Clothing— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Cần trả lời trực tiếp hơn, rõ ràng hơn và tránh lỗi ngữ pháp. Nên mở đầu bằng một câu chủ đề ngắn gọn, sau đó đưa chi tiết cụ thể (vật dụng, lý do) và kết bằng câu về ngoại lệ (công việc). Tránh câu mơ hồ như “show how” và dùng cấu trúc ngữ pháp đúng (ví dụ: “In my point of view” → “In my opinion”). Giữ tổng số không quá 4-5 câu.

예시: In my opinion, I usually prefer casual clothes like T-shirts, short skirts and loose shirts because they are comfortable and suit my personal style. For example, I often choose a soft cotton T-shirt and a denim skirt when I go out with friends. However, at work I usually wear more formal outfits, such as blouses and tailored skirts, to appear professional.

제안: Câu trả lời cần rõ ràng, mạch lạc và sửa lỗi ngữ pháp. Tránh thông tin không liên quan hoặc mơ hồ (“uniformed alley”, “child shirts”). Nên nêu quan điểm trực tiếp, sau đó giải thích với một ví dụ cụ thể liên quan đến dịp công việc và dịp thư giãn. Dùng liên từ như “because” hoặc “for example” để mạch lạc.

예시: It depends on the occasion. For example, at work I prefer to wear smart, professional clothes like a blouse and tailored trousers because they show that I am responsible. In contrast, at the weekend I choose comfortable casual clothes, such as a T-shirt and jeans, for relaxation.

제안: Cần trả lời ngắn, đúng ngữ pháp và tránh cụm từ lộn xộn. Nên bắt đầu bằng câu chủ đề (Yes/No + lý do), sau đó đưa ví dụ cụ thể về tần suất hoặc tình huống mặc. Tránh lỗi danh từ số ít/đối số (T-shirt are → T-shirts are) và từ không rõ nghĩa (“AT shirt”, “we shopped”).

예시: Yes, absolutely. T-shirts make up most of my wardrobe because they are versatile and comfortable. For example, I often wear a cotton T-shirt with a skirt or jeans whenever I go out for casual activities.

제안: Nên trả lời trực tiếp về thời gian dành cho việc chọn quần áo, dùng cấu trúc rõ ràng và sửa lỗi như “free one habit” và “problematics”. Nêu lý do cụ thể (ví dụ: thích mua sắm online, tiêu tốn tiền) và đề xuất giải pháp nếu muốn. Giữ ngôn ngữ mạch lạc với liên từ như “because” và “however”.

예시: Yes, I often spend a fair amount of time choosing clothes because I enjoy online shopping in my free time. However, I have noticed it can be a problem when I buy too many items without thinking, so now I try to make a shopping list before I buy.

제안: Cần trả lời có cấu trúc: nêu sự khác biệt rõ ràng giữa ngày trong tuần và cuối tuần. Sửa lỗi từ vựng/diễn đạt (“our yard”, câu không hoàn chỉnh). Nêu ví dụ cụ thể (ví dụ: uniform at school, casual clothes at weekend) và kết luận ngắn. Tránh để câu dang dở.

예시: Yes. On weekdays I wear my school uniform or formal clothes because I work at a primary school. For example, I usually wear a blouse and trousers during lessons. On weekends I switch to casual outfits like jeans and T-shirts for comfort and relaxation.

제안: Cần trả lời trực tiếp, tránh lặp ý và hoàn thiện câu giải thích. Dùng cấu trúc: chủ đề → lý do cụ thể → ví dụ. Sửa ngữ pháp (“pink show” → “pink shows”) và tránh kết thúc câu dang dở. Có thể nêu một tình huống cụ thể khi mặc màu hồng.

예시: My favourite colour is pink because it makes me feel cheerful and optimistic. For example, I like wearing a light pink blouse when I want to feel happy and confident during social events.

× In my points of view, I like to wear some casual clothes such as T-shirt, short skirt and shirt on.

✓ In my point of view, I like to wear casual clothes such as T-shirts, short skirts, and shirts.

'In my points of view' is incorrect; use 'In my point of view' or 'In my opinion'. 'Some' is unnecessary before plural clothing categories. Countable clothing items require plural forms (T-shirts, short skirts, shirts). The preposition 'on' is unnecessary after listing clothes. Combine items with commas and use 'and' before the last item.

× They are quite comfortable and they fit to my style.

✓ They are quite comfortable and they fit my style.

The verb 'fit' does not take the preposition 'to' in this context; say 'fit my style' rather than 'fit to my style'.

× However, at work I need to wear some formal clothing to show how.

✓ However, at work I need to wear formal clothing to look professional.

The phrase 'to show how' is incomplete and unclear. Use a full phrase that expresses the intended meaning, such as 'to look professional' or 'to show respect'. Also 'some' is unnecessary before 'formal clothing'.

× I think it's depend on the specific occasion.

✓ I think it depends on the specific occasion.

Subject-verb agreement with 'it' requires the third person singular form 'depends', not 'depend'.

× For example when I'm at work I need to wear formal clothes like uniformed alley or T-shirt and child shirts as well to showed my responsibility to my child.

✓ For example, when I'm at work I need to wear formal clothes such as a uniform to show my responsibility to my students.

Original sentence contains unclear phrases ('uniformed alley', 'child shirts') and mixes tenses. Use 'such as' for examples and a clear noun ('a uniform'). 'Showed' is past tense but sentence requires infinitive 'to show'. Also 'my child' seems wrong for a teacher; 'my students' fits context. Adjust vocabulary to be clear and consistent.

× Sure it's 100% yes and you know T-shirt are majority items in my wardrobe and I wear AT shirt and short we shopped or short skirt anytime and anywhere when I'm free outside.

✓ Sure, it's 100% yes; T-shirts are the majority of items in my wardrobe and I wear a T-shirt and shorts or a short skirt anytime and anywhere when I'm free.

Use plural 'T-shirts' and 'are' for subject-verb agreement. 'Majority items' should be 'the majority of items'. 'AT shirt and short we shopped' is unclear; replace with 'a T-shirt and shorts'. Use articles where needed ('a T-shirt').

× As you know, clothes shopping in my free one habit and I like to shop online when I'm when I have free times.

✓ As you know, clothes shopping is one of my hobbies and I like to shop online when I have free time.

Original word order is incorrect. Use 'is one of my hobbies' to express habit. 'free times' should be 'free time' (uncountable) and remove duplicate 'when I'm when'.

× However, day by day, this is a problematics if I spend a lot of money without considering.

✓ However, day by day this becomes a problem if I spend a lot of money without thinking carefully.

'This is a problematics' is ungrammatical; use 'this becomes a problem' or 'this is problematic'. 'Without considering' needs an object or adverb—use 'without thinking carefully' or 'without considering the consequences'.

× At weekdays from Monday to Friday, I spend most of the time working at the primary school and I always wear our yard and in the morning and shirts with pants in the afternoon.

✓ On weekdays from Monday to Friday, I spend most of the time working at the primary school and I always wear a uniform in the morning and a shirt with pants in the afternoon.

Use 'On weekdays' not 'At weekdays'. 'Wear our yard' is incorrect; likely 'a uniform'. Maintain parallel structure: 'in the morning' and 'in the afternoon'. Include articles ('a uniform', 'a shirt').

× Moreover at the weekends.

✓ Moreover, on the weekends I wear more casual clothes.

Original is a sentence fragment lacking a verb. Provide a complete sentence that continues the idea, e.g., 'Moreover, on the weekends I wear more casual clothes.'

× Pink is my typical favorite color and do you know why I like pink?

✓ Pink is my favorite color; do you know why I like pink?

'Typical favorite color' is awkward; simply use 'favorite color'. No preposition issue here beyond wording; streamline the phrase.

× The reason why is that pink show how beautiful my life is and I hope my life will be colorful and happy with pink because pink means.

✓ The reason is that pink shows how beautiful my life is, and I hope my life will be colorful and happy because of pink's meaning.

'The reason why is that' is wordy; 'The reason is that' is better. 'Pink show' needs third person singular 'shows'. Sentence 'because pink means' is incomplete—complete the idea (e.g., 'because of pink's meaning' or 'because pink represents joy and happiness').