel black is slimming and easy to match with other items.

× I like world hoodie, but in Taiwan people don't wear the hoodie or teacher frequently because Taiwan it is very hard in summer and autumn.

✓ I like hoodies, but in Taiwan people don't wear hoodies or sweatshirts often because Taiwan is very hot in summer and autumn.

The sentence misuses articles and nouns. 'World hoodie' is unclear; use 'hoodies' plurally for general preference. 'The hoodie' and 'teacher' are incorrect here; likely meant 'hoodies or sweaters/sweatshirts.' Use 'often' instead of 'frequently' for natural placement. Also remove the extra pronoun 'it' after 'Taiwan' and use 'hot' rather than 'hard.' Suggestion: Use plural nouns when speaking generally and omit unnecessary articles and pronouns.

× So if you were the hoodie you will got, you will feel very hot and uncomfortable.

✓ So if you wear a hoodie, you will feel very hot and uncomfortable.

The original mixes conditional forms incorrectly and uses past participle 'got' wrongly. For a first conditional about a likely present/future situation, use present simple in the if-clause ('if you wear') and 'will' + base verb in the main clause ('you will feel'). Suggestion: Use 'if' + present simple for real conditional and 'will' + base verb in result clause.

× But I have a lot of beautiful hoodies.

✓ But I have a lot of beautiful hoodies.

This sentence is correct after correction above; 'a lot of' + plural noun 'hoodies' is appropriate. No grammatical change needed but keep plural to match quantity.

× I prefer to work comfortable and casual clothes because my daddy just go to school and go and go to my home after school.

✓ I prefer to wear comfortable and casual clothes because my dad just goes to school and then goes home after school.

Use 'wear' not 'work' to talk about putting on clothes. 'Daddy' is informal; 'dad' is more natural. For habitual actions use simple present with third person singular 'goes.' Also 'then goes home' is clearer than repeating 'go.' Suggestion: Use correct verbs for context and apply third-person 's' for he/she.

× So umm, not a lot of people will appreciate my my clothes or my garment, even my accessories.

✓ So, not many people will pay attention to my clothes or accessories.

Duplicate 'my' is an error and 'appreciate' is awkward here; 'pay attention to' or 'notice' fits meaning. Use 'not many' instead of 'not a lot of' for noun phrase before plural noun. 'Garment' is unnecessary when 'clothes' suffices. Suggestion: Avoid repetition and choose verbs that match intended meaning.

× So I prefer to catch your clothes.

✓ So I prefer comfortable clothes.

'Catch your clothes' is ungrammatical and unclear. Likely intent is to say a preference for comfortable clothing. Simplify to 'I prefer comfortable clothes.' Suggestion: Keep sentences concise and use common collocations.

× Yes I like wearing T-shirts a lot and exactly in summer is also more more than hoodies because my body is fate so I cannot wear something clothed with just like under the my chest.

✓ Yes, I like wearing T-shirts a lot, especially in summer; they are better than hoodies because of my body shape, so I cannot wear clothes that are tight around my chest.

Errors include wrong adverb 'exactly', repetition 'more more', wrong word 'fate' instead of 'shape' or 'fat', incorrect use of 'clothed with just like under the my chest.' Use 'especially' for emphasis, 'because of my body shape' for clarity, and 'tight around my chest' to describe fit. Suggestion: Use appropriate adjectives for body description and correct prepositional phrases for fit.

× So I like the T-shirt in XL or free size it can cover my body.

✓ So I like T-shirts in XL or free size because they can cover my body.

Use plural 'T-shirts' for general statement and 'because' to connect clauses. Add 'they' to refer to T-shirts; 'it' was incorrect. Use 'in XL or one-size-free' phrasing consistently. Suggestion: Ensure subject-pronoun agreement and correct plural forms.

× MMM at the first time I definitely spend a lot of time to choose what I want to wear and let's say but now I think it is waste my time too much so I so now I wake up and run and pick a clothes randomly.

✓ At first I definitely spent a lot of time choosing what I wanted to wear, but now I think it is a waste of time, so I wake up and pick clothes randomly.

Tense inconsistency: describe past habit with past tense 'spent' and 'wanted.' Use gerund 'choosing' after 'time.' 'Pick clothes' not 'pick a clothes.' Remove extra filler words. 'A waste of time' is correct phrase. Suggestion: Keep time frames consistent and use correct noun forms after quantifiers.

× Yes, I will wear different style clothes on weekday and weekends.

✓ Yes, I wear different styles of clothing on weekdays and weekends.

Use plural 'styles' and 'weekdays' to match general habit. 'Wear' rather than 'will wear' is more natural for habitual actions. 'Clothing' is a clearer collective noun than 'clothes' in this structure. Suggestion: Use plural nouns for general statements and simple present for habits.

× If I hang out with my friend and and at the Monday to Friday I usually wear T-shirt or basket classes.

✓ If I hang out with my friends from Monday to Friday, I usually wear T-shirts or basketball clothes.

Use plural 'friends' for general statement, 'from Monday to Friday' for the range, plural 'T-shirts', and 'basket classes' appears to be 'basketball clothes' or 'sports clothes.' Remove duplicate 'and.' Suggestion: Use correct prepositional phrases for time ranges and correct vocabulary for clothing types.

× But in weekend I will wear dress or a skirt that's something different clothes because I think it is different from the normal days.

✓ But on weekends I wear dresses or skirts because I want to wear something different from normal days.

Use 'on weekends' and plural 'dresses or skirts' for general habits. 'I will wear' is unnecessary future; simple present 'I wear' is better. 'Something different from normal days' is rephrased for clarity. Suggestion: Use 'on' for days and simple present for habitual actions.

× Actually my most of my classes are blank because in the beautiful scenes in Asia, we also think We also consider black can cover your body MU much than other colors and you can be become more thinner or soon in the view.

✓ Actually most of my clothes are black because in many Asian places people think black can hide the body more than other colors and make you look thinner in appearance.

'Most of my classes' should be 'most of my clothes.' Remove duplicate 'we also.' 'Can cover your body MU much' is incorrect; use 'hide the body more.' 'Become more thinner or soon in the view' corrected to 'make you look thinner.' Suggestion: Use correct quantifiers like 'most of' and choose clear comparative phrases like 'more than' and 'look thinner.'