Clothing— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Cần trả lời trực tiếp, dùng câu ngắn gọn, sửa ngữ pháp và từ vựng sai. Nên phân biệt rõ mùa hè và mùa đông, tránh từ không rõ (ví dụ “AT shirt”, “skin jeans”, “popular in summer”), dùng liên từ thích hợp để kết nối ý. Hạn chế tối đa lỗi phát âm/viết hoa và cấu trúc câu, giữ tối đa 3-4 câu.

예시: In summer I usually wear dresses, t-shirts and shorts because it is very hot. In winter I prefer wearing jeans and a warm coat to stay comfortable.

제안: Cần trả lời trực tiếp và hoàn chỉnh, loại bỏ tiếng lấp và dấu chấm sai chỗ. Giải thích lý do bằng 1-2 câu hỗ trợ với liên từ như 'because' hoặc 'so'. Chú ý số nhiều/số ít (a comfortable outfit / comfortable clothes).

예시: I prefer comfortable, casual clothes because I often go to the park with friends and relax at home. Therefore I choose soft t-shirts and jeans that are easy to move in.

제안: Trả lời trực tiếp, tránh lặp từ. Sửa từ không rõ ("AT shirt"). Nên dùng liên từ để liệt kê hoạt động (for example, when/and). Thêm một chi tiết cụ thể về loại T‑shirt hoặc chất liệu nếu có thể.

예시: Yes, I like wearing T-shirts in summer because they are cool and comfortable. For example, I often wear cotton T-shirts when I go to the beach, visit the park with friends, or relax with my family.

제안: Cần trả lời súc tích và gọn, tránh lặp và tiếng lấp. Sửa cấu trúc 'spend a lot of time choosing clothes' (không có 'to'). Liệt kê ngắn gọn các loại quần áo và nêu lý do cụ thể vì bạn tốn thời gian (ví dụ: thích phối đồ).

예시: Yes, I spend a lot of time choosing clothes because I own many different items. For instance, I have dresses, T-shirts and jeans, so I usually try several combinations before going out.

제안: Cần sửa lỗi lặp (weekends and weekends), trả lời rõ ràng sự khác biệt giữa ngày trong tuần và cuối tuần. Giải thích lí do cụ thể (ví dụ: đi làm/đi học vs. đi du lịch hoặc gặp gỡ bạn bè). Dùng 2-3 câu, mỗi câu ngắn gọn và logic.

예시: Yes, I wear different styles on weekdays and weekends. On weekdays I wear casual smart clothes for school or work, while on weekends I prefer relaxed dresses and T-shirts when I travel with my family.

제안: Cần sửa cấu trúc ngữ pháp (My favorite colours are blue and white). Tránh lặp ý và dùng câu giải thích ngắn gọn về lí do tại sao thích màu đó (ví dụ: dễ phối đồ hoặc trông tươi sáng).

예시: My favourite colours are blue and white because they are easy to match and look fresh. For example, a white shirt and blue jeans are simple but stylish.

× In the summer I like to wear a dress AT shirt and a short because summer is very hot.

✓ In the summer I like to wear a dress, a T-shirt and shorts because summer is very hot.

Student incorrectly used articles and nouns: 'AT shirt' seems to mean 'a T-shirt' and 'a short' should be plural 'shorts'. Use 'a' before singular countable nouns (a dress, a T-shirt) and plural for 'shorts'. Also add commas for clarity.

× In winter I want to wear a skin jeans and popular in summer.

✓ In winter I want to wear skinny jeans and clothes that are popular in summer.

Sentence has wrong word forms and missing nouns. 'skin jeans' should be 'skinny jeans' (adjective + noun). 'popular in summer' needs a noun: 'clothes that are popular in summer'. Use consistent present tense 'want to wear' with correct noun phrase.

× I want to wear a comfortable clothes because.

✓ I want to wear comfortable clothes because...

'Clothes' is a plural noun and should not take 'a'. Remove 'a'. Also finish the sentence with reason; 'because' must be followed by an explanation.

× I always go to park with my friends, uh at home to watch TV so I want to wear comfortable.

✓ I always go to the park with my friends and stay at home to watch TV, so I want to wear comfortable clothes.

Missing definite article 'the' before 'park'. Coordinate ideas with 'and'. End with noun 'clothes' to complete meaning. Maintain parallel structure.

× I like wearing T-shirt in the summer because summer is very hot.

✓ I like wearing T-shirts in the summer because summer is very hot.

Use plural 'T-shirts' for general preference. Also typically use 'in the summer' which is correct; change noun to plural to show general habit.

× I can wear AT shirt when I go to the beach, go to park with my friends and relax with my family.

✓ I can wear a T-shirt when I go to the beach, go to the park with my friends and relax with my family.

Use 'a T-shirt' (article and correct form). Add 'the' before 'park' and keep parallel verb forms 'go' and 'relax'.

× Yes, I spend a lot of time to choosing clothes because I have many clothes.

✓ Yes, I spend a lot of time choosing clothes because I have many clothes.

After 'spend time' use gerund (verb+ -ing) not 'to' plus verb. Remove 'to' before 'choosing'.

× Uh uh, like dress, T-shirt, jeans, comfortable clothes, table, uh, summer clothes, winter clothes.

✓ For example, dresses, T-shirts, jeans, comfortable clothes, summer clothes and winter clothes.

List items need correct plural forms and unnecessary word 'table' removed. Use an introductory phrase like 'For example' and proper commas/and before last item.

× Yes, I usually wear different style of clothes on weekends and weekends because weekdays and weekends I always go to travel with my family.

✓ Yes, I usually wear different styles of clothes on weekdays and weekends because I always travel with my family on weekends.

'Different style' should be plural 'different styles'. Sentence repeats 'weekends and weekends' mistakenly; correct to 'weekdays and weekends'. 'Go to travel' is incorrect; use 'travel' or 'go travelling'.

× I usually wear dress and T-shirt.

✓ I usually wear dresses and T-shirts.

Use plural forms 'dresses' and 'T-shirts' to indicate habitual choices.

× My favorite clock color clothes is blue and white because blue and white is my favorite clothes in the color.

✓ My favorite clothing colors are blue and white because they are my favorite colors for clothes.

Original uses wrong words: 'clock' should be 'clothes' or 'clothing', and singular/plural agreement is wrong. Use 'clothing colors' or 'colors for clothes' and plural verb 'are'. Replace redundant phrase to be natural.