Clothing— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Be more concise and accurate: start with a clear topic sentence, avoid repeating similar ideas, and use specific examples. Use linking words to contrast work and leisure clothing. Keep to 3–4 sentences.

예시: I usually choose clothes depending on the occasion. For work I prefer smart but comfortable items such as tailored trousers and simple blouses. In my free time I wear casual outfits—jeans or a summer dress—so I can relax and move easily.

제안: Avoid repetition and correct small errors. Provide a clear preference and briefly explain why. Use linking words (however, while) to show contrast and one specific example for each style.

예시: I prefer clothes that are comfortable; however, I choose smart clothes for work. For example, I wear a shirt and tailored trousers in the office, while at the weekend I wear a T‑shirt and jeans so I can be more relaxed.

제안: Clarify and remove unclear or irrelevant words (e.g., 'Danny Mundenny'). Keep answers coherent: state preference, give a reason, and an example. Limit to 2–3 sentences and avoid filler.

예시: Yes, I like wearing T‑shirts because they are comfortable and easy to style. For example, I often pair a plain T‑shirt with jeans when I meet friends, as it is both casual and practical.

제안: Make the answer more concise and avoid trailing off. Give a specific routine or time estimate and one reason. Use linking words like because or so to explain.

예시: Yes, I spend time planning my outfits before events because I like to look my best. For instance, I usually spend about 15–20 minutes choosing clothes and matching accessories like earrings and a bag.

제안: Be careful to distinguish weekdays vs weekends and avoid contradicting phrases. State the contrast clearly and give specific examples for each. Limit to 2–3 sentences and correct informal or unclear words (e.g., 'bum shorts').

예시: Yes, I wear different styles: on weekdays I dress professionally, usually in a blouse and trousers for work. At the weekend I opt for casual clothes, such as shorts or jeans and a comfortable top when I meet friends.

제안: Give a clearer, shorter response: state your preference and explain briefly. Mention a few specific colours you prefer or avoid and why (e.g., match skin tone, professional appearance).

예시: I don't have a strong preference for colours; I choose clothes that make me feel confident. For example, I often wear navy and beige because they look smart and match my skin tone, but I will wear brighter colours for a casual outing.

× For me, the kind of outfits I like to wear depends on the occasion.

✓ For me, the kind of outfits I like to wear depend on the occasion.

Subject 'the kind of outfits' is plural, so the verb should be plural 'depend' not 'depends'. Ensure subject-verb agreement by matching verb number to the head noun.

× If I'm going to work, I like to put on smart outfits like T-shirts, trousers and smart dresses and also to look comfortable.

✓ If I'm going to work, I like to put on smart outfits like T-shirts, trousers and smart dresses and also look comfortable.

After 'and' joining two verb phrases with the same subject, use the base form 'look' not the infinitive 'to look'. Remove 'to' to keep parallel structure.

× The kind of clothes I like to wear has to be comfortable on me.

✓ The kind of clothes I like to wear has to be comfortable for me.

Preposition 'on' is incorrect for describing comfort relative to a person; use 'for'. The rest uses 'has to be' with 'the kind' (singular), which is acceptable.

× As long as I feel comfortable in my dress, I'm OK.

✓ As long as I feel comfortable in my clothes, I'm OK.

Singular 'my dress' may not reflect variety; 'my clothes' is more natural for general statements. Use pronouns/nouns that match intended meaning.

× And going out I like to put on casual wares like so.

✓ And when going out I like to put on casual wear.

'Wares' is incorrect in this context; 'wear' (uncountable) refers to clothing. Remove 'like so' which is nonstandard, and add 'when' for clarity.

× I like wearing T-shirts because it makes me feel comfortable and they are very easy to put on.

✓ I like wearing T-shirts because they make me feel comfortable and are very easy to put on.

Pronoun 'it' incorrectly refers to plural 'T-shirts'; use 'they' and plural verb 'make'. Maintain agreement between pronoun number and antecedent.

× And most times if I'm not wearing T-shirts, I still prefer to wear comfortable clothes like dresses.

✓ Most of the time, if I'm not wearing T-shirts, I still prefer to wear comfortable clothes like dresses.

'Most times' is informal; 'most of the time' is clearer. Remove leading 'And' and add commas for readability.

× Danny Mundenny, especially when I'm going out with my friends.

✓ I prefer something casual and comfortable, especially when I'm going out with my friends.

Original fragment 'Danny Mundenny' is unclear and not a complete sentence. Replace with a full clause expressing preference and clarify meaning.

× Something casual and comfortable.

✓ I prefer something casual and comfortable.

This fragment lacks a subject and verb; make it a full sentence by adding subject and verb to express the idea.

× I am a very organized person and that includes ensuring my outfits are well sorted out before going for any events and it usually takes most of the time to arrange my things 'cause I like to look my best when I go out and I check out my accessory, my earrings and.

✓ I am a very organized person and that includes ensuring my outfits are well sorted out before any events; it usually takes me a lot of time to arrange my things because I like to look my best when I go out and I check my accessories, like my earrings.

Run-on sentence with informal 'cause' and incomplete list. Use 'takes me a lot of time' for clarity, 'because' instead of informal contraction, plural 'accessories', and complete the list. Adjust tense and structure for clarity.

× On weekdays, that's when I go to work and I like to look professional in my outfits, and that includes me wearing shirts, professional wears that matches professional gatherings.

✓ On weekdays, when I go to work, I like to look professional in my outfits; that includes wearing shirts and professional clothes that match professional gatherings.

Use 'clothes' instead of 'wears', ensure plural verb agreement 'match' with plural 'clothes', remove unnecessary 'me', and improve sentence flow.

× And on weekdays when I'm going out with friends, I like to put on casual dresses like bum shorts.

✓ And on weekends or when I'm going out with friends, I like to put on casual clothes like shorts.

The original said 'on weekdays' twice and 'bum shorts' is nonstandard. Clarify by referencing weekends or outings, and use 'shorts' instead of 'bum shorts'. Ensure tense and context match question about weekdays vs weekends.

× I'm not really a colour person, as long as what I'm putting on makes me look smart and confident and comfortable most especially then I'm good to go and I just dress to look my best, not with the colour, just to match my skin and that's all.

✓ I'm not really a colour person; as long as what I wear makes me look smart, confident and comfortable, I'm good to go. I just dress to look my best, not based on colour, only to match my skin tone.

Sentence is long and informal. Replace 'what I'm putting on' with 'what I wear', use semicolons/commas for clarity, change 'not with the colour' to 'not based on colour', and 'match my skin' to 'match my skin tone' for natural phrasing.