Clothing— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Be more direct and concise: start with a clear topic sentence, then give one or two specific reasons with a linking word. Avoid repetition and filler words. Also correct basic grammar (e.g., "I'm not a smart clothes person" is unclear) and use suitable vocabulary like "formal" or "smart" instead of awkward phrases.

예시: I usually wear casual, simple clothes. I prefer them because they are comfortable and convenient for everyday life, and they suit my personal style.

제안: Answer directly, correct grammar ("it depends" not "that's depends"), and reduce fillers. Use a linking word to contrast (e.g., "however" or "but") and give a short specific example of an important occasion.

예시: It depends on the situation, but most of the time I prefer comfortable, casual clothes because they help me relax. However, I wear smart clothes for formal events such as job interviews or weddings.

제안: Be specific and avoid filler words. Use correct phrases ("comfortable to wear", "hang out") and give an example of when and how you wear T-shirts. Keep it within 2–4 sentences.

예시: Yes, I like wearing T-shirts because they are simple and comfortable. In summer I wear them when I hang out with friends, and in cooler months I layer a T-shirt under a jacket for extra warmth.

제안: Start with a clear topic sentence and correct grammar ("it depends", "I don't spend much time"). Explain briefly why you choose dark clothes (e.g., easy to match, low maintenance) and give a short example of a 'big event'.

예시: It depends, but usually I don't spend much time choosing clothes because I prefer dark, easy-to-match items that are low maintenance. For big events like weddings, however, I take more time to pick a suitable outfit.

제안: Be concise and use correct grammar ("weekends are a time to relax"). Use a linking phrase to explain reason and give a concrete weekend activity to illustrate your point.

예시: Yes, I wear different styles: on weekdays I wear casual or smart-casual clothes for work, while on weekends I usually wear sportswear because I relax and exercise, for example going for a run or playing basketball.

제안: Answer with a clear topic sentence and give specific reasons without confusing phrases. Correct vocabulary ("shades of green", "easy to keep clean") and avoid redundant clauses. Mention how the colors suit you and a practical reason (e.g., hide stains).

예시: I prefer dark colours like black, navy and dark green because they suit my personality and are easier to keep clean; they also match most of my other clothes.

× Well, I prefer to wear casual or simple clothes for the one thing I think such clothes is very convenient and I'm not that smart close person.

✓ Well, I prefer to wear casual or simple clothes for one thing: I think such clothes are very convenient and I'm not that smartly dressed person.

The original sentence uses incorrect pronouns/phrasing and verb agreement. 'the one thing' is unnatural; use 'one thing:' as a transitional phrase. 'such clothes is' is wrong because 'clothes' is plural so use 'are' (subject-verb agreement). 'smart close person' is incorrect word choice and pronoun usage; the intended meaning is likely 'smartly dressed person.' Suggestion: simplify the sentence into clear clauses and ensure plural verbs agree with plural nouns.

× So for the next thing I think that's very comfortable and very fit for myself.

✓ Also, I think they are very comfortable and a good fit for me.

The phrase 'for the next thing' is unnatural; use 'also' or 'another reason.' 'that's very comfortable' wrongly uses 'that' for plural 'clothes'; use 'they are.' 'very fit for myself' is incorrect adjective/adverb and reflexive usage; use 'a good fit for me.' Suggestion: match pronouns to plural nouns and use natural collocations like 'a good fit for me.'

× Umm, that's depends on the situations, but for the most of the time I prefer to wear comfortable and casual clothes because umm uh, such clothes is is just uh, making me relaxed in my daily life.

✓ Umm, that depends on the situation, but most of the time I prefer to wear comfortable and casual clothes because such clothes just make me relaxed in my daily life.

'that's depends' incorrectly uses contraction plus verb; correct is 'that depends' (no auxiliary). 'the situations' should be singular or uncountable: 'the situation' or 'situations' without 'the.' 'for the most of the time' should be 'most of the time.' 'such clothes is is' has subject-verb disagreement and duplication; 'clothes' are plural so use 'make' not 'is making.' Also prefer simple present 'make' rather than progressive 'are making.' Suggestion: remove extra words and ensure subject-verb agreement ('clothes make').

× But for some important occasions, I prefer to uh, wear smart clothes.

✓ But for some important occasions, I prefer to wear smart clothes.

This sentence mostly has filler sounds ('uh') rather than grammatical errors. Remove fillers for clarity. Pronoun usage is fine; no change needed except removing disfluencies. Suggestion: avoid filler words in formal speech.

× Yeah, I'm fond of wearing T-shirts because, you know, T-shirts will be a very simple and wearing for myself.

✓ Yeah, I'm fond of wearing T-shirts because, you know, T-shirts are very simple and comfortable for me.

'will be' is unnecessary future modal; use simple present 'are.' 'a very simple and wearing' is ungrammatical: 'wearing' is a verb/gerund not an adjective; intended adjective is 'comfortable.' Also 'for myself' is awkward; use 'for me.' Suggestion: use appropriate adjectives and correct tense: 'T-shirts are simple and comfortable for me.'

× And for example, in summer I just wear a piece of AT shirts, uh, just, uh, hung out.

✓ For example, in summer I just wear a T-shirt when I hang out.

'a piece of AT shirts' is incorrect quantifier and nonstandard phrase; use 'a T-shirt.' 'hung out' is past tense but context needs present habitual: 'hang out.' Suggestion: use correct count noun forms and present simple for habitual actions.

× And in autumn or winter I will, uh, wear T-shirts in a that's very comfortable.

✓ And in autumn or winter I will wear T-shirts because they are very comfortable.

'in a that's very comfortable' is ungrammatical. Replace with a conjunction 'because' and proper subject 'they' agreeing with 'T-shirts.' Suggestion: use clear conjunctions and correct pronouns for clarity.

× That's depend on the situations, but for the most of the time I do not spend much of the time choosing clothes.

✓ That depends on the situation, but most of the time I do not spend much time choosing clothes.

'That's depend' should be 'That depends' (subject-verb agreement). 'the situations' should be 'the situation' or simply 'situations' — 'on the situation' preferred. 'for the most of the time' -> 'most of the time.' 'much of the time' is redundant; use 'much time.' Suggestion: fix subject-verb agreement and remove redundant words.

× I just wearing dark clothes to make myself comfort, comfortable and relaxed and so that's very casual.

✓ I just wear dark clothes to make myself comfortable and relaxed, so that's very casual.

'I just wearing' is incorrect verb form; use base form 'wear' after subject. 'comfort, comfortable' wrong noun/adjective; use 'comfortable.' Redundant words removed and clause order adjusted with 'so.' Suggestion: use correct verb forms and the adjective 'comfortable.'

× But for some big events I will choose my clothes.

✓ But for some big events I will choose my clothes carefully.

Grammatically acceptable but sounds terse; add 'carefully' to clarify intention. 'I will choose my clothes' is fine present/future. Suggestion: add adverb to improve naturalness.

× Yeah, uh, I do wear different styles of clothes, especially the sports clothes or sports pants in a weekend because, you know, uh, weekends is a time for relaxed.

✓ Yeah, I do wear different styles of clothes, especially sports clothes or sports pants on weekends because weekends are a time to relax.

'in a weekend' should be 'on weekends' for habitual action. 'weekends is' wrong subject-verb agreement; use 'weekends are.' 'a time for relaxed' uses wrong form 'relaxed' (adjective) instead of verb 'to relax' or noun 'relaxation.' Suggestion: use correct preposition 'on' with days and correct verb/noun forms.

× So I just wear some sports, uh, clothes just for sports.

✓ So I just wear some sports clothes for exercising.

Repetition 'just' is redundant; 'for sports' is okay but 'for exercising' is more natural. Pronoun use fine. Suggestion: avoid repetition and choose a precise phrase.

× I'm fond of dark clothes, for example, black, blue or shade of a green, cause for the one thing that these colors are my favorite colors and it's very beautiful and very suitable for my personality and for another thing and sad, that's very good for clean.

✓ I'm fond of dark clothes, for example black, blue or shades of green, because firstly these colors are my favorites and they suit my personality, and secondly they are good for hiding dirt.

Multiple issues: 'shade of a green' should be 'shades of green' (plural and correct order). 'cause for the one thing that' is informal and ungrammatical; use 'because firstly.' 'these colors are my favorite colors' repetitive; use 'my favorites.' 'it's very beautiful' wrong pronoun 'it' for plural; use 'they are.' 'for another thing and sad' is unclear; intended 'secondly.' 'that's very good for clean' is ungrammatical; intended 'good for hiding dirt' or 'easy to keep clean.' Suggestion: use proper connective words (firstly/secondly), plural forms, and clearer expressions.