Clothing— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Be more natural and precise: use correct nouns (e.g., trousers/shorts) and grammar. Start with a clear topic sentence, then add one specific reason or brief example. Keep it within 2–3 sentences and avoid repeating 'comfortable'.

예시: I usually wear casual clothes, such as T-shirts and trousers, because they are comfortable. For example, on warm days I prefer cotton T-shirts since they keep me cool and are easy to move in.

제안: Avoid repetition and improve grammar. Give a concise topic sentence stating your preference, then add one clear reason with a linking word (because/so). Use varied vocabulary instead of repeating 'comfortable'.

예시: I prefer comfortable, casual clothes rather than smart attire because they let me move freely and suit my daily activities. For instance, I often choose loose-fit shirts and jeans because they’re breathable and practical.

제안: Make your response clearer and correct awkward phrases. State your overall habit, then specify exceptions with a linking phrase (however/although/when). Give a short example of an occasion when you wouldn’t wear a T‑shirt.

예시: Yes, I like wearing T‑shirts and wear them most of the time. However, when I attend formal events or important meetings, I prefer to wear a shirt or blazer to look more presentable.

제안: Improve sentence structure and tense usage. Start with a clear negation, then explain briefly why, using correct past tense for the example. Avoid unnecessary repetition and correct 'nude shade' if you mean 'neutral colours'.

예시: No, I don’t spend much time choosing clothes because I usually stick to neutral colours. For example, last week I bought a shirt in less than a minute because I had already decided at home to choose a grey one.

제안: Be specific: say what you wear on weekdays and what you wear on weekends, and use a linking word to compare. One or two short sentences are enough, with concrete examples of garments or activities.

예시: Yes, I dress differently: on weekdays I wear smart-casual clothes like shirts and chinos for work, while on weekends I prefer relaxed outfits such as jeans and hoodies when I meet friends.

제안: Use clearer vocabulary ('neutral' or 'pastel' instead of repeating 'nude shades') and avoid subjective phrases like 'I am not looking good'—explain why instead. Provide one specific example of a colour and where you wear it.

예시: I prefer neutral colours, such as beige, grey and navy, because they suit my skin tone and are easy to mix. For example, I often wear a beige sweater to work because it looks smart and matches many outfits.

× I usually wear lower and T-shirt because in that type of clothes I feel comfortable.

✓ I usually wear trousers and T-shirts because in that type of clothing I feel comfortable.

The phrase 'lower' is incorrect for clothing; use 'trousers' or 'pants' (noun). 'T-shirt' should be plural when speaking generally: 'T-shirts'. 'That type of clothes' is ungrammatical; use 'that type of clothing' (uncountable) or 'those types of clothes'. Also 'in that type of clothing' is more natural. Suggestion: use correct clothing nouns and match singular/plural and uncountable forms.

× I usually wear comfortable clothes because in comfortable clothes I don't feel uncomfortable or feel hot.

✓ I usually wear comfortable clothes because in comfortable clothes I don't feel uncomfortable or hot.

The repetition 'feel uncomfortable or feel hot' is redundant; remove the second 'feel' to make the sentence concise. Also ensure present simple 'don't feel' correctly matches habitual action. Suggestion: avoid unnecessary repetition and keep parallel structure: 'don't feel uncomfortable or hot'.

× Yes of course most of the time I wear the T-shirts but whenever I go outside or for on or any occasion I don't wear T-shirts.

✓ Yes, of course most of the time I wear T-shirts, but whenever I go out or attend any occasion I don't wear T-shirts.

Remove the definite article 'the' before 'T-shirts' when speaking generally. 'Go outside or for on' is ungrammatical; correct phrasings are 'go out' or 'attend an occasion'. Maintain parallel structure and comma before 'but'. Suggestion: use 'go out' for leaving home and 'attend' for events; omit unnecessary articles with plural nouns used generally.

× No, I don't spend a lot of time to choose clothes because I only buy the clothes in nude shade. For example, I go last last week to buy clothes.

✓ No, I don't spend a lot of time choosing clothes because I only buy clothes in nude shades. For example, I went shopping last week.

After 'spend time' use the gerund 'choosing' not 'to choose'. 'The clothes' and 'nude shade' are awkward; use 'clothes in nude shades' or 'nude-colored clothes'. 'I go last last week' mixes tenses and repeats 'last'; use simple past 'I went' and natural collocation 'went shopping last week'. Suggestion: use gerunds after 'spend time' and correct past tense for completed actions.

× I pick up the clothes only in 15 seconds because from home I decide the colour and the choice first.

✓ I pick out clothes in only 15 seconds because I decide the color and my choice at home first.

Use 'pick out' rather than 'pick up' when selecting clothes. 'Only in 15 seconds' should be 'in only 15 seconds' for natural word order. 'From home I decide' is awkward; 'I decide ... at home' is natural. 'The colour and the choice' is redundant; 'the color and my choice' or 'the color and style' is clearer. Suggestion: use correct phrasal verbs and place 'only' before the time expression.

× Yes, of course I wear different type of clothes on weekends or weekdays.

✓ Yes, of course I wear different types of clothes on weekends and weekdays.

'Different type of clothes' should be plural: 'different types of clothes' or 'different kinds of clothes'. Use 'and' rather than 'or' when contrasting weekdays with weekends. Suggestion: make 'type' plural when referring to multiple kinds and use correct conjunction.

× I like nude shades because in nude shades I feel comfortable and look gorgeous but in bright colours I am not looking good.

✓ I like nude shades because in nude shades I feel comfortable and look gorgeous, but in bright colors I don't look good.

Change 'in bright colours I am not looking good' to 'I don't look good' to use the simple present for a general statement. 'Am not looking good' is awkward and suggests a temporary continuous state. Also add a comma before 'but' to join the clauses. Suggestion: use simple present for general truths and natural negation 'don't look good'.

× So most of the time I wear the nude shades.

✓ So most of the time I wear nude shades.

When speaking generally about a category, omit the definite article 'the' before plural 'nude shades'. 'The nude shades' would refer to specific shades already mentioned; here general statement needs no article. Suggestion: drop unnecessary articles with plural, general nouns.