Clothing— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Be clearer and more concise. Start with a topic sentence, then add 1–2 supporting details using correct vocabulary and linking words. Avoid unclear phrases (e.g. “go culturally”, “outdoor eat”) and grammar mistakes. Use specific examples of activities and correct comparisons.

예시: I usually wear T-shirts and jeans because they are comfortable and suit my lifestyle. For example, I often go hiking or visit markets, so casual clothes are practical and much cheaper than formal outfits.

제안: Reduce hesitations and give a clear topic sentence. Use linking words (however, when, for example) to explain conditions. Correct grammar (e.g. 'both types', 'depending on'). Be specific about occasions when you wear smart clothes.

예시: I prefer both, depending on the occasion. For example, I wear casual clothes most days, but for weddings or festivals I choose smart clothes to look more respectful.

제안: Keep sentences short and accurate. Use correct collocations (e.g. 'go well with jeans or shorts') and avoid vague words like 'sweet' here. Provide one clear reason and one supporting example.

예시: Yes, I like T-shirts because they are very comfortable and easy to wear. They also go well with jeans or shorts when I hang out with friends.

제안: Organize your answer: state frequency, give reasons with specific vocabulary (e.g. 'wide variety', 'pricey', 'poor quality') and use linking words. Correct grammar and remove filler words. Mention what you do when confused (compare prices, read labels).

예시: Sometimes I spend a long time choosing clothes, especially at markets. There is a wide variety and some items are expensive or low quality, so I compare prices and check the material before I buy.

제안: Answer directly and briefly, then give a clear reason. Avoid repetition and unclear phrases like 'exchange'. Use linking words (because, so) and correct tense/word choice.

예시: No, I usually wear the same casual clothes on weekdays and weekends because I stay at home most of the time. If I go out for a special event, I would change into smarter clothes.

제안: Give a clear topic sentence and one specific reason with correct grammar. Avoid comparing 'clean' to white in a confusing way; instead say 'less likely to show stains'. Add a short example of when you choose black.

예시: I prefer black clothes because they look smart and professional and don't show stains easily. For example, I wear a black shirt for interviews or formal meetings.

× I prefer wearing T-shirt and jeans because they are comfortable and easy to put on.

✓ I prefer wearing T-shirts and jeans because they are comfortable and easy to put on.

Use plural for countable nouns when speaking generally. 'T-shirt' should be 'T-shirts' to match plural 'jeans' and refer to the general category.

× I often go culturally or do outdoor activities, so this kind of outdoor eat is practical and inexpensive compared with more formal outfits.

✓ I often take part in cultural or outdoor activities, so this kind of outfit is practical and inexpensive compared with more formal clothes.

Words were misused: 'go culturally' is incorrect; use 'take part in cultural activities.' 'eat' is wrong word; use 'outfit' or 'clothes.' 'Clothes' or 'outfit' fits context and keeps meaning clear.

× MMM, uh, I prefer to wear both type of clothes, comfortable and casual clothes.

✓ MMM, uh, I prefer to wear both types of clothes: comfortable and smart clothes.

Use 'both types' (plural) when referring to two categories. Also 'casual' vs 'smart' choice adjusted for clarity; keep parallel structure.

× Uh, looking at my situation, where I'm going and what I'm doing.

✓ I decide depending on the situation, where I'm going and what I'm doing.

The original is a sentence fragment. It needs a main verb to be a complete sentence; 'I decide depending on...' completes the thought.

× And sometimes I'm wearing comfortable clothes and for occasions, festivals, I like to wear casual clothes or smart clothes.

✓ Sometimes I wear comfortable clothes, and for special occasions or festivals I like to wear smart clothes.

Use simple present 'I wear' for habitual actions instead of present continuous 'I'm wearing.' Also streamline phrasing and avoid repetition.

× Yes, I really prefer wearing T-shirts because it is quite comfortable compared to other clothes and it is easy to put on in and it is also sweet with jeans, escort and pants.

✓ Yes, I really prefer wearing T-shirts because they are quite comfortable compared to other clothes, they are easy to put on, and they look good with jeans, skirts and pants.

Plural pronoun agreement: 'T-shirts' take 'they.' Remove extra 'in.' 'Sweet' is wrong adjective; use 'look good' or 'go well with.' 'Escort' is incorrect word; likely intended 'skirt'.

× Uh, yes, sometimes I spend a lot of time choosing clothes in the market because I looks variety of clothes and that is quite expensive chips and some clothes are more, uh, preacher than others.

✓ Yes, sometimes I spend a lot of time choosing clothes in the market because I see a variety of clothes; some are quite cheap and others are more expensive.

Subject-verb agreement: 'I looks' should be 'I see.' 'Expensive chips' reversed and wrong; use 'quite cheap' or 'more expensive.' 'Preacher' is wrong word; likely 'pricier' meaning more expensive.

× And it is uh, make me so, umm, confusion with so like buy.

✓ And it makes me confused about what to buy.

Original is ungrammatical and wordy. Use 'makes me confused' or 'confuses me' and a clear object 'about what to buy.'

× No, I don't wear different styles of clothes on weekdays and weekends because, uh, I always stay at my home, uh, for weekdays and weekends because I don't have to go anywhere because I don't work.

✓ No, I don't wear different styles of clothes on weekdays and weekends because I usually stay at home on both weekdays and weekends since I don't work.

Avoid repetitive 'because' clauses and correct preposition: 'at my home' -> 'at home.' Streamline for natural English.

× I always stay at home and if I go outside, I'll definitely exchange.

✓ I always stay at home, and if I go out, I'll definitely change my clothes.

'Go outside' is fine but 'exchange' is incorrect verb here. Use 'change (my clothes)' to convey switching outfits.

× I usually wear different colors of clothes, but I prefer to wear black clothes because it is, uh, smart and professional looks.

✓ I usually wear different colors, but I prefer black because it looks smart and professional.

Agree pronoun and verb: 'black clothes' -> 'black' is fine; use 'it looks' or 'they look' depending. 'Looks' should apply to 'black' as a color or 'black clothes' using 'they look.' Streamline phrase.

× It is also clean rather than wearing white.

✓ It also stays cleaner than white (clothes do).

Original sentence is awkward. Use 'stays cleaner' or 'shows less dirt than white clothes' to express the idea that black clothes appear cleaner than white ones.