Clothing— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Be clearer and more concise. Start with a direct topic sentence, then give one or two specific reasons with clear phrasing. Avoid unnecessary fillers and unclear phrases. Use linking words (for example, 'because' or 'so') to connect ideas.

예시: I prefer comfortable clothes, such as jeans, T-shirts and sneakers. I wear them because I move around a lot during the day and need clothing that is practical and easy to wear.

제안: Answer directly then give a clear condition. Remove hesitations and irrelevant questions. Use linking phrases like 'but if' or 'however' to show contrast and be specific about when you choose smart clothes.

예시: I prefer comfortable, casual clothes most of the time. However, if I go to a special event or a night out, I will dress smarter so that my outfit is more appropriate for the occasion.

제안: Give one or two concise reasons with correct grammar and a linking word. Avoid repetition ('looking good' twice) and use specific vocabulary (e.g., 'versatile' or 'goes well with').

예시: Yes, I enjoy wearing T-shirts because they are comfortable and versatile. They go well with different types of jeans and casual outfits.

제안: Structure your answer: give a clear topic sentence, then explain briefly why. Remove filler words and fix verb forms. Use linking words like 'so' or 'because' to connect cause and result.

예시: No, I don't spend much time choosing clothes. If I find something I like at first sight, I usually buy it because I prefer to save time rather than search around.

제안: Give a direct answer then clarify with a specific exception. Improve grammar (e.g., 'I don't change my style' not 'closes') and reduce hesitation. Use linking words like 'but' and 'only when' to show exceptions.

예시: No, I usually wear the same casual style on weekdays and weekends. But I do change my clothes for special events or formal occasions.

제안: Be more specific and give an example. Start with a clear statement then add a reason and an example of colors you prefer in certain situations.

예시: I don't have a single favorite color; I choose colors that suit me and the occasion. For example, I often pick navy or gray for work and brighter colors for casual outings.

× I prefer comfortable clothes like jeans and T-shirts and sneakers because in everyday routine I'm going back in turn around the Siri and then have a a lot of points to do.

✓ I prefer comfortable clothes like jeans, T-shirts, and sneakers because in my daily routine I go back and forth around the city and then have a lot of things to do.

The original sentence has unclear and incorrect phrasing ('going back in turn around the Siri', 'have a a lot of points to do') and punctuation issues. This is a sentence structure error (ID 26). I clarified 'everyday routine' to 'my daily routine', replaced the unintelligible phrase with 'go back and forth around the city', corrected 'a a lot' to 'a lot of', and used 'things to do' which is natural collocation. Suggestion: keep subject-verb order clear and use common collocations for activities.

× How was it before? I prefer comfortable clothes and casual clothes because it depends, uh, which day and where I'm going to. Maybe we are going night out. And yeah, I will change my style. More convenient and more appropriate for the night.

✓ How was it before? I prefer comfortable, casual clothes because it depends on which day it is and where I'm going. Maybe we go out at night, and then I change my style to something more convenient and more appropriate for the evening.

Multiple issues: incorrect tense and awkward phrasing ('Maybe we are going night out', 'More convenient and more appropriate for the night'). This fits past tense and sentence structure problems (ID 5 and 26) but corrections follow present habitual and future reference. I changed 'it depends, uh, which day and where I'm going to' to 'it depends on which day it is and where I'm going', fixed 'we are going night out' to 'we go out at night', and completed the sentence 'I change my style to something more convenient and more appropriate for the evening.' Suggestion: use 'go out' for outings, include prepositions ('on' which day), and finish fragments with a subject and verb.

× Yes, I really like wearing T-shirts. It's comfortable clothes for every day and I think it's looking so good on me and looking good with all the jeans, styles, clothes.

✓ Yes, I really like wearing T-shirts. They are comfortable clothes for every day, and I think they look good on me and go well with all my jeans and styles.

Errors include wrong pronoun/verb agreement and article usage (ID 22 and 27). 'T-shirts' is plural, so use 'They are' not 'It's', and change 'it's looking so good' to 'they look good'. Also 'all the jeans, styles, clothes' is awkward—use 'all my jeans and styles.' Suggestion: match subject number with verb and use natural noun combinations.

× Actually, no, if I see something, uh, what I really like for the first sight, I will buy it because I don't have enough patience, I'll go around and search something else. Uh, because of this, I prefer just buy what I really like.

✓ Actually, no. If I see something I really like at first sight, I buy it because I don't have enough patience to keep looking for something else. Because of this, I prefer to just buy what I really like.

Tense and infinitive form issues (ID 6 and 8). 'If I see... I will buy it' is acceptable in some contexts but here habitual present 'I buy it' is clearer. 'For the first sight' should be 'at first sight'. 'I'll go around and search something else' changed to 'keep looking for something else'. 'Prefer just buy' should be 'prefer to just buy' (use infinitive). Suggestion: use present simple for habitual actions and use correct infinitive after 'prefer'.

× Uh, I want to be honest, no, I don't change my style and closes every day. I'm go around with the same clothes I change it just, uh, depend on events maybe.

✓ To be honest, no, I don't change my style and clothes every day. I go around in the same clothes; I only change them depending on events.

Multiple structural and verb form errors (ID 26 and 27). 'Closes' is a misspelling of 'clothes'. 'I'm go around' is incorrect; use 'I go around' or 'I wear the same clothes'. 'I change it just... depend on events' needs rephrasing to 'I only change them depending on events.' Suggestion: correct spelling, use simple present for habitual actions, ensure pronoun-antecedent agreement ('them' for clothes).

× I don't prefer any colors, I just prefer what I really like and which color looks good on me. That's all.

✓ I don't have a preference for any particular color; I just prefer what I really like and which color looks good on me.

Preposition and article choice issue (ID 11 and 22). 'I don't prefer any colors' is understandable but more natural is 'I don't have a preference for any particular color.' This clarifies meaning and fixes minor article use. Suggestion: use 'have a preference for' when expressing lack of preference and 'particular' when you mean 'any specific'.