Clothing— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Be clearer and more concise. Start with a direct topic sentence (e.g., the type of clothes you like), avoid repetition and fillers, use correct vocabulary (e.g., "quick-dry clothes" not "dry feet clothes"), and give one or two specific reasons with linking words (e.g., "because" / "so"). Aim for 2–4 coherent sentences.

예시: I prefer wearing quick-dry, lightweight clothes because they are easy to wash and dry quickly. For example, I often choose polyester shirts for travel since they dry overnight, and that allows me to move comfortably while doing activities.

제안: Correct the contradiction and state your preference clearly. Use a topic sentence that answers directly (comfortable/casual or smart). Then give a reason with a linking phrase (e.g., "because" or "so"). Avoid vague pronouns and reduce hesitations.

예시: I prefer wearing comfortable and casual clothes when meeting people because they make me feel relaxed and confident. For instance, I usually wear a neat polo shirt and chinos to social events so I look presentable without feeling restricted.

제안: Resolve the contradiction (you said both yes and don't like). Answer directly, then support with one clear reason and an example. Use linking words like "especially" and avoid repeating words.

예시: Yes, I like wearing T-shirts because they are very comfortable and practical for daily activities. Especially in the Philippines’ warm climate, I often wear cotton T-shirts at home or when running errands.

제안: Give a direct answer first (yes/no) then explain with specific details. Mention planning and minimalism as reasons, and use linking words like "because" or "so" to connect ideas. Keep it to 2–3 sentences.

예시: Not really — I don't spend much time choosing clothes because I'm a minimalist and have a small wardrobe. If I plan outfits ahead for an event, I can decide quickly based on the dress code.

제안: Answer directly and contrast weekdays vs weekends with clear linking words (e.g., "during weekdays... whereas on weekends..."). Use correct vocabulary (e.g., "short-sleeve" or "quick-dry shirts") and give a short example of each.

예시: Yes. During weekdays I wear short-sleeve quick-dry shirts because I do many chores at home, whereas on weekends I dress more casually for going out, such as a cotton T-shirt and jeans for the mall.

제안: Be precise about the color and why you like it. Avoid incorrect statements (blue is not a warm color). Provide a clear reason and one example, using linking words like "because" and "for example."

예시: I like blue because it feels calming and looks refreshing in hot weather. For example, I often choose light-blue shirts during the Philippine summer because they reflect sunlight and feel cool.

× Yes, I like to use some dry feet clothes.

✓ Yes, I like to use some quick-dry clothes.

The student used 'dry feet clothes' which is incorrect word choice and word form. The intended idea is clothes that dry quickly, commonly described as 'quick-dry' (a compound adjective) modifying 'clothes'. Use the adjective form 'quick-dry' before the noun.

× They're easy to wash and easily gets, uh, dry and, and one of one of the one of the benefits is that, umm, you can move easily by wearing by wearing it.

✓ They're easy to wash and easily get dry, and one of the benefits is that you can move easily while wearing them.

The subject 'they' is plural, so the verb should be 'get' not 'gets' (subject-verb agreement). Also 'wearing by wearing it' is repetitive and uses the singular pronoun 'it' instead of 'them'. Replace with 'while wearing them' for clarity and correct pronoun number.

× I prefer wearing such uncomfortable clothes when it comes to going outside or, or like meeting other people.

✓ I prefer wearing comfortable clothes when I go out or meet other people.

The original sentence says 'uncomfortable' which contradicts context; likely a misuse. Also 'when it comes to going outside or, or like meeting other people' is awkward. Use simple present for habitual actions ('I go out', 'meet other people') and remove filler words. This aligns verb tense and usage.

× Uh, it doesn't make me feel awkward and and it gives you confidence that you need.

✓ It doesn't make me feel awkward and it gives me the confidence I need.

Pronoun reference is inconsistent: 'it gives you confidence that you need' should refer to the speaker, so use 'me' not 'you'. Also 'that you need' is better expressed as 'I need' or 'the confidence I need'.

× Yes, I don't like wearing T-shirt.

✓ Yes, I like wearing T-shirts.

The student's sentence contradicts the 'Yes' and likely intended positive preference. Additionally, 'T-shirt' as a general category should be plural 'T-shirts' when speaking generally. If the student intended dislike, then 'No, I don't like wearing T-shirts.' would be correct.

× It's very comfortable for me and and especially when I'm at the home or or I'm doing such activities either very comfortable and very practical for me, especially here in the Philippines when it's when it's very warm.

✓ They're very comfortable for me, especially when I'm at home or doing activities; they are practical here in the Philippines when it's very warm.

Pronoun number and repetition issues: refer to 'T-shirts' with 'they' or 'they are', not 'it'. Remove redundant phrases ('and and', 'or or', 'either'). Use 'at home' not 'at the home' for general state.

× You know, especially when I already planned, planned it ahead of time and I don't actually have a lot of clothes and I'm very minimalist person, so I can easily like look for clothes that I should wear.

✓ When I have planned my outfit ahead of time, I don't actually need a lot of clothes because I'm a very minimalist person, so I can easily find what to wear.

The original has tense and structure problems: 'when I already planned, planned it ahead of time' is awkward. Use present perfect or simple present ('have planned' or 'plan') for planned actions. 'I'm very minimalist person' needs the article 'a'. 'Look for clothes that I should wear' is wordy; 'find what to wear' is clearer.

× Depends on the type of event that I will attend.

✓ It depends on the type of event I will attend.

The sentence lacks an explicit subject; start with 'It depends'. Also 'that' is optional and can be omitted for conciseness.

× Yes, I do uh, during the weekdays I do wear sunshine, umm, quick dry or type of sleeve glass because I do a lot of chores and activities at home and during the weekends I tend to like go outside, umm, go to the mall, something like that.

✓ Yes. During the weekdays I wear quick-dry, short-sleeved shirts because I do a lot of chores and activities at home. On weekends I tend to go out, for example to the mall.

The original mixes incorrect words: 'sunshine' and 'type of sleeve glass' are incorrect. The intended phrase is 'short-sleeved shirts' or 'short-sleeved clothing' and 'quick-dry'. Also improve sentence flow: use 'on weekends' and avoid filler words.

× I like blue. It's not. It's another warm color and it's very refreshing, especially when you're wearing 1 during, umm, the hot season here in the Philippines.

✓ I like blue. It's a cool color and very refreshing, especially to wear during the hot season here in the Philippines.

'Blue' is typically described as a cool color, not a warm color; saying 'It's not.' is incomplete. 'You're wearing 1' is nonsensical—replace with 'to wear'. This corrects adjective usage and sentence completeness.

× Uh, it's Advi. It is advised to wear something like blue.

✓ It is advised to wear blue or light-colored clothes.

'Uh, it's Advi.' is fragmented and unclear. Use a complete passive advisory 'It is advised to...' and specify 'blue or light-colored clothes' for clarity.