Clothing— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Make the response more concise, correct small grammar mistakes, and avoid filler words (uh). Start with a clear topic sentence, then add one specific detail and a brief reason. Use linking words to connect ideas.

예시: I prefer comfortable clothes most of the time. For example, I usually wear jeans and a T‑shirt or a light top depending on the weather, because comfort helps me move freely and feel relaxed all day.

제안: Avoid asking the examiner to clarify unless necessary. Give a direct answer first, then briefly clarify and provide a reason. Remove repeated words and fillers, and use precise vocabulary (formal vs smart).

예시: I prefer casual clothes rather than formal ones. If you mean clothes for work or official events, I still choose casual outfits because they allow me to move freely and feel comfortable during the day.

제안: Give a direct topic sentence, then support with one or two specific details using linking words. Remove hesitations and repetitive phrases, and use clearer comparative language.

예시: Yes, I like wearing T‑shirts, but only slim‑fit ones. I avoid oversized T‑shirts because they make me look much larger, whereas slim T‑shirts fit well and are more comfortable for me.

제안: Organize the answer: state the usual habit first, then explain exceptions with a reason. Eliminate filler words and simplify phrasing. Use linking words like 'however' or 'usually'.

예시: Usually I don't spend much time choosing clothes because I prepare my outfit the night before. However, sometimes I spend more time if I feel like dressing up and being stylish that day.

제안: Begin with a clear direct answer, then explain with one specific detail. Simplify sentences and avoid repetition. Use linking words to make the explanation coherent.

예시: Not really — I stick to a personal style and mostly wear pieces from a capsule wardrobe. Because everything is versatile and matches, I can easily find outfits that are suitable and comfortable for both weekdays and weekends.

제안: State the preference clearly, then add specific reasons and an example. Remove filler sounds and avoid repeating 'uh'. Use precise adjectives (muted, neutral) and a linking word like 'because' or 'whereas'.

예시: I prefer natural, muted colours because they suit my skin tone and highlight my features without being overwhelming. For example, I often choose shades like beige, olive, or navy rather than bright red or yellow for everyday wear.

× I wear comfortable clothes instead of stylish one.

✓ I wear comfortable clothes instead of stylish ones.

'Clothes' is plural, so the contrasting word must also be plural: 'ones' not 'one'. Use plural agreement for parallel items.

× I wear a pair of jeans and uh AT shirt or a top, depends on the weather outside.

✓ I wear a pair of jeans and a T-shirt or a top, depending on the weather outside.

Use the article 'a' before a countable singular noun ('T-shirt'). 'AT' is incorrect; use 'T-shirt'. Also 'depends on' needs the gerund phrase 'depending on' to connect correctly.

× I'm not sure about what do you mean by, uh, smart clothes, but if you're talking about, uh, clothes for job, school, official one, formal one, uh, I would say that I would rather prefer uh, casual clothes, uh, as it allows me to move freely.

✓ I'm not sure what you mean by 'smart clothes', but if you mean clothes for work, school, or formal occasions, I would prefer casual clothes because they allow me to move freely.

Do not use question word order in a statement: 'what you mean' not 'what do you mean'. 'Rather prefer' is redundant — use 'prefer'. Use parallel nouns ('work, school, or formal occasions') and 'because' to give reason. Match plural 'clothes' with plural verb 'allow'.

× It depends on what type of T-shirts do you mean.

✓ It depends on what type of T-shirts you mean.

In embedded questions inside statements, do not use auxiliary inversion. Use 'what type ... you mean' rather than 'what type ... do you mean'.

× I don't like oversized ones, or rather, I don't like how they fit on me as, uh, when I wear, when I wear them, I uh, look like, uh, three times bigger than I am.

✓ I don't like oversized ones; I don't like how they fit me because when I wear them I look about three times bigger than I am.

Use correct preposition: 'fit me' rather than 'fit on me'. Remove repeated phrases and use 'because' for cause. 'About three times bigger' is a natural expression.

× Usually I wear slim T-shirts and uh, they make me feel pretty comfortable.

✓ Usually I wear slim T-shirts and they make me feel quite comfortable.

No article error in original, but 'pretty comfortable' is informal; 'quite comfortable' is more appropriate. Kept sentence grammatical; changed modifier to be clearer.

× To be honest, I'm trying not to, but it can happen sometimes if I can, if I have this mood, uh, really to be stylish today.

✓ To be honest, I try not to, but it can happen sometimes if I am in the mood to be stylish.

Avoid awkward modal phrasing 'I'm trying not to' followed by 'if I can, if I have this mood'. Use simple present 'I try not to' and the phrase 'in the mood to' for clarity and correct structure.

× But usually I prepare my outfit, uh, from the evening, uh, so not to spend a lot of time on days in the morning and to sleep longer.

✓ But usually I prepare my outfit the evening before so I don't have to spend a lot of time choosing in the morning and can sleep longer.

Use 'the evening before' instead of 'from the evening'. 'So not to spend' is awkward; use 'so I don't have to'. 'On days in the morning' is incorrect; use 'in the morning'.

× I would say have my own style and I try to stick to it as it is a capsule wardrobe where everything is versatile and matches so that I can find I always can find something beautiful and comfortable both for for weekdays and both for weekends and work.

✓ I would say I have my own style and try to stick to it. I have a capsule wardrobe where everything is versatile and matches, so I can always find something beautiful and comfortable for both weekdays and weekends, including work.

Sentence was run-on and had repetition. Add missing subject 'I' before 'have my own style'. Break into two sentences, remove duplicate phrases, and place 'always' in the correct position. Use 'for both weekdays and weekends' and include 'including work' for clarity.

× I prefer natural muted colors, uh, as, uh, they match my coloring and really highlight my best features.

✓ I prefer natural, muted colors because they match my coloring and highlight my best features.

Use a comma between coordinate adjectives 'natural' and 'muted'. Replace 'as' with 'because' for clearer causal connection and remove redundant 'really' for conciseness.

× I don't get tired of them, unlike, uh, bright, uh, shades such as red or yellow, uh, that can feel, uh, too intense for everyday wearing.

✓ I don't get tired of them, unlike bright shades such as red or yellow, which can feel too intense for everyday wear.

Use 'which' for the non-defining relative clause. 'Everyday wearing' is awkward; use the noun 'everyday wear'. Remove fillers and commas for fluency.