Clothing— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Be clearer and more concise. Start with a direct topic sentence naming the style, then give one or two specific supporting details using linking words. Avoid hesitations and repetition.

예시: I prefer a classic “old money” style. For example, I often wear a crisp white or light blue shirt with black or brown slacks because it looks neat and versatile for many occasions.

제안: Give a clear preference stating the reason, then one brief supporting detail. Use linking words like because or so to connect ideas, and avoid vague phrases like “small gimmicks.”

예시: I prefer comfortable and casual clothes because they help me feel relaxed. For instance, I choose casual outfits with subtle details such as a patterned collar or nice buttons, so the clothes still look stylish.

제안: Answer directly and give a reason and a specific example. Mention climate briefly and how you adapt. Reduce repetition and correct basic grammar (e.g., ‘weather’).

예시: Yes, I like wearing T-shirts because they are simple and comfortable. However, in Thailand’s hot and humid weather I sometimes prefer lightweight, moisture-wicking shirts to stay cool.

제안: Provide a clear topic sentence about how much time you spend, then give specific reasons and an example. Use linking words like because or when. Avoid unclear verbs like “shooting clothes.”

예시: Yes, I often spend a lot of time choosing clothes because I want to feel confident when I go out. For example, before meeting friends I usually try on a few outfits and pick the one that fits well and looks smart.

제안: Answer directly about differences, then give specific examples for weekday and weekend outfits. Use clear linking words like while or whereas. Correct vocabulary (e.g., ‘uniform’, ‘track pants’).

예시: Yes, I wear different styles on weekdays and weekends. On weekdays I wear my school uniform or simple casual clothes, whereas at the weekend I usually wear track pants and a comfortable shirt for relaxing or meeting friends.

제안: Give a direct preference and one clear reason with specific examples of combinations. Use correct color names and singular/plural forms, and avoid redundant comparisons.

예시: I prefer black and navy blue because they are easy to match with many pants. For example, a navy shirt pairs well with white or blue trousers, and a black shirt works with light or dark pants.

× OK, the kind of clothes that I would like to wear in my daily life now is is like a the old money type is have a white shirt, uh, uh, urgent shirt and black or brown slacks.

✓ OK, the kind of clothes I like to wear in my daily life now are the 'old money' type: a white shirt, a dark shirt and black or brown slacks.

The original sentence has multiple sentence structure problems: repeated words ('is is'), unnecessary fillers, incorrect verb 'is have', and mixed singular/plural forms. I corrected the subject-verb agreement by using 'are' to match plural 'clothes', removed redundancies, and listed items with correct articles ('a white shirt, a dark shirt') and parallel structure. Suggestion: plan your sentence before speaking, avoid fillers, and keep subject and verb number consistent. Grammar problem type ID:26

× OK, I would like to say that I was prefer to wear a comfortable and actual clothes because I think it's have a small gimmicks in that style that make that style look special, look gorgeous and it make me feel very like it that style.

✓ OK, I would prefer to wear comfortable and casual clothes because I think there are small details in that style that make it look special and gorgeous, and they make me like that style very much.

Errors include incorrect modal/tense ('was prefer' instead of 'would prefer' or 'prefer'), wrong adjective 'actual' instead of 'casual', incorrect use of 'it's have' and subject-verb agreement ('make it' and 'it make'). I corrected modal verb to 'would prefer' and fixed noun/verb agreement and word choice. Suggestion: use 'would prefer' or 'prefer' for preferences, choose correct adjectives, and ensure verbs agree with their subjects. Grammar problem type ID:4

× OK, in this questions, I would like to say that I very like to wear T-shirt.

✓ OK, for this question, I would like to say that I really like to wear T-shirts.

Problems: plural/singular mismatch ('this questions'), unnatural adverb placement ('very like' should be 'really like'), and count noun agreement ('T-shirt' should be plural when speaking generally). I changed 'this questions' to 'this question', 'very' to 'really', and 'T-shirt' to 'T-shirts'. Suggestion: use correct singular/plural for 'this/these' and place adverbs before the verb when appropriate. Grammar problem type ID:6

× But in the Thailand wetters wetter I I don't think wearing T-shirt is very comfortable in our country, but I would like to wear T-shirt.

✓ But in Thailand's weather I don't think wearing T-shirts is very comfortable, although I still like to wear them.

Errors: incorrect preposition/article 'in the Thailand', wrong noun 'wetters wetter', repetition, and missing possessive for 'Thailand's weather'. Also count and pronoun issues with 'T-shirt' and 'them'. I corrected to 'in Thailand's weather' and used plural 'T-shirts' and pronoun 'them'. Suggestion: use possessive for country + weather, and keep consistent plurality and pronouns. Grammar problem type ID:11

× Oh, to these questions I would like to say in a real life that I'm very spending a lot of time to shooting clothes because I I prefer that that clothes make me feel good when I go outside, feel gorgeous in the society which I need to meet my friends and other people.

✓ Oh, to this question I would like to say that in real life I spend a lot of time choosing clothes because I prefer clothes that make me feel good and confident when I go out to meet friends and other people.

Original has many problems: 'to these questions' should be 'to this question', incorrect progressive 'I'm very spending', wrong verb 'shooting' instead of 'choosing', duplicated words, and awkward phrasing 'feel gorgeous in the society'. I rewrote for clarity, corrected tense to simple present 'I spend', and used 'confident' for natural expression. Suggestion: choose correct verbs ('choose'), use simple present for habitual actions, and avoid literal translations. Grammar problem type ID:26},{