Clothing— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Be concise and grammatical: start with a clear topic sentence, avoid repetition, and give one specific supporting detail. Use correct sentence forms and plurality, and keep to max 4–5 sentences. Link ideas with a simple connector.

예시: I prefer wearing minimal, neutral-coloured clothes because they reflect my personality. For example, I usually wear plain shirts and slim trousers in grey or beige. This simple style helps me feel calm and distinct without drawing too much attention.

제안: Answer directly (choose one) and avoid repetition. Provide a reason and one specific example. Correct grammar (subject-verb agreement) and clearer linking words like 'because' or 'so'.

예시: I prefer comfortable, casual clothes because they make me feel at ease and suit my everyday lifestyle. For instance, I often wear a cotton T-shirt and chinos when I meet friends or run errands.

제안: Good direct answer. Improve grammar (singular/plural, articles) and be more precise when explaining reasons. Replace vague phrases like 'reduce the sweats' with clearer expressions.

예시: Yes, I like wearing T-shirts because they are comfortable and breathable. For example, in summer I prefer cotton T-shirts because they keep me cool and absorb sweat well.

제안: Be concise and avoid repeating the same idea. Use correct tense and clearer reasons: explain why you spend time choosing clothes (e.g., fit, style). Give one specific scenario.

예시: Yes, I do spend a lot of time choosing clothes because I care about fit and matching styles. For example, when I prepare for a party I try on several outfits to find one that looks right and feels comfortable.

제안: Make a clear contrast between weekdays and weekends with correct vocabulary. Avoid unclear words like 'manual shirts' and improve coherence using linking words such as 'whereas' or 'while'.

예시: Yes. On weekdays I usually wear smart-casual clothes for work, such as a shirt and chinos, whereas on weekends I prefer simple, relaxed outfits like a plain T-shirt and jeans for comfort.

제안: Give a clear topic sentence stating your favourite colours, then explain why with a specific reason. Correct grammar and phrasing (singular/plural, word order).

예시: I prefer neutral, light colours such as beige, grey and pale blue because they look timeless and are easy to mix. For example, a light-grey shirt pairs well with many trousers and makes dressing quicker.

× Well, I prefer minimal clothes which helps to define my personality.

✓ Well, I prefer minimal clothes which help to define my personality.

The relative pronoun 'which' refers to 'clothes' (plural), so the verb should be plural 'help' not 'helps'. Use plural verb to match plural noun (subject-verb agreement). Suggestion: change 'helps' to 'help'.

× Now which helps me to feel unique from others.

✓ This also helps me feel unique compared with others.

The original is a sentence fragment beginning with 'Now which' and lacks a clear subject and correct connector. Use a complete clause with a clear subject ('This') and correct preposition 'compared with' or 'from' replaced by 'compared with'. Remove unnecessary 'to' after 'helps' when followed by base verb. Suggestion: start sentence with 'This also helps me feel...'.

× For example I wear a simple neutral color clothes which helps me in giving.

✓ For example, I wear simple neutral-colored clothes which help to convey my style.

Errors: 'a simple neutral color clothes' mixes singular article 'a' with plural 'clothes', and 'neutral color' should be an adjective 'neutral-colored' or 'neutral-colored clothes'. 'Helps' should be 'help' for plural subject. 'in giving' is ungrammatical; use 'to convey' or 'to express'. Suggestion: remove the article, use compound adjective and a clear verb phrase like 'help to convey'.

× Yes, of course, wearing comfortable and casual clothes helps me in feeling very comfortable and defining my personality.

✓ Yes, of course, wearing comfortable, casual clothes helps me feel relaxed and express my personality.

Redundancy and incorrect use of 'in feeling' and 'defining'. After 'helps' use base verb without 'to' or 'in' (helps me feel). Use parallel structure 'relaxed and express'. Also remove duplicate 'comfortable'. Suggestion: use 'helps me feel' and pair verbs in same form.

× Be a unique and a simple person.

✓ I try to be a unique and simple person.

The original is an imperative fragment 'Be a...' that doesn't fit context. Use first-person present 'I try to be...' to match preceding statements. Also remove extra article before 'simple person'. Suggestion: use 'I try to be a unique and simple person.'

× For example, reading a neutral colours define as our personality.

✓ For example, wearing neutral colours can reflect our personality.

'Reading a neutral colours' is nonsensical; probably intended 'wearing neutral colours'. 'Define as our personality' is incorrect; use 'reflect our personality'. Also subject-verb agreement: 'colours' plural needs plural verb. Suggestion: replace with 'wearing neutral colours can reflect our personality.'

× Yes, I like to wear T-shirts because it feels more comfortable and helps me to feel relaxed.

✓ Yes, I like to wear T-shirts because they feel more comfortable and help me feel relaxed.

T-shirts is plural, so refer with 'they' and plural verbs 'feel' and 'help'. Also after 'help' use base verb 'feel' without 'to'. Suggestion: match pronoun and verbs to plural noun.

× For example, wearing T-shirts in the summer are the one of the best for the sweat because it helps to reduce the sweats.

✓ For example, wearing T-shirts in the summer is one of the best choices for dealing with sweat because they help reduce sweating.

Use singular 'is one of the best' with gerund phrase as subject. 'Are the one' is wrong. 'The sweat' and 'the sweats' are incorrect; use 'sweat' (uncountable) or 'sweating'. Match verb 'help' to plural 'they'. Suggestion: restructure: 'is one of the best choices for dealing with sweat' and 'they help reduce sweating'.

× Well, I am a shopaholic person, so I have a really unique personality in choosing clothes.

✓ Well, I am a shopaholic, so I am very particular when choosing clothes.

'Shopaholic person' is redundant; 'shopaholic' suffices. 'Have a unique personality in choosing clothes' is awkward; use 'be particular when choosing clothes' or 'am very choosy'. Maintain present simple 'am' and adjective use. Suggestion: use concise adjective phrases.

× So I spent a lot of time in choosing clothes because I'm a very choosy person.

✓ So I spend a lot of time choosing clothes because I'm very choosy.

Context is habitual present, so use present simple 'spend' not past 'spent'. Also 'in choosing' is unnecessary; use 'spend time choosing'. Suggestion: use present tense for habits.

× For example, going in party is very difficult for choosing clothes.

✓ For example, going to a party makes choosing clothes difficult.

Use 'going to a party' not 'going in party'. 'Makes choosing clothes difficult' is natural phrasing. Also add article 'a' before 'party'. Suggestion: rephrase to 'going to a party makes choosing clothes difficult.'

× Yes, I wear different styles of clothes on weekends like a very simple and a manual shirts which helps in defining my personality and on weekdays like for some parties I go to choose some stylish and casual clothes which helps to feel a social relaxation.

✓ Yes, I wear different styles on weekends, like very simple shirts that help define my personality, and on weekdays or at parties I choose stylish, casual clothes that help me feel more social and relaxed.

Many errors: 'a very simple and a manual shirts' is ungrammatical—remove articles and use 'simple shirts'. 'Manual' is wrong word; likely 'plain' or 'casual'. Relative clauses: plural 'shirts' requires 'that help' not 'helps'. 'Feel a social relaxation' is unnatural; use 'feel more social and relaxed'. Suggestion: simplify into two parallel clauses and use correct plural agreement.

× What colour clothes do you like? Well, I prefer the clothes which is quite neutral in colors like a very light shade colors because it helps in defining personal like are you need that personality.

✓ Well, I prefer clothes that are quite neutral in colour, like very light shades, because they help define my personality and suit the image I want.

Errors: 'the clothes which is'—'clothes' plural needs 'that are' and 'colour' spelling consistency. 'a very light shade colors' mixes singular and plural; use 'very light shades'. 'helps in defining personal like are you need that personality' is ungrammatical and unclear; replace with 'help define my personality and suit the image I want'. Suggestion: use plural agreement, correct relative clause, and clear phrasing.