Clothing— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Be clearer and avoid unclear words/typos (e.g., "explore new CD"). Start with a direct topic sentence, then give one or two specific supporting details using linking words. Keep it under five sentences and use accurate vocabulary (e.g., "events" instead of "CD").

예시: I like wearing flattering dresses because they are quick to put on and boost my confidence. For example, when I go to parties or social events, I usually choose a floral or smart-casual dress because it makes me feel attractive and relaxed when meeting new people.

제안: Correct pronunciation/word choice and be concise. Begin with a clear statement of preference, then add one supporting reason using a linking word. Replace unclear phrases like "Comfortable Casios" with "comfortable, casual clothes."

예시: I prefer comfortable, casual clothes because they are easy to put on and comfortable all day. For example, I often wear them when I go shopping or meet friends since they are versatile and practical.

제안: Provide a clearer reason and fix odd phrasing. Start with a direct answer, then explain briefly with a logical connector. Avoid confusing phrases like "Smarter Slow."

예시: Actually, I don't usually wear T-shirts because I prefer smarter outfits that make me feel more confident. For example, I tend to choose blouses or dresses for social events and work because they look more polished.

제안: Fix vocabulary errors and be specific. Start with a direct answer, then give 1–2 concrete examples using linking words. Replace unclear words like "resent" and "grosses" with "present" and "colors" or "outfits."

예시: Yes, I often spend quite a bit of time choosing clothes because it depends on my mood and how I want to present myself. For example, if I want to look professional I choose smart, neutral-colored outfits, but if I feel relaxed I pick casual items such as a simple shirt and jeans.

제안: Reduce hesitation and be precise. Give a clear topic sentence then one supporting contrast using a linking word like "whereas." Avoid filler words (uh) and unclear phrases like "master outfits."

예시: Yes, I wear different styles on weekdays and weekends. For instance, I usually wear casual, comfortable clothes for work, whereas at the weekend I dress up more when I go out with friends to cafes or take photos.

제안: Use correct words and full sentences, avoid repetition. Start with a clear statement about favorite colours, then give one specific reason and an example. Replace odd phrases like "pink glasses" with "pink clothes" and remove unclear fragments.

예시: I like wearing pink clothes because they make me feel cheerful and confident. For example, when I wear a pink dress to a party I receive compliments and feel more outgoing, so pink always brightens my mood.

× I love wearing flattering dresses because they are quick to put on and always make me feel confident.

✓ I love wearing flattering dresses because they are quick to put on and always make me feel confident.

No grammatical change needed; sentence correctly uses the present participle 'wearing' to describe a general preference and the verbs agree with the plural noun 'dresses'.

× For example, when I go to parties or explore new CD, a floral or smart casual dress helps me feel more attractive and relaxed when meeting new people.

✓ For example, when I go to parties or explore new clubs, a floral or smart-casual dress helps me feel more attractive and relaxed when meeting new people.

The original uses 'CD' which is likely a wrong word; 'clubs' fits context. Also 'smart casual' used as a compound adjective before a noun should be hyphenated as 'smart-casual'. Use of 'a floral or smart-casual dress' is correct for singular dress choice. Suggestion: choose correct noun matching context and hyphenate compound adjectives before nouns.

× I refer Comfortable Casios because they are easy to put on and feel good during the day.

✓ I prefer comfortable clothes because they are easy to put on and feel good during the day.

'Refer' is incorrect verb choice; 'prefer' expresses preference. 'Casios' is incorrect; likely 'clothes' is intended. Pronoun 'they' correctly refers to 'clothes'. Suggestion: use 'prefer' for preferences and correct noun 'clothes'.

× They are also very versatile.

✓ They are also very versatile.

Sentence is correct; 'they' correctly refers to 'clothes' and 'versatile' is appropriate. No change necessary.

× I can wear them at home when I go shopping or when I meet friends.

✓ I can wear them at home, when I go shopping, or when I meet friends.

No major grammar error; added commas improve clarity when listing occasions. 'Them' correctly refers to 'clothes'.

× Actually, I don't usually wear T-shirts.

✓ Actually, I don't usually wear T-shirts.

Sentence is grammatically correct: 'do not' with 'I' is appropriate for habitual action. No change required.

× I refer Smarter Slow because they make me feel more confident and I look more attractive in public, especially when I go to social events or work.

✓ I prefer smarter clothes because they make me feel more confident and I look more attractive in public, especially when I go to social events or work.

'Refer' should be 'prefer'. 'Smarter Slow' is unclear; likely 'smarter clothes' is intended. 'They' correctly refers to 'clothes'. Suggestion: choose correct adjective 'smarter' and noun 'clothes'.

× Yes, I often spend quite a bit of time choosing clothes because it depends on my mood and how I want to resent myself that day.

✓ Yes, I often spend quite a bit of time choosing clothes because it depends on my mood and how I want to present myself that day.

The verb 'resent' is incorrect; context requires 'present' meaning 'show myself'. 'Depends' correctly in present tense. Suggestion: use 'present' for showing appearance.

× For example, if I want to look professional, I pick smart neutral grosses, but if I am feeling relaxed, I choose something more casual, such as AT shirt.

✓ For example, if I want to look professional, I pick smart neutral clothes, but if I am feeling relaxed, I choose something more casual, such as a T-shirt.

'grosses' and 'AT' are incorrect words; likely 'clothes' and 'T-shirt' intended. Use 'neutral' with 'smart' as adjectives; include article 'a' before 'T-shirt'. Suggestion: use common clothing vocabulary and include articles where needed.

× Yes, I refer uh different style on weekends and working day.

✓ Yes, I have a different style on weekends and weekdays.

'refer uh' is incorrect; 'have' expresses possession of a style. 'Working day' should be 'weekday' or 'weekdays' to contrast with weekends. Remove filler 'uh'. Suggestion: use 'have a different style' and 'weekdays'.

× Uh, for working days I uh, usually wear casual and comfortable clothes for work, but at weekend I refers master outfits for going out with my friends.

✓ For weekdays I usually wear casual and comfortable clothes for work, but on weekends I choose smarter outfits for going out with my friends.

Replace 'working days' with 'weekdays' and remove fillers. 'At weekend' should be 'on weekends'. 'Refers' is incorrect; 'choose' fits meaning. 'Master outfits' is wrong; likely 'smarter outfits'. Suggestion: use correct prepositions 'on weekends' and verbs like 'choose'.

× We can go to a coffee and take photo together.

✓ We can go to a café and take photos together.

'Go to a coffee' is incorrect collocation; 'go to a café' is natural. Use plural 'photos' when taking pictures together. Suggestion: use correct nouns and pluralize where appropriate.

× What colour clothes do you like?

✓ What colour clothes do you like?

Question is correct; no change needed.

× I like wearing pink glasses because they make me feel more cheerful and confident.

✓ I like wearing pink clothes because they make me feel more cheerful and confident.

'Pink glasses' implies eyewear; likely intended 'pink clothes' or 'pink dresses'. Ensure the noun matches intended meaning. 'They' correctly refers to 'clothes'.

× For example, when I wear a pink dress to a party, I feel more going out and people often compliment my style so I really into this and the pink outfits always make me feel just.

✓ For example, when I wear a pink dress to a party, I feel more confident and people often compliment my style, so I really like it and pink outfits always make me feel happy.

Multiple issues: 'feel more going out' is ungrammatical; 'feel more confident' fits. 'I really into this' should be 'I really like it'. 'Make me feel just' is incorrect; 'happy' or 'good' works. Suggestion: use clear verbs ('feel', 'like') and appropriate adjectives to express emotions.

× It's very cute and I want to buy it.

✓ It's very cute and I want to buy it.

Sentence is grammatically correct; no change needed.