Clothing— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Be clearer and more concise. Start with a direct topic sentence (I usually wear shorts and T-shirts), avoid repetition, correct grammar (use plural/singular correctly) and give one or two specific reasons with a linking word (because/so). Keep it to 2–4 sentences.

예시: I usually wear shorts and T-shirts because they make me feel comfortable and relaxed. For example, I often wear a cotton T-shirt and denim shorts at home or when I go out with friends because they are easy to move in and suitable for warm weather.

제안: Answer directly (I prefer comfortable clothes) and avoid irrelevant or confusing phrases. Correct grammar (a comfortable outfit, tight jeans). Give a clear reason and one brief example. Use linking words like because or so to connect ideas.

예시: I prefer comfortable clothes rather than smart outfits because tight clothes make me feel uncomfortable. For instance, I avoid tight jeans and choose loose trousers or joggers so I can move freely all day.

제안: Give a clear topic sentence and one specific supporting detail. Avoid saying 'any occasion' if not true; be specific about where T-shirts are appropriate. Limit hesitation words (uh, um).

예시: Yes, I love wearing T-shirts because they are comfortable and versatile. For example, I wear plain T-shirts when I meet friends or go shopping, and I can dress them up with a jacket for a casual dinner.

제안: Be consistent: start with the direct answer (No) then explain briefly. Fix contradictions (you said both 'can spend' and 'do not spend'). Use linking words (because/so) and give a concrete detail about your routine.

예시: No, I don't spend much time choosing clothes because I usually pick the first clean outfit I see in my closet. For instance, I keep a few go-to T-shirts and jeans for weekdays, so I can get dressed quickly.

제안: Answer clearly (Yes/No) then explain with a contrast between weekdays and weekends using linking words like 'while' or 'whereas'. Mention specific clothing for each situation and avoid unfinished sentences.

예시: Yes, I wear different styles: on weekdays I usually wear casual, comfortable clothes like T-shirts and jeans for work or classes, whereas on weekends I dress up more, for example wearing a midi dress or a stylish top and jeans when I go out to restaurants with family.

제안: Start with a clear statement about colours for each season. Reduce hesitations and use correct adjectives (dark colours, light or neutral/nude colours). Give one specific colour example and a reason why you choose it.

예시: Frankly, I prefer dark colours in winter, such as navy or dark brown, because they feel warm and practical. In summer I choose light or neutral colours like beige or pastel pink because they look fresh and keep me cooler.

× OK, most of the time I prefer to wear our lower and T-shirt because when I wear that so that time I feel very comfortable and relaxed.

✓ OK, most of the time I prefer to wear trousers and a T-shirt because when I wear those I feel very comfortable and relaxed.

The student used 'our lower' (incorrect word and singular/plural mismatch) and 'T-shirt' without an article. Use plural 'trousers' (or 'pants') and 'a T-shirt' for a single item, and 'those' to refer to multiple items. Also remove redundant words like 'so that time.'

× And also also it, it is also it is that type of clothes you can wear anytime, anywhere.

✓ Also, it is the type of clothing you can wear anytime, anywhere.

Pronouns were repeated and awkward ('it, it is also it is'). Use singular 'it' once and 'clothing' (uncountable) instead of 'clothes' with 'type of'. The definite article 'the' is needed before 'type'.

× I prefer to wear a comfortable clothes rather than wearing a smart clothes because I I am a dead girl who love to wear a wear a lower T-shirt because I feel very uncomfortable when I wear a like a like a tighter tight Jean and tighter top.

✓ I prefer to wear comfortable clothes rather than smart clothes because I am a laid-back girl who loves to wear trousers and a T-shirt; I feel very uncomfortable when I wear tight jeans and tight tops.

Use 'comfortable clothes' (no 'a') and 'smart clothes' (no article). 'Dead girl' is likely a misuse for 'laid-back'. Subject-verb agreement: 'who loves' not 'who love'. Use plural 'jeans' and 'tops' and correct adjective order ('tight jeans', 'tight tops'). Remove repeated words.

× Yes, I love to wear T-shirts because I, when I wear that, so that time I feel very relaxed and also, uh, also we, we can wear that type of clothes anywhere and also in any occasion.

✓ Yes, I love wearing T-shirts because when I wear them I feel very relaxed, and we can wear this type of clothing anywhere and on any occasion.

Use gerund 'loving' or 'love wearing' is natural. Replace 'that' with plural 'them' for T-shirts. 'Type of clothing' is preferable and 'on any occasion' uses correct preposition. Remove redundant words and correct plurality.

× No, I don't think so. I can spend a lot of time to choose a clothes because when I open my closet so that time I what I see in the closet so I can wear that that on my so I I do not spend too much time to select clothes because I am not a choosy girl.

✓ No, I don't. I don't spend a lot of time choosing clothes because when I open my closet I wear what I find there, so I do not spend much time selecting clothes because I am not a picky girl.

'A clothes' is incorrect; 'clothes' is plural and uncountable so no article. Use 'choosing clothes' (gerund) instead of 'to choose a clothes'. Simplify sentence structure and use 'picky' instead of 'choosy' for natural phrasing.

× Most of the time when I was go with the when I'm going with my family members or friends or lunch for lunch or dinner in a restaurant.

✓ Most of the time when I go out with my family or friends for lunch or dinner in a restaurant,

Mixes past 'was go' and present 'I'm going'. Use simple present 'go' for habitual actions. Remove redundant words 'family members' -> 'family' and 'for lunch or dinner' is the correct phrasing.

× So that time I prefer to wear a stylish clothes like a Jean top Sometime offer MIDI dresses.

✓ So at those times I prefer to wear stylish clothes like jeans and tops; sometimes I wear midi dresses.

'A stylish clothes' mixes singular article with plural noun; use 'stylish clothes'. 'Jean top' should be 'jeans and tops' or 'a jean top' if singular. 'MIDI' should be 'midi' and 'sometimes I wear midi dresses' is clearer.

× So that time I prefer to wear our dresses on a weekend not a weekdays because in a weekdays I am a.

✓ So I prefer to wear dresses on weekends, not on weekdays, because on weekdays I am usually more casual.

Original sentence is incomplete and has article errors ('a weekdays'). Use plural 'weekends/ weekdays' and complete the thought by stating what happens on weekdays ('more casual').

× Umm, uh, I frankly speaking, uh, in a winter I prefer to wear a uh, dark clothes, uh, dark clothes.

✓ Frankly speaking, in winter I prefer to wear dark clothes.

Do not use article 'a' before 'winter' or before uncountable 'dark clothes'. Simplify redundant words and remove fillers.

× But in a summer, most of the time I prefer to wear a veera normal color, like casual color clothes, like uh, some of base, uh, uh, base nude color.

✓ But in summer, most of the time I prefer to wear neutral or light colors, like nude or pastel tones.

Use 'in summer' without article. 'Veera normal color' is unclear; replace with 'neutral or light colors'. 'Some of base' is incorrect. Use 'nude or pastel tones' for clear color description.