Clothing— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Be more specific and correct grammar; start with a clear topic sentence and add one or two specific supporting details using a linking word. Avoid vague phrasing and keep it under five sentences.

예시: I usually wear casual clothes, especially shorts and light dresses, because they are comfortable. For example, I often choose denim shorts and cotton dresses when the weather is warm, as they keep me cool and allow me to move easily.

제안: Answer directly then add a brief reason or example using a linking word to make the response more informative. Keep it concise and natural.

예시: I prefer comfortable, casual clothes because I find them more practical for my daily routine. For instance, I usually wear T-shirts and jeans at home or when running errands since they are easy to move in.

제안: Give a fuller reply: confirm, then add a brief reason or example. Use correct wording (say 'T-shirts' instead of 'these shirts') and one linking word for coherence.

예시: Yes, I really like wearing T-shirts because they are comfortable and versatile. For example, I often pair plain T-shirts with jeans for a simple, everyday outfit.

제안: Provide a clearer explanation and specific detail about how and why you spend time choosing clothes. Use linking words (because, so) and avoid repeating words.

예시: Yes, I do spend a lot of time choosing clothes because I want to make sure they fit well. For example, I usually try on several tops and bottoms so I feel comfortable and confident before I buy them.

제안: Organise the answer: state the main contrast, then give two specific examples for weekdays and weekends. Use linking words (whereas, while) and correct grammar; avoid fillers and repetition.

예시: Yes, I wear different styles on weekdays and weekends. For example, on weekdays I wear smart clothes such as my scrub suit for work, whereas on weekends I prefer comfortable outfits like shorts and T-shirts; sometimes I wear a casual dress for informal meetings.

제안: State your preference clearly, then give specific examples and a short reason. Remove repetitions and keep it concise.

예시: I usually prefer black and soft pastel colours, such as cream and pale blue, because they are easy to match and look neat. For example, I often choose a black top with light-coloured trousers for a balanced outfit.

× I prefer wearing casual and comfortable clothes.

✓ I prefer to wear casual and comfortable clothes.

Both 'prefer + to-infinitive' and 'prefer + -ing' are possible, but in this context with general preference either is acceptable. However, to match the direct question 'Do you prefer to wear...?', using 'prefer to wear' keeps parallel structure. Use 'prefer to wear' for clarity and formality.

× Yes, I really love wearing these shirts.

✓ Yes, I really love wearing T-shirts.

The examiner asked about T-shirts; 'these shirts' is vague and deictic. Use the noun 'T-shirts' to clearly reference the item discussed. This avoids ambiguous pronoun/demonstrative reference.

× Yes, I spend a lot of time trying on clothes to make me feel a bit comfortable.

✓ Yes, I spend a lot of time trying on clothes to help me feel more comfortable.

The phrase 'to make me feel' is grammatically possible but a bit awkward here. Using 'to help me feel' or 'to feel' is more natural. Also 'a bit comfortable' is odd; 'more comfortable' is clearer when comparing states.

× Yes. Well on weekdays I wear smart clothes like my scrub suits when I go to work and sometimes when it's my day off, our weekend, I wear my the clothes that makes me feel comfortable, like shorts, T-shirts, umm. Sometimes I wear dress on casual casual meetings.

✓ Yes. On weekdays I wear smart clothes like my scrub suit when I go to work, and sometimes on my days off or at the weekend I wear clothes that make me feel comfortable, like shorts and T-shirts. Sometimes I wear a dress to casual meetings.

Multiple issues: 'scrub suits' should be singular if referring to one uniform ('scrub suit') or keep plural consistently; I changed to singular. 'my the clothes' is ungrammatical; remove extra article. 'that makes' should be 'that make' because 'clothes' is plural (subject-verb agreement). 'my day off, our weekend' is confused; 'my days off' or 'at the weekend' clarifies. 'Sometimes I wear dress' needs an article 'a dress' and 'to casual meetings' is correct preposition. Also removed repeated 'casual' and tidied punctuation for clarity.

× I like to wear black and sometimes cream and the the more pastel side of colors.

✓ I like to wear black and sometimes cream and other pastel colors.

'the the more pastel side of colors' is awkward and ungrammatical. Use 'other pastel colors' or 'more pastel colors' to convey preference. Remove the duplicated 'the' and simplify the adjective phrase for natural English.