Clothing— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Be clearer, correct grammar and avoid fragments. Start with a direct topic sentence, then add one or two specific supporting details using linking words. Fix errors like 'they require little men' and keep it within 3–4 sentences.

예시: I prefer casual clothes because they are comfortable and practical for everyday life. For example, I usually wear jeans and loose T-shirts at home because they are breathable and allow me to move easily. Overall, casual clothes are low-maintenance and suit my daily routines.

제안: Organize the answer into a clear topic sentence and supporting reasons. Correct word choice and grammar (e.g., 'prefer', 'feel lighter'). Use linking words like 'because' and 'for example' and limit to 2–3 sentences.

예시: I prefer comfortable, casual clothes rather than smart clothes because they are easier to wear and maintain. For example, casual outfits feel lighter and more durable for everyday activities, so I can move and relax comfortably.

제안: Make the first sentence a clear direct response, correct awkward phrases ('for no daily routine'), and omit filler like 'OK.' Add a brief specific example and link ideas with 'and' or 'also'.

예시: Yes, I like wearing T-shirts because they are comfortable and practical for my daily routine. I often get compliments when I wear them, which makes me feel more confident, especially when I meet friends.

제안: Start with a direct answer (Yes/No), then give concise reasons and specific examples. Correct vocabulary (e.g., 'I am a picky person', 'trendy items', 'sometimes') and use linking words like 'because' and 'also'.

예시: Yes, I spend quite a lot of time choosing clothes because I want items that fit well and match my style. I also sometimes buy trendy items if they are affordable and readily available.

제안: Respond directly and correct collocations ('workaholic', 'on weekdays', 'formal clothes'). Use clear contrast with linking words like 'however' or 'on weekends', and give one clear example of weekday vs weekend outfit.

예시: Yes. Because I am somewhat of a workaholic, I dress more formally on weekdays—for example, a white shirt, black trousers and a simple blazer. On weekends, however, I usually wear casual T-shirts and jeans because they are more comfortable.

제안: Give a direct topic sentence, correct vocabulary ('pastel shades', 'feel'), and be specific about reasons. Use linking words and correct singular/plural and verb agreement.

예시: I prefer light colours, especially white and pastel shades, because they make me feel relaxed and more confident. For example, I often wear a white shirt to meetings because it looks fresh and professional.

× I prefer wearing casual clothes because they are very comfortable and practical for everyday activities.

✓ I prefer to wear casual clothes because they are very comfortable and practical for everyday activities.

Using 'prefer' with a noun or verb can take either 'to' + base verb or the -ing form, but 'prefer to' is more natural here. Change 'wearing' to 'to wear' to match common collocation and maintain clarity.

× For instance, I usually wear jeans and loose T-shirts at my home.

✓ For instance, I usually wear jeans and loose T-shirts at home.

The phrase 'at home' does not need the possessive 'my'. 'At my home' is grammatical but less natural in this context; 'at home' is the common collocation.

× They are a breathable and easy to move in, and they require little men.

✓ They are breathable and easy to move in, and they require little maintenance.

'A breathable' is incorrect because 'breathable' is an adjective modifying a plural noun; remove the article 'a'. 'Easy to move in' is fine but should not follow an extra article. 'Require little men' is nonsensical; probably intended 'require little maintenance' meaning they need little care.

× I would like to wear pref.

✓ I would prefer to wear comfortable clothes.

The fragment 'wear pref' is incomplete and ungrammatical. 'Prefer' should be followed by 'to' + verb or gerund; here 'prefer to wear' or 'would prefer to wear' plus the object 'comfortable clothes' completes the sentence.

× I would like to prep for a more comfortable and casual clothes because they are very durable and easy to wear and feel more lighter after to wear these clothes instead of smart clothes.

✓ I would like to prepare for wearing more comfortable and casual clothes because they are durable, easy to wear, and feel lighter than smart clothes.

Multiple issues: 'prep' should be 'prepare' or 'prefer'—context suggests 'prefer' or 'prepare'; corrected to 'prepare for wearing' for clarity. 'A more comfortable and casual clothes' mixes singular article with plural noun; remove 'a' and use 'comfortable and casual clothes'. 'Feel more lighter' is incorrect; use 'feel lighter' or 'much lighter'. 'After to wear these clothes' is ungrammatical; use comparative 'than smart clothes'. Consolidated into a grammatical, concise sentence.

× I like wearing T-shirts because they are comfortable and practical for no daily routine.

✓ I like wearing T-shirts because they are comfortable and practical for my daily routine.

'No daily routine' is incorrect and contradicts meaning. Use 'my daily routine' to show they are practical for everyday activities. This fixes the quantifier/determiner error.

× I also get compliments when I wear them which makes me feel confident. OK.

✓ I also get compliments when I wear them, which makes me feel confident.

Add a comma before 'which' for correct clause punctuation. Remove 'OK' which is unnecessary. Pronoun usage is fine; punctuation improves readability.

× Well I am choosing person and I take a lot of time to choose my clothes according to my choice and I want item that match my style and fit well.

✓ Well, I am a picky person and I take a lot of time to choose clothes that match my style and fit well.

'Choosing person' is unidiomatic; 'picky person' or 'choosy person' fits. Remove redundant phrases 'according to my choice' and 'I want item'; use 'clothes that match my style and fit well' for clarity and correct relative clause.

× Sometime I buy trending fees too, especially when they are easily available and affordable.

✓ Sometimes I buy trendy items too, especially when they are easily available and affordable.

Use 'Sometimes' instead of 'Sometime'. 'Trending fees' is incorrect; likely 'trendy items' or 'trending pieces'. 'Items' fits context. This fixes preposition/word choice and pluralization.

× Well, I am a workholic person, so on a weekdays I usually dress with the former clothes in my office.

✓ Well, I am a workaholic, so on weekdays I usually wear formal clothes to the office.

'Workholic' should be 'workaholic'. 'On a weekdays' mixes article and plural; use 'on weekdays'. 'Dress with the former clothes' is ungrammatical; use 'wear formal clothes to the office'.

× For example, I wear white T-shirts, black pants with simple blazer.

✓ For example, I wear white T-shirts and black pants with a simple blazer.

Add 'and' to link items in a list. Include the article 'a' before 'simple blazer'. This corrects coordination and article use.

× At a weekend I choose T-shirt which is very convenient.

✓ At the weekend I choose a T-shirt that is very convenient.

Use 'at the weekend' (British) or 'on weekends' (American). Include article 'a' before 'T-shirt'. Use 'that' for defining relative clause. This fixes article and relative pronoun usage.

× I like to wear light colors, especially white and paste in shades because they may be feeler, relaxed and more confident.

✓ I like to wear light colors, especially white and pastel shades, because they make me feel cooler, more relaxed, and more confident.

'Paste in shades' is incorrect; intended 'pastel shades'. 'May be feeler' is ungrammatical; use 'make me feel'. 'Cooler' probably intended 'cooler' not 'feeler'. Added parallel adjectives 'more relaxed, and more confident' for clarity.

× For example, I often choose a white shirts for meeting since it look fresh and professional.

✓ For example, I often choose a white shirt for meetings since it looks fresh and professional.

Mismatch of article and plural: 'a white shirts' should be 'a white shirt'. 'For meeting' should be 'for meetings' or 'for a meeting'. 'It look' should be 'it looks' to agree with singular subject.

× I feel more comfortable during this time.

✓ I feel more comfortable at that time.

If referring to the period when wearing the shirt at meetings, 'at that time' is clearer. Tense 'feel' is present and acceptable; adjusting the time expression improves clarity.