Clothing— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Be more grammatical and concise: start with a clear topic sentence, then give one or two specific reasons with linking words. Correct noun forms and verb tenses, and avoid repetition.

예시: I like different kinds of clothes, including casual, traditional and Western styles. However, I prefer traditional clothes such as a salwar kameez because they are loose and comfortable, and they suit cultural events.

제안: Give a direct answer then support it with specific reasons and one example. Use linking words (because, for example) and correct articles and plural forms.

예시: I prefer comfortable, casual clothes because they make me feel relaxed. For example, I often wear a T-shirt and jeans when I go out to meet friends because they are easy to move in and comfortable for long walks.

제안: Answer directly, then add brief specific details. Avoid filler words and improve vocabulary (variety, designs, patterns). Use correct word order and articles.

예시: Yes, I wear T-shirts every day. I have a wide variety, including printed T-shirts with logos, some plain formal ones and others with cartoon designs for casual wear.

제안: Be concise and avoid hesitations. Give a clear structure: short direct answer, then explain exceptions with a reason. Fix tense and remove repetition.

예시: No, I usually do not spend much time choosing clothes. However, for special occasions like weddings or office meetings I take more time to decide because I want to look appropriate and well-dressed.

제안: Provide a clear contrast between weekdays and weekends using linking words (on weekdays/on weekends). Reduce repetition and use correct verb forms.

예시: On weekdays I usually wear more traditional or smart clothes for work or school. On weekends I prefer casual clothes, like T-shirts and jeans, because they are comfortable for meeting friends and relaxing.

제안: Give a direct answer and one or two specific reasons, avoid repeating the word 'colour' and improve phrasing. Mention an example or cultural reason if relevant.

예시: I usually prefer black clothes because I think black looks smart and goes with everything. For special occasions I often choose black outfits as I feel they are elegant and, culturally, I consider them lucky.

× Usually I wear all type of clothes such as a casual, traditionals and western.

✓ Usually I wear all types of clothes such as casual, traditional and western styles.

The noun 'type' should be plural 'types' when referring to multiple kinds. 'a casual' and 'traditionals' are incorrect forms: use adjectives 'casual' and 'traditional' and pair with a noun like 'styles' or 'clothes' to be grammatical.

× But I am feel more comfortable when I wear traditional clothes because like suit salvar in in which when I wear I feel very comfortable.

✓ But I feel more comfortable when I wear traditional clothes because I like suits and salwar; when I wear them I feel very comfortable.

The phrase 'I am feel' is incorrect; use 'I feel'. 'like suit salvar' mixes forms and spelling; use plural nouns 'suits and salwar' or 'salwar kameez' and match pronoun/object with 'them'. Remove duplicated 'in' and redundant wording.

× I prefer to casual clothes because casual clothes when I wear I feel very relaxed and comfortable like T-shirt, pant and I wear casual clothes all the time when I go outside and hang out with my friend.

✓ I prefer casual clothes because when I wear them I feel very relaxed and comfortable, like T-shirts and pants, and I wear casual clothes all the time when I go out and hang out with my friends.

'Prefer to casual clothes' incorrectly uses 'to'; 'prefer' should be followed by a noun or 'to' + verb. Pronouns should agree ('them') and plurals are needed ('T-shirts', 'pants', 'friends'). Use 'go out' rather than 'go outside' in this context.

× Yes I like to wearing T-shirt in my day to routine I always wear T-shirt.

✓ Yes, I like wearing T-shirts; in my daily routine I always wear T-shirts.

'Like to wearing' mixes infinitive and gerund; use either 'like to wear' or 'like wearing'. 'day to routine' is incorrect; use 'daily routine'. Use plurals for general statements about clothes.

× I have such as many variety of T-shirt like sticker on T-shirt and some formal T-shirt and some uh cartoon sketched.

✓ I have many varieties of T-shirt, such as ones with stickers, some formal T-shirts and some with cartoon sketches.

'such as many variety of' is ungrammatical; use 'many varieties of' or 'a variety of'. Make noun forms consistent and plural where needed ('T-shirts'). Clarify expressions like 'sticker on T-shirt' to 'ones with stickers'.

× No, I did not load loads of time when I was choosing clothes, but uh, if uh, I, uh, I go to a special occasion such as traditionals, uh, functions and some uh, office meeting at the time I, I, I am little bit confused because.

✓ No, I do not spend loads of time choosing clothes, but if I go to a special occasion such as traditional functions or an office meeting, I am a little bit confused about what to wear.

The original mixes past tense 'did not' and awkward phrasing. For habitual or general truth use present 'do not spend'. 'Load loads of time' is informal and redundant; 'spend loads of time' or 'spend a lot of time' is correct. Clean filler words and finish the clause with 'about what to wear'.

× I usually wear old type of clothes such as traditionals, casual and western.

✓ I usually wear older styles of clothes such as traditional, casual and western.

'Old type of clothes' is awkward; use 'older styles' or 'different types'. 'Traditionals' should be 'traditional' as an adjective. Maintain parallel adjective forms.

× But uh, uh, when I was hang out with my friend and uh, when I go on a special special occasion that I wear casual clothes because, uh, when I wear that time, I feel very relaxed.

✓ But when I hang out with my friends or when I go to a special occasion, I wear casual clothes because when I wear them I feel very relaxed.

Mixing 'was hang out' is incorrect; use present simple 'hang out' for habitual actions. Use plural 'friends' and correct phrase 'go to a special occasion'. Replace 'that I wear' with 'I wear' and use 'them' to refer to clothes.

× Usually I prefer black colour clothes because black colour is my favorite colour and when I go to special occasion though that time I feel black clothed because black colour is lucky for me.

✓ Usually I prefer black clothes because black is my favorite color, and when I go to a special occasion I like to wear black because I consider it lucky.

Avoid repeating 'colour' redundantly; use 'black clothes' or 'black is my favorite color'. 'Feel black clothed' is unidiomatic; express as 'like to wear black' or 'I feel comfortable wearing black'. Clarify reason 'consider it lucky'.