Clothing— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Be more concise and correct grammar. Start with a clear topic sentence, then give one or two specific supporting details. Avoid repetition and fix singular/plural and article errors (e.g., “a pair of shorts,” “jeans” without article).

예시: I like to wear comfortable, casual clothes. For daily use I usually choose a simple T-shirt and a pair of jeans or shorts because they are easy to move in and suit most activities.

제안: Give a clear topic sentence and then one or two concise reasons. Correct grammar (subject-verb agreement, gerund forms) and avoid redundancy. Use linking words like 'because' or 'so' effectively.

예시: I prefer casual clothes because they are more comfortable and affordable. For example, I can meet friends or go shopping in them without feeling overdressed.

제안: Reduce fillers (“umm”, “uh”), fix verb forms, and make sentences more natural and varied. Use a topic sentence then specific examples of occasions to support your answer.

예시: Yes, I love wearing T-shirts. I usually wear them for informal occasions such as meeting friends, going for coffee, or attending classes, but I avoid them for formal events.

제안: Be direct and avoid unclear phrases. Correct grammar (subject-verb agreement, verb tense) and choose clearer vocabulary: e.g., 'choosing clothes' instead of 'chilling clothes.' Give a specific time and brief reason if needed.

예시: No, I don't spend a long time choosing clothes. It usually takes me about 15 minutes because I want to look presentable but I try not to overthink it.

제안: Begin with a direct answer, then explain with concise examples. Remove fillers and correct plural forms/phrasing. Use linking words like 'however' or 'if' to clarify conditions.

예시: Not really — it depends on the occasion rather than the day. For example, I wear comfortable clothes when meeting friends, but if I have to go to work I choose smart clothing even on weekends.

제안: Start with a topic sentence, then contrast opinions clearly. Fix grammar (e.g., 'doesn't look good on me') and keep it concise. Provide a brief reason for preference.

예시: I like bright colours, especially yellow. Although I also like red, I feel yellow suits me better because it complements my skin tone, so I usually choose yellow when buying clothes.

× There is a wide range of type of clothes and fashion that I would like to try.

✓ There is a wide range of types of clothes and fashions that I would like to try.

The noun 'type' should be plural 'types' to match 'a wide range of', and 'fashion' should be plural 'fashions' to agree with 'types of clothes and fashions'. Use plural nouns after 'a wide range of'. Suggestion: say 'a wide range of types of clothes and fashions' or simply 'a wide range of clothing styles'.

× However, for daily use I prefer something comfortable like a simple T-shirt and a short or maybe a jeans so that I can wear it.

✓ However, for daily use I prefer something comfortable like a simple T-shirt and shorts or maybe jeans so that I can wear them.

Countable clothing items must match number: 'short' should be 'shorts' (plural) and 'a jeans' is incorrect; say 'jeans' without an article. Pronoun must agree in number: use 'them' for plural items. Suggestion: use 'shorts' and 'jeans' and match the pronoun to plural.

× I would definitely prefer casual clothes because it is more comfortable and usually more affordable, and I can go out and meeting with my friends and go on almost any occasion with that casual clothes without feeling uncomfortable.

✓ I would definitely prefer casual clothes because they are more comfortable and usually more affordable, and I can go out and meet my friends and go to almost any occasion in those casual clothes without feeling uncomfortable.

Subject 'casual clothes' is plural so use plural verb/pronoun 'they are' (third person plural). Use base verb 'meet' after 'can' (modal + base form). Preposition and article use: say 'go to an occasion' or 'go on almost any occasion' — 'go to almost any occasion' is more natural. Use 'those casual clothes' (plural) to refer back. Suggestion: ensure subject-pronoun agreement and modal verb structure 'can + base verb'.

× I definitely love wear wearing T-shirt.

✓ I definitely love wearing T-shirts.

After 'love' you can use verb+ing: 'love wearing'. 'Wear wearing' is redundant and incorrect. Also 'T-shirt' as a countable noun in general contexts should be plural 'T-shirts'. Suggestion: use 'I love wearing T-shirts.'

× I wear for most umm like informal occasions like meeting up with friends, going for coffee or umm going to school.

✓ I wear them for most informal occasions, like meeting up with friends, going for coffee, or going to school.

The verb 'wear' needs an object ('them' referring to T-shirts). 'For most informal occasions' is the correct prepositional phrase. Also remove redundant fillers and ensure parallel structure in the list. Suggestion: include the object and use parallel gerunds.

× However for more formal occasion uh I would not choose T-shirt.

✓ However, for more formal occasions I would not choose a T-shirt.

'Occasion' should be plural 'occasions' or use 'a more formal occasion'. 'T-shirt' as a singular countable noun needs an article 'a'. Suggestion: either 'for more formal occasions I would not choose a T-shirt' or 'for a more formal occasion I would not choose a T-shirt'.

× Oh we just, uh, chilling clothes is a big part of my preparation before meeting anyone, so it usually take me around like at least 15 minutes to actually decide on what I should wear.

✓ Oh, choosing clothes is a big part of my preparation before meeting anyone, so it usually takes me at least 15 minutes to decide what I should wear.

'Chilling clothes' is incorrect; intended verb is 'choosing'. Subject-verb agreement: 'it usually takes' (singular subject) not 'take'. Remove redundant fillers ('around like') and simplify 'decide on what' to 'decide what'. Suggestion: use 'choosing clothes' and ensure verb agrees with subject.

× I would say no, it depends on the occasions, not the day.

✓ I would say no; it depends on the occasion, not the day.

'Occasions' plural is acceptable but 'depends on the occasion' (singular) is more natural when contrasting with 'the day'. Either is possible, but here singular is clearer. Suggestion: choose singular 'occasion' to match 'the day' in contrast.

× So if I'm meeting with friend, uh, it can be something comfortable and presentable.

✓ So if I'm meeting with a friend, it can be something comfortable and presentable.

'Friend' is a countable noun and needs an article: 'a friend'. Suggestion: include 'a'.

× But uh, if I'm going to work, even if it is on the weekend, of course I have to wear smart clothing and, uh, something.

✓ But if I'm going to work, even if it is on the weekend, of course I have to wear smart clothing or something smart.

The phrase 'and, uh, something' is vague; use 'or something smart' to complete the idea. Ensure parallel adjectives and clarity. Suggestion: complete the phrase with a clear adjective.

× I usually love red, however it does not too good on me.

✓ I usually love red; however, it does not look too good on me.

Use 'look' to describe appearance ('does not look too good on me'). Also include comma/semicolon for sentence flow. Suggestion: use 'look' and 'too good' order.

× Uh, yellow would actually suit me best.

✓ Yellow would actually suit me best.

Remove filler 'Uh,'. Sentence is otherwise correct. No pronoun error beyond filler. Suggestion: omit filler words in formal speaking.

× So yellow would be my go to choice when buying clothes.

✓ So yellow would be my go-to choice when buying clothes.

Add hyphens in 'go-to' for compound adjective. Otherwise correct. 'Choice' is singular and matches 'my'. Suggestion: write 'go-to' as a hyphenated adjective.