Clothing— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Speak a clear topic sentence that directly answers the question, use correct vocabulary, and avoid errors. Keep it concise (1–2 sentences) and give one specific example. For instance, replace unclear words (“willing”, “foodie”, “boys style”) with precise terms and correct grammar: say you prefer comfortable clothes like sweatpants and hoodies, and briefly explain why.

예시: I prefer comfortable clothes, such as sweatpants and hoodies, because they are warm and easy to move in. For example, on cold days I usually wear a fleece hoodie and loose pants to stay cozy.

제안: Start with a clear direct answer (comfortable or smart), then give a short reason and a past example. Use concise linking words (because, when, so) and correct grammar. Avoid incomplete sentences and unclear phrases like “their voice style.”

예시: I prefer comfortable, casual clothes because they make me feel relaxed. For example, when I walked around Tokyo last month I wore trainers and a light jacket because I expected to walk a lot.

제안: Answer directly and give one specific reason with correct vocabulary. Use linking words to connect ideas and keep sentences short. Replace awkward phrases like “material is cotton public” with “cotton T-shirts” and fix grammar.

예시: Yes, I do. I especially like cotton T-shirts because the fabric is soft and breathable, which makes them very comfortable for everyday wear.

제안: Give a clear direct answer (yes, sometimes) and then explain two contrasting situations using linking words (but, when, whereas). Use correct prepositions and word order.

예시: Sometimes. When I go out with friends I spend a lot of time choosing clothes because I want to look good, but for work or quick shopping I pick something fast and practical.

제안: Answer directly and give clear contrasting details. Use correct plural/singular forms and remove filler words (uh). Use linking words like but and for example.

예시: Yes. On weekdays I usually wear my work uniform, but at the weekend I choose more stylish clothes, such as jeans and hoodies for a casual look.

제안: Start with a direct statement of preference, then give reasons using clear adjectives and grammar. Replace vague phrases like “they makes me cool” with concise reasons (they are versatile, look smart).

예시: I prefer black and white clothes because they are versatile and look smart. For example, a white shirt and black trousers are easy to match and always look neat.

× 'I like to willing comfy clothes such as pants and foodie so it's colder boys style.'

✓ 'I like to wear comfortable clothes such as pants and hoodies; I prefer a colder-weather, casual style.'

'willing' is wrong form; use 'to wear'. 'comfy' is informal adjective; use 'comfortable'. 'foodie' is incorrect word, likely 'hoodies'. Sentence structure is awkward; reorder to show preference. Use hyphenated modifier "colder-weather" for clarity.'

× 'I prefer to be a comfortable clothes and their voice style, but when I was walking in Tokyo I chose casual clothes because I needed to wear that type of clothes in a.'

✓ 'I prefer comfortable clothes and a casual style, but when I was walking in Tokyo I chose casual clothes because I needed to wear that type of clothing there.'

'prefer to be a comfortable clothes' is ungrammatical; use 'prefer comfortable clothes'. 'their voice style' makes no sense; use 'a casual style'. 'type of clothes in a.' is fragmentary; replace with 'type of clothing there.' Maintain past tense for the Tokyo anecdote.'

× 'Yes I do. I like to wear in T-shirts especially material is cotton public because it's really softer in the comfy so it's really makes me comfortable.'

✓ 'Yes, I do. I like to wear T-shirts, especially those made of cotton, because they are soft and comfortable.'

'like to wear in T-shirts' has extra preposition 'in'; remove it. 'material is cotton public' is incorrect; use 'those made of cotton'. 'it's really softer in the comfy so it's really makes me comfortable' mixes forms; use 'they are soft and comfortable.' Ensure subject-verb agreement and clear adjective use.'

× 'Yes and no. When I well, go to hanging out with friends I spend a lot of time to choose in a clothes, but I just go into work or shopping, I can choose quickly.'

✓ 'Yes and no. When I go out to hang out with friends I spend a lot of time choosing clothes, but when I just go to work or go shopping I can choose quickly.'

'When I well, go to hanging out' contains filler 'well' and wrong verb forms; use 'When I go out to hang out'. 'spend a lot of time to choose in a clothes' should be 'spend a lot of time choosing clothes'. Consistent infinitives/gerunds and prepositions improve grammar and clarity.'

× 'Yes I do. I usually wear you uh, uniform work clothes in a weekday, but uh, in a weekend I choose more stylish one such as jeans, hoodies.'

✓ 'Yes, I do. I usually wear a work uniform on weekdays, but on weekends I choose more stylish items such as jeans and hoodies.'

'you uh' is filler; remove. 'uniform work clothes in a weekday' has wrong article and preposition; use 'a work uniform on weekdays.' 'in a weekend' should be 'on weekends'. 'more stylish one' should be 'more stylish items.' Ensure pluralization for general habits.'

× 'I prefer to wear black and white clothes and usual because they makes me cool and they're smart seems like.'

✓ 'I prefer to wear black and white clothes usually because they make me look cool and smart.'

'and usual' is incorrect; use 'usually'. 'they makes' is subject-verb agreement error; use 'they make'. 'they're smart seems like' is ungrammatical; rephrase to 'make me look...'. Maintain adverb placement and correct verb agreement.'