Clothing— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Be more concise and fluent: start with a clear topic sentence, reduce filler words (uh), and give one specific reason with a short example. Use linking words like 'because' or 'so' to connect ideas.

예시: I usually wear jeans and plain shirts because they are comfortable and practical. For example, when I travel or run errands, jeans and a plain shirt let me move freely and look neat without much effort.

제안: Answer directly with a clear reason and avoid repeating. Replace fillers and unclear phrases. Use one linking word (because/so) and give a concise contrast.

예시: I prefer comfortable, casual clothes because they are more practical and suit my daily activities. In contrast, smart clothes often require more care and restrict movement, so I save them for formal events.

제안: Give a clear topic sentence and one or two specific reasons without redundancy. Correct awkward phrasing (e.g., 'done wearing sleeveless'). Use linking words like 'because' or 'so' for coherence.

예시: Yes, I love wearing T-shirts because they are comfortable and allow me to move freely. For instance, on hot days I choose sleeveless T-shirts to stay cool and active.

제안: Be specific about when and why you spend time choosing clothes. Remove stuttering and vague phrases; use examples and linking words like 'especially' or 'for example' to clarify.

예시: Yes, I often spend more time choosing clothes for social events. For example, before a party or picnic I pick outfits that fit the theme so I feel confident and appropriate.

제안: Specify how your style differs between weekdays and weekends. Avoid repetition and use linking words like 'on weekdays' and 'on weekends' to structure the answer.

예시: Yes. On weekdays I usually wear casual, practical clothes for work or school, while on weekends I experiment with trendier outfits to express my personal style.

제안: State your preferred colours clearly and give a specific reason without hesitation. Remove fillers and improve grammar (e.g., 'because I have tan skin, I prefer...'). Use linking words like 'because' or 'so'.

예시: I prefer neutral colours like black, white and brown because they suit my tan skin and are easy to mix and match. For instance, a black shirt and brown jacket often look balanced on me.

× I prefer wearing clothes such as jeans and plain shirts.

✓ I prefer to wear clothes such as jeans and plain shirts.

After 'prefer' when comparing general habits, the infinitive 'to wear' or the gerund 'wearing' can both be used, but 'prefer to' is more natural here to state a habitual preference. Use 'prefer to wear' for clarity and formality.

× Uh, wearing comfortably feels like uh, I can move easily and it fits my body figure and also it makes me more practical than wearing some expensive clothes.

✓ Wearing comfortable clothes makes me feel that I can move easily, that they fit my body shape, and that I am more practical than if I wore expensive clothes.

'Wearing' is acceptable but 'wearing comfortably' is incorrect: 'comfortable' should modify 'clothes' not the verb. Sentence also mixes clauses and tenses. Use noun phrase 'comfortable clothes' and parallel structures ('makes me feel that...') and conditional comparison 'than if I wore expensive clothes.'

× I prefer wearing comfortable and casual clothes than, uh, wearing smart clothes because it uh, like what I've said, it's more practical and how wearing smart clothes makes your time more, uh, long or it.

✓ I prefer comfortable, casual clothes to smart clothes because, as I said, they are more practical, and wearing smart clothes can take more time to put on.

Use 'prefer A to B' not 'prefer A than'. 'It's more practical' should match plural subject 'they'. The phrase 'makes your time more long' is incorrect; use 'takes more time' or 'is more time-consuming.' Also simplify filler words for clarity.

× Yes, I really love wearing T-shirts every single day, done wearing sleeveless because it makes me more comfortable, secured and I can move myself freely.

✓ Yes, I really love wearing T-shirts every single day, and I often wear sleeveless ones because they make me feel more comfortable and secure, and I can move freely.

'Done wearing sleeveless' is incorrect. Use 'I often wear sleeveless ones' or 'I often wear sleeveless T-shirts.' 'Secured' should be the adjective 'secure.' 'Move myself freely' is redundant; 'move freely' is correct.

× Yes, I do spend a lot of time choosing my clothes, especially when going out with my friends, going out to the party, having a picnic since I prefer too much the the the theme of each day or.

✓ Yes, I do spend a lot of time choosing my clothes, especially when I go out with friends, to a party, or on a picnic, because I pay a lot of attention to the theme of each day.

Replace awkward gerunds with full clauses for clarity ('when I go out'). Remove filler and repeated words. 'Prefer too much the theme' is incorrect; use 'pay attention to' or 'care about the theme.' Ensure parallel list structure.

× Yes, I do wear different styles of clothes every time I go out. I challenge myself to be more fashion and have my my own style in each.

✓ Yes, I wear different styles of clothes every time I go out. I challenge myself to be more fashionable and to develop my own style for each occasion.

'Do wear' is unnecessary; simple present 'I wear' is fine. 'Be more fashion' is incorrect; use the adjective 'fashionable.' 'Have my my own style in each' is unclear; use 'develop my own style for each occasion.'

× I only have specific colors that match my style, especially white and brown and black because in since I am uh tan skin, I prefer the dark side than the colorful side of the clothes and it feels.

✓ I only have specific colors that match my style, especially white, brown, and black, because I have tan skin; I prefer darker clothes to colorful ones because they suit me better.

Remove redundant words 'in since' and incorrect phrasing 'tan skin'—use 'I have tan skin.' Use 'prefer A to B' not 'prefer A than.' 'The dark side' should be 'darker clothes' and complete the idea 'because they suit me better.' Fix list punctuation and clarity.