Clothing— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Make the response a clear topic sentence, correct grammar, avoid redundancy, and add one specific detail. Use a linking word if adding extra info. Keep within 1–3 sentences.

예시: I prefer simple, conservative clothes. For example, I often wear plain blouses and knee-length skirts because they look neat and are easy to match.

제안: Answer directly with a clear choice, correct grammatical mistakes (use "rather" and avoid "I don't know"), and add a brief reason using a linking word.

예시: I prefer comfortable, casual clothes rather than smart outfits because they are more practical for my daily activities.

제안: Begin with a direct answer, correct grammar (plural/singular and phrasing), and give one specific supporting detail linked with a reason or example.

예시: Yes, I love wearing T-shirts because they are comfortable and easy to wash; for instance, I wear a T-shirt almost every day at home.

제안: Answer directly and fix word order and redundancy. Provide a specific reason or result and use a linking word to connect ideas.

예시: Yes, I spend a lot of time choosing clothes because I want to look presentable; as a result, I often plan outfits the night before.

제안: Give a clear topic sentence and correct grammar. Be specific about why styles don't change and use linking words to add clarity. Avoid vague pronouns like "they."

예시: No, I don't change my style much between weekdays and weekends because I usually stay at home and tend to repeat the same comfortable outfits.

제안: Start with a direct answer, correct minor grammar ("color" repetition), and give a succinct reason. Use a linking word to contrast preferences.

예시: My favorite color is pink, but it doesn't suit my skin tone, so I prefer blue for most of my clothes because it complements me better.

× What type of clothes that I want to wear is like simple but it's giving the look conservative girl.

✓ The type of clothes I want to wear is simple, and they give a conservative look.

Original sentence has incorrect word order and extra relative word 'that'. 'What type of' is unnecessary—use 'The type of clothes I want to wear'. 'Clothes' is plural so use 'they' and 'give' for agreement. Also use 'conservative look' rather than 'look conservative girl'. Improve by removing 'that' and placing modifiers after the subject. Grammar problem type ID:26

× I don't know what is smart clothes, but I rather prefer comfortable and casual clothes.

✓ I don't know what smart clothes are, but I prefer comfortable, casual clothes.

Two issues: verb to be agreement with plural 'clothes' should be 'are' not 'is' (There is plural agreement; Grammar problem type: 1 and 27), and 'would rather' or simply 'prefer' is the correct preference expression; 'rather prefer' is redundant. Use 'comfortable, casual clothes' with a comma to list adjectives. Suggest: 'I don't know what smart clothes are, but I prefer comfortable, casual clothes.' Grammar problem type ID:1

× Of course I love wearing T-shirt because it parts of my daily life.

✓ Of course I love wearing T-shirts because they are part of my daily life.

'T-shirt' should be plural 'T-shirts' when speaking generally. 'Parts' is incorrect; use 'part' with singular noun 'it' or change to plural 'they are part'. Use subject-verb agreement: 'they are part'. Also 'part of my daily life' is the correct phrase. Grammar problem type ID:1

× Yes, I always spend a lot of time choosing what clothes should I wear.

✓ Yes, I always spend a lot of time choosing which clothes I should wear.

When using embedded questions, word order should be subject + verb: 'which clothes I should wear' not 'what clothes should I wear'. Also 'which' is better for selecting among options. Keep main clause 'choosing' plus clause in correct order. Grammar problem type ID:26

× I don't wear different style of clothes on weekdays and weekends because they always at home and I always repeat my clothes.

✓ I don't wear different styles of clothes on weekdays and weekends because I stay at home most of the time and I often repeat my outfits.

Use plural 'styles' and 'styles of clothes' (singular/plural issue). 'They always at home' is incorrect pronoun and missing verb; unclear referent—use 'I stay at home' to explain reason. 'Repeat my clothes' is awkward; 'repeat my outfits' is natural. Also replace 'always' with 'most of the time' or 'often' for naturalness. Grammar problem type ID:1

× Honestly my favorite color is pink, but it doesn't suit me well because of my skin color so I prefer color blue.

✓ Honestly, my favorite color is pink, but it doesn't suit me because of my skin tone, so I prefer blue.

Use a comma after 'Honestly'. 'Doesn't suit me well because of my skin color' is slightly awkward—use 'because of my skin tone'. Don't repeat 'color' before 'blue'; simply 'prefer blue'. Articles are not needed before color names. Improve fluency by splitting into clauses with commas. Grammar problem type ID:22