Clothing— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Correct the vocabulary and grammar, make the response concise and include a clear topic sentence with one supporting detail. Use linking words if needed. For example, replace ‘sports rare’ with ‘sportswear’ and avoid repetition.

예시: I prefer wearing sportswear because it is comfortable. When I exercise outdoors, I usually wear breathable sportswear that allows me to move easily and stay cool.

제안: Use clear vocabulary and a topic sentence that directly answers the question. Avoid repetition and use linking words like ‘because’ or ‘so’. Correct misused words (e.g. ‘casual’ instead of unclear phrases).

예시: I prefer comfortable, casual clothes rather than smart clothes because they are easier to mix and match. For example, I often wear jeans and a simple top when I hang out with friends because it feels relaxed and practical.

제안: Keep the answer fluent and grammatical. Give a short reason and a specific example. Correct expressions like ‘I don't have a sweaty’ to ‘I don't sweat as much’ or ‘I stay cool’.

예시: Yes, I like wearing T-shirts because they are comfortable and let me move freely. In summer I usually wear cotton T-shirts so I stay cool and don't sweat as much.

제안: Organize your answer with a clear topic sentence and specific reasons. Fix vocabulary errors (e.g. ‘choosing’ not ‘teaching’) and explain how you choose clothes with one or two concise details. Use linking words like ‘because’ or ‘so’.

예시: Yes, I spend quite a lot of time choosing clothes because I follow fashion trends. For example, I often browse online shops and try on several outfits to decide what looks best for different occasions.

제안: Answer directly with clear contrast words (e.g. ‘On weekdays... but on weekends...’). Correct wrong phrases (e.g. ‘formal clothes’ not ‘former stars’) and give a specific example of each style.

예시: On weekdays I wear formal clothes for work or school, such as a shirt and trousers. But on weekends I prefer casual or trendy outfits, like jeans and a colourful shirt, because I relax and meet friends.

제안: Provide a clear topic sentence and a concise reason. Correct grammar (e.g. ‘My favorite color is white’) and give a specific example of how you wear the colour.

예시: My favourite colour is white because it is easy to match with other clothes and looks simple and neat. For instance, I often wear a white shirt with jeans for a clean, casual look.

× I prefer wearing sports rare because it is comfortable, so when I exercise outdoors I usually wear the sportswear.

✓ I prefer wearing sportswear because it is comfortable, so when I exercise outdoors I usually wear sportswear.

The phrase 'sports rare' and 'the sportswear' are incorrect adjective/noun use and article use. Replace with the correct noun 'sportswear'. Remove the unnecessary definite article before a general category. Improve fluency by using the same term consistently.

× I prefer to wear computer catcher across rather than smart cross.

✓ I prefer to wear comfortable casual clothes rather than smart clothes.

The original contains incorrect word choices ('computer catcher across', 'smart cross') which are adjective/noun errors. Use correct adjectives 'comfortable' and 'casual' and the noun 'clothes'. This fixes meaning and grammatical category.

× It is comfortable and easy to match another outfit and.

✓ It is comfortable and easy to match with other outfits.

The sentence ends with an extra conjunction 'and' and lacks a preposition. Remove the trailing 'and' and add 'with' to correctly link 'match' and its object. Also use plural 'outfits' for general reference.

× It is it is perfect option for hang out with my friends.

✓ It is a perfect option for hanging out with my friends.

There is duplication 'It is it is', missing article 'a', and incorrect verb form 'hang out'. Use gerund 'hanging out' as a noun phrase and include the article for singular countable noun 'option'.

× Yes, I like wearing T-shirts. It is comfortable and. Makes me move freely, especially in summer wearing T-shirts.

✓ Yes, I like wearing T-shirts. They are comfortable and make me move freely, especially in summer.

Subject-verb agreement and sentence fragmentation: 'T-shirts' is plural so use 'they are'. The fragment 'Makes me...' needs a subject; combine into one sentence 'they make'. Remove repetition 'wearing T-shirts' for concision.

× I don't have a sweaty.

✓ I don't get sweaty.

The phrase 'have a sweaty' is incorrect. Use the verb phrase 'get sweaty' to describe becoming sweaty. This corrects word class and idiomatic expression.

× Yes, I spent a lot of time teaching clothes, especially I followed the fashion trend so I. I spent a lot of time just in classes, people that choice I.

✓ Yes, I spend a lot of time choosing clothes, especially because I follow fashion trends, so I often spend a lot of time deciding what to wear.

Multiple errors: wrong verb 'teaching' should be 'choosing' (word choice), tense inconsistency ('spent' past vs general habit), word order and unclear fragments. Use present simple 'spend' and 'follow' for habits, correct noun 'fashion trends', and rephrase to a clear sentence.

× On weekdays I have to wear the former stars for work or school, but on weekends I enjoy the various styles of outfits because I can't go to party wars.

✓ On weekdays I have to wear formal clothes for work or school, but on weekends I enjoy various styles because I can go to parties.

Many wrong words: 'former stars' should be 'formal clothes' (word choice), unnecessary article 'the' before 'various styles', and 'can't go to party wars' probably intended 'can go to parties'. Correct articles and vocabulary to convey the contrast between weekdays and weekends.

× My favorite colors is white, so I enjoy white colors wearing because it is easy to match other outfits and to be simple.

✓ My favorite color is white, so I like wearing white because it is easy to match with other outfits and looks simple.

Subject-verb agreement and noun number: 'favorite colors is' should be 'favorite color is' (singular). Use 'wearing white' rather than 'white colors wearing'. Add 'with' after 'match' and use 'looks simple' to express appearance. This fixes agreement, word order, and preposition use.