Clothing— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Give a direct topic sentence and then one or two clear supporting details. Fix grammar (e.g. use complete clauses), avoid unclear phrases like “loop” and redundant words. Use linking words to connect ideas. Aim for 2–3 concise sentences.

예시: I usually prefer casual clothes because they are comfortable. For example, I often wear jeans and a simple shirt because they look neat and allow me to move easily.

제안: Start with a clear direct answer, then give two specific reasons. Avoid repetition and unclear vocabulary. Remove filler words and correct collocations (e.g. “smart clothes,” “suffocating”).

예시: I prefer comfortable, casual clothes rather than smart clothes. They feel less restrictive and are more practical for everyday activities, whereas smart outfits can feel formal and uncomfortable for long periods.

제안: Answer directly and give one or two specific details with correct vocabulary: use ‘paired’ or ‘worn with’ instead of ‘combated’. Keep sentences concise and avoid repetition.

예시: Yes, I like wearing T-shirts because they are comfortable and versatile. I often pair them with jeans or shorts, so they work well for many casual occasions.

제안: Give a clear short answer and then explain briefly why. Avoid confusing or irrelevant details and check sentence structure. Use linking word like ‘because’ to make reason clear.

예시: No, I don't spend much time choosing clothes because I usually plan my outfits ahead or pick simple combinations. I find it’s not worth spending a long time each morning.

제안: Give a clear topic sentence stating the difference, then support with one or two specific examples. Remove repetition and vague phrases like “roaming around.” Use linking words: ‘because’, ‘so’ or ‘while’.

예시: Yes, I wear different clothes on weekdays and weekends. During weekdays I wear practical clothes for work and study, while on weekends I choose casual outfits for relaxing and meeting friends.

제안: Start with a direct answer, then give a concise reason using correct collocations (e.g. ‘black is a bold colour, easy to match’). Avoid unclear claims and incomplete sentences. Use one or two supporting points.

예시: I don't have one specific favourite, but if I had to choose I would pick black. Black looks stylish and is easy to match with other colours, so it suits many occasions.

× I usually like to because it's comfortable like the casual clothes, but it provides bold and elegant loop to a person.

✓ I usually like to wear casual clothes because they are comfortable and give a person a bold and elegant look.

The original sentence has missing verbs and incorrect word order (sentence structure error). 'Like to' needs a verb such as 'wear'. 'The casual clothes' should be plural without 'the' and 'it provides bold and elegant loop' contains wrong noun 'loop' and incorrect subject agreement. Use 'they' to refer to 'clothes' and 'look' instead of 'loop'. Clearer word order improves meaning.

× As I have already said, I love to wear comfortable and casual clothes. I will tend to choose comfortable clothes as it provides bold and elegant look with a comfortable look. Not as special at the that the individual dead clothes is uh is suffocating due to the globes.

✓ As I have already said, I love to wear comfortable, casual clothes. I tend to choose them because they provide a bold and elegant appearance while still being comfortable. I do not prefer tight or heavy clothes because they feel suffocating.

Multiple sentence structure errors and unclear phrases. 'I will tend to choose' is awkward; use simple present 'I tend to choose'. 'It provides' should be 'they provide' to agree with plural 'clothes' (subject-verb agreement). Replace 'look with a comfortable look' with 'appearance while still being comfortable' to avoid repetition. The fragment about 'individual dead clothes' and 'globes' is unclear; likely intended 'tight or heavy clothes' and 'they feel suffocating' — rephrase to convey meaning.

× Massive comes under the category of comfortable clothes.

✓ T-shirts fall into the category of comfortable clothes.

The word 'Massive' is incorrect here (wrong adjective use). Use a clear noun phrase 'T-shirts fall into the category of comfortable clothes' to state classification. 'Fall into' is a natural verb for categories.

× T-shirts are that kind of clothes which can be which can be combated with other like lower and jeans without any restrictions.

✓ T-shirts are the kind of clothing that can be combined with trousers and jeans without any restrictions.

The sentence has repetition and wrong word choice: 'which can be which can be combated' is redundant and 'combated' is wrong (verb misuse). Use 'combined' and replace 'lower' with 'trousers'. Use 'clothing' or 'garments' for uncountable sense and correct relative clause 'that can be combined'.

× No, I don't spend my lot of time on choosing clothes as I already set them out of the Alvira wardrobe to how to wear clothes as I think so that spending a lot of time on picking up the clothes is a is not worth it.

✓ No, I don't spend a lot of time choosing clothes because I already organize my wardrobe, so I think spending a lot of time picking clothes is not worth it.

Awkward phrasing and redundancy: 'my lot of time' should be 'a lot of time'. 'Set them out of the Alvira wardrobe to how to wear clothes' is unclear — likely 'organize my wardrobe' fits context. Remove extra fillers and fix word order for clarity.

× Yes, I wear different styles of clothes when kind comparison of weekdays and weekend. As in weekdays I have to work, I have to work and study all over the day and to work with my father and on the weekends I am free. I just spend my leisure time doing, roaming around here and there, here and there and spending.

✓ Yes, I wear different styles on weekdays and at weekends. On weekdays I have to work and study all day and help my father, but at the weekend I am free and spend my leisure time going out and relaxing.

Several structural issues and repetition. Use 'on weekdays' and 'at the weekend' for correct preposition use. Remove repeated phrases 'I have to work' and 'here and there'. 'Roaming around' is informal; 'going out and relaxing' is clearer. Fix verb forms and sentence cohesion.

× There is not a specific color of cloth I wear but if I was given a chance to choose what color of clothes I have to wear then I will go with the black colour as the black is a bold colour and it cannot be combined with any of the colour without any and it can also give a eye catch a captivating view from the.

✓ I don't have a specific color I always wear, but if I had to choose, I would choose black because it is bold, easy to match with other colors, and creates a striking appearance.

Multiple errors: 'There is not a specific color of cloth I wear' is awkward — use 'I don't have a specific color I always wear'. Conditional tense should be 'if I had to choose... I would choose' (second conditional). 'It cannot be combined with any of the colour without any' is incorrect; likely intended 'easy to match with other colors'. 'Give a eye catch a captivating view' is ungrammatical; use 'creates a striking appearance'.