Clothing— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Make your response more concise and correct grammatical errors. Start with a clear topic sentence, then add one or two specific supporting details using linking words. Avoid run-on sentences and check subject-verb agreement and articles (a/an/the).

예시: I usually wear casual clothes such as a light T-shirt and jeans to university because they are comfortable for long classes. However, for work or internships I prefer to wear a suit and sometimes an overcoat, since they look professional and create a good impression.

제안: Be more concise and avoid repeating the same idea. Use linking words (because, so, therefore) correctly, correct grammar (long lessons, active vocabulary), and give one specific example of activity that influences your choice. Limit to 3–4 sentences.

예시: I prefer comfortable clothes to smart clothes because I am a student and have long lessons. For example, I often wear a T-shirt and jeans or sporty clothes so I can move easily between lectures and campus activities.

제안: Correct phrasing and tense, and make the answer more natural. Use one clear sentence stating your opinion and one example. Replace awkward phrases ("T-shirt casuals") with natural expressions and correct verb forms.

예시: Yes, I like wearing T-shirts because they are casual and comfortable. For example, I usually wear them for sports or when I need to walk around campus.

제안: Organize your answer: start with a direct response, then give two specific reasons. Remove hesitations and filler words. Correct vocabulary mistakes ("criteria", "comb" unclear) and sentence structure. Keep it within three sentences.

예시: Yes, I do. I enjoy picking outfits because I like both casual T-shirts and fancy dresses, so I take time to choose the best one. I also consider the price before buying, especially when clothes are expensive.

제안: Good structure and clear contrast. Improve grammar (lessons), pluralization, and use linking words for contrast (however, whereas). Add one specific example of weekend activity to make it more vivid.

예시: On weekdays I usually wear casual clothes like T-shirts and jeans because I have lessons and want to be comfortable. However, at the weekend I tend to dress up more—for example, I wear dresses and do my makeup when I go out with friends or visit my family.

제안: Be concise and avoid repetition. Use correct nouns (clothes, colors) and complete sentences. Provide one or two clear reasons why you like those colours and a brief personal example. Avoid unfinished sentences.

예시: I prefer light colours, especially pink and light blue. I find pink looks cute and flattering on me, and light blue feels fresh—so I often choose these colours when I buy clothes.

× I usually wear casual clothes, light T-shirt and jeans when I go to the university because they are comfortable for long classes and for work or internship I prefer to wear formal dress or suits, sometimes with a overcoat because it look professional and make good impression.

✓ I usually wear casual clothes, a light T-shirt and jeans when I go to the university because they are comfortable for long classes, and for work or an internship I prefer to wear formal dresses or suits, sometimes with an overcoat because they look professional and make a good impression.

Errors: inconsistent singular/plural nouns and articles. 'light T-shirt' needs an article 'a'. 'work or internship' requires 'an internship' or 'for work or an internship'. 'formal dress or suits' should be parallel: 'formal dresses or suits' (plural) or 'a formal dress or a suit'. 'a overcoat' should be 'an overcoat' (article + vowel sound). Subject-verb agreement with plural 'they' refers to 'suits' or 'dresses', so use 'look' and 'make a good impression' needs the article 'a'. Suggestion: ensure noun number matches and use appropriate articles; keep parallel structure.

× I prefer to wear comfortable clothes more than wearing smart clothes because they are more comfortable and I'm now a student.

✓ I prefer comfortable clothes to smart clothes because they are more comfortable and I'm a student now.

Errors: awkward comparative structure and adverb placement. Use 'prefer A to B' rather than 'prefer to wear A more than wearing B'. 'I'm now a student' is better as 'I'm a student now' for natural word order. Suggestion: use standard 'prefer A to B' construction and place 'now' at end or after verb for clarity.

× I usually go to the university and have a long lessons.

✓ I usually go to the university and have long lessons.

Errors: article with plural noun. 'a long lessons' mixes singular article 'a' with plural 'lessons'. Remove the article or change to singular: 'a long lesson'. Suggestion: ensure articles match noun number.

× So I think wearing casual clothes such as T-shirt and jeans, awesome sport wearing will make me comfortable to have activity during lessons and also is suitable for me.

✓ So I think wearing casual clothes such as T-shirts and jeans, or sporty outfits, will make me comfortable when doing activities during lessons and are also suitable for me.

Errors: word choice and agreement. 'awesome sport wearing' is ungrammatical; use 'sporty outfits' or 'sportswear'. 'T-shirt' should be plural 'T-shirts' to match general statement. 'make me comfortable to have activity' should be 'comfortable when doing activities'; and 'also is suitable for me' must agree with plural subject: 'are also suitable for me'. Suggestion: use natural collocations like 'sportswear' or 'sporty outfits' and ensure subject-verb agreement.

× Yes, I do like wearing T-shirts because T-shirt casuals, but they still look good and they are really comfortable.

✓ Yes, I do like wearing T-shirts because T-shirts are casual, but they still look good and are really comfortable.

Errors: missing verb and plural consistency. 'T-shirt casuals' lacks verb; rephrase to 'T-shirts are casual'. Keep plural 'T-shirts' consistent. Suggestion: include the verb 'are' and use consistent plural forms.

× And when I was having some sport activities or I need to go around the university, I will usually wear T-shirts because they are suitable for my activity.

✓ And when I have some sports activities or need to go around the university, I usually wear T-shirts because they are suitable for my activities.

Errors: inconsistent tense and noun forms. 'was having' implies past but context is habitual present — use present simple 'have'. 'sport activities' -> 'sports activities'. 'I will usually wear' should be 'I usually wear' for habitual actions. 'my activity' -> 'my activities' plural. Suggestion: use present simple for habitual routines and correct noun forms.

× Yes, I spend a lot of time choosing my clothes.

✓ Yes, I spend a lot of time choosing my clothes.

No grammatical correction needed; sentence is correct. Explanation: This is a present simple habitual statement, appropriate for the context.

× I love to wear T-shirts, also I love to wear dresses and many dresses for girls are really fancy, so I use a a lot of time to select them, and also sometimes the price is also a car, uh, criteria for me to choose my comb, so I will consider them a lot.

✓ I love to wear T-shirts, and I also like dresses; many dresses for girls are really fancy, so I spend a lot of time selecting them, and sometimes the price is also a criterion for me when choosing clothes, so I consider it carefully.

Errors: plural/singular and word choice. 'use a a lot of time' should be 'spend a lot of time'. 'price is also a car, uh, criteria' incorrect — use 'price is also a criterion'. 'choose my comb' unclear — likely 'choose my clothes'. Maintain consistency: 'consider them a lot' -> 'consider it carefully' or 'consider them carefully'. Suggestion: use appropriate collocates (spend time, criterion) and correct singular/plural forms.

× When I get into the university on weekdays, I usually wear comfortable and casual clothes like T-shirts and jeans because I have lesson and want to feel relaxed.

✓ When I go to the university on weekdays, I usually wear comfortable and casual clothes like T-shirts and jeans because I have lessons and want to feel relaxed.

Errors: verb choice and singular/plural. 'get into the university' is unnatural; use 'go to the university'. 'have lesson' should be 'have lessons' or 'have a lesson'. Suggestion: choose natural verbs for routines and match noun number.

× But at the weekend I tend to dress up more because I wear dresses and do the makeup when I hang out with my friends and my family.

✓ But at the weekend I tend to dress up more because I wear dresses and do my makeup when I hang out with my friends and family.

Errors: article/pronoun. 'do the makeup' should be 'do my makeup'. 'my friends and my family' -> 'my friends and family' is more natural. Suggestion: use possessive pronoun for personal actions and simplify noun phrases.

× I especially like the cloth with pink and blue colors.

✓ I especially like clothes in pink and blue colors.

Errors: 'cloth' (singular material) should be 'clothes' for garments. Use 'in' for color: 'clothes in pink and blue colors' or simpler 'pink and blue clothes'. Suggestion: use 'clothes' when referring to garments and prefer 'pink and blue'.

× I like clothes with light colors and especially for pink because I think they look cute and also look fancy and they suit me a lot.

✓ I like clothes in light colors, especially pink, because I think they look cute and fancy and suit me well.

Errors: preposition and redundancy. 'with light colors' -> 'in light colors'. 'especially for pink' -> 'especially pink'. 'look cute and also look fancy' is redundant; combine as 'look cute and fancy'. 'suit me a lot' -> 'suit me well'. Suggestion: use concise phrasing and correct prepositions for color descriptions.

× Also I've been wearing pink clothes make my skin look white.

✓ Also, wearing pink clothes makes my skin look fairer.

Errors: missing connector and subject-verb agreement. Original missing linking word: 'I've been wearing pink clothes make...' should be 'Wearing pink clothes makes...' or 'I've found that wearing pink clothes makes...'. Use 'makes' to agree with singular gerund subject. 'white' is awkward culturally; 'fairer' is a more natural comparative. Suggestion: ensure gerund subjects take singular verbs and use appropriate adjectives.

× I make my make me look clean.

✓ They make me look neat.

Errors: repetition and word choice. 'I make my make me look clean' is ungrammatical and repetitive. Replace with 'They make me look neat' or 'They make me look clean and neat'. Suggestion: simplify to clear subject 'they' (the clothes) and choose natural adjectives like 'neat'.

× So I do love to wear clothes with blue, light blue or.

✓ So I do love to wear clothes in blue or light blue.

Errors: incomplete sentence and awkward word order. Original ends abruptly with 'or.' Complete the list: 'blue or light blue'. Suggestion: ensure lists are complete and use 'in' for colors.