Clothing— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Be more specific and expand slightly with one clear reason and an example. Use a topic sentence, a linking word, and one supporting detail. Keep it natural and under five sentences. (English (Japan))

예시: I like to wear fashionable clothes because they make me feel confident. For example, I often choose a smart jacket and jeans when I want to look more put-together, especially for casual dinners.

제안: Clarify vocabulary (use 'casual' not 'cultural'), give a clear topic sentence, and provide one specific detail explaining when and why you choose casual clothes. Use linking words for coherence. (English (Japan))

예시: I prefer comfortable, casual clothes rather than smart clothes. For instance, when I'm staying at home or meeting friends, I usually wear baggy T-shirts and loose trousers because they are relaxed and easy to move in.

제안: Avoid repetition and be concise. Start with a clear topic sentence, then add one supporting reason and a brief example. Use a linking phrase like 'because' or 'for example.' (English (Japan))

예시: Yes, I love wearing T-shirts because they are comfortable and practical. For example, I often wear a cotton T-shirt when I go cycling since it lets me move freely.

제안: Improve phrase choice and grammar: use 'special occasion' instead of 'advance' and correct 'looked down on for my fashion.' Provide a concise reason and an example. (English (Japan))

예시: Not usually, but I spend more time choosing clothes for special occasions. For example, before a wedding I pick a smart outfit to make a good impression.

제안: Be decisive and avoid filler words. Start with a clear topic sentence saying either 'no' or 'yes,' then give one brief explanation and an example. Keep it natural and specific. (English (Japan))

예시: No, I usually wear similar clothes during the week and at the weekend because I prefer comfortable, breathable items. For example, I often wear sneakers and light shirts both at work and on days off.

제안: Correct pronunciation/word choice and grammar: use 'light-coloured clothes' and avoid confusing phrases like 'drunk clothes.' Give one clear reason and a short example. Use linking words to connect ideas. (English (Japan))

예시: My favourite colour is black because it looks stylish, but on sunny days I wear light-coloured clothes because they reflect heat. For example, I choose a white T-shirt and beige shorts when it's hot outside.

× I like to wear fashionable clothes mostly.

✓ I mostly like wearing fashionable clothes.

The original sentence is understandable but word order is awkward; placing the adverb 'mostly' before the verb phrase and using the -ing form 'wearing' sounds more natural in English. Suggestion: move adverbs to precede verb phrases and prefer 'like + -ing' for habitual preferences. (English (Japan))

× I think I prefer cultural clothes.

✓ I think I prefer casual clothes.

'Cultural clothes' is likely a word choice error; 'casual clothes' matches the question contrast with 'comfortable and casual clothes'. Use correct adjective to convey intended meaning. (English (Japan))

× If I'm not going outgoing or visiting somewhere with friends, I will wear clothes that are a little bit more baggy, you know, on the side.

✓ If I'm not going out or visiting friends, I wear clothes that are a little baggier, you know, more on the casual side.

Multiple issues: 'going outgoing' is incorrect; use 'going out'. Conditional and habitual present use 'if... I wear' rather than 'I will wear' for typical habits. Use comparative 'baggier' not 'more baggy' and 'on the casual side' is natural. Keep verb tenses consistent for habitual situations. (English (Japan))

× I love T-shirts, I think they are my go to clothes because they are comfortable and help me move comfortably, whatever they are.

✓ I love T-shirts; I think they are my go-to clothes because they are comfortable and help me move easily wherever I am.

Use the hyphenated adjective 'go-to' and 'move comfortably' repeated is redundant; 'move easily' is better. 'Whatever they are' is incorrect; intended meaning is 'wherever I am'. Also separate clauses with proper punctuation. (English (Japan))

× Not necessarily, but if I have to go to an occasion or an advance, I might carefully select what I'm about to wear because I don't want to be looked down on my fashion.

✓ Not necessarily, but if I have to attend an event or a formal occasion, I might carefully select what I am going to wear because I don't want people to look down on my fashion.

Several word choice and structure errors: 'go to an occasion or an advance' is incorrect—use 'attend an event' or 'a formal occasion'. Use 'what I am going to wear' instead of 'what I'm about to wear' for planned choices. 'Looked down on my fashion' lacks correct object and agent; say 'people to look down on my fashion' or better 'people to judge my fashion'. (English (Japan))

× Yeah, if I, uh, not really. I think my types of outfits and clothes are pretty much the same all the week 'cause I like clothes that are comfortable, breathable and versatile.

✓ Yeah, not really. I think my types of outfits and clothes are pretty much the same all week because I like clothes that are comfortable, breathable, and versatile.

Remove the incomplete fragment 'if I, uh,' which breaks sentence structure. Use 'all week' rather than 'all the week' for natural usage and include Oxford comma optionally. Ensure sentence is a complete thought. (English (Japan))

× My favorite color is black, but if I'm going out for a sunny day I might wear light colored clothes to be because it's hot so I want to be. I want I don't want the one my clothes to be absorbing so much heat so I avoid like drunk clothes.

✓ My favorite color is black, but if I'm going out on a sunny day I might wear light-colored clothes because it's hot and I don't want my clothes to absorb so much heat, so I avoid dark clothes.

Multiple issues: use 'going out on a sunny day' not 'for'; 'light-colored' needs hyphen. Remove redundant fragments 'to be because it's hot so I want to be.' Use 'my clothes to absorb' rather than 'be absorbing'. 'drunk clothes' is incorrect; intended word is 'dark clothes'. Reorder clauses for clarity and correct prepositions. (English (Japan))